taaweel-e-ba'eed

TLK · October 23, 2012, 7:06pm

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Oh oh can I post a shair too. So true today

Aa gaya ain laRaa'i main jab waqt-e-namaz
na koi banda raha, na koi banda nawaaz

KKF · October 23, 2012, 7:10pm

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are nahiiN baba, tanz nahiiN kiyaa...achaanak aapko is forum meN josh o Kharosh ke saath dekh kar lagaa shaayad aapkaa rujHaan ab Urdu adab kii taraf baRhaa hai is liye postings kii haiN...yeh to ek Khush aayind baat hai! :)

muzmaHil ho gaye qawaa, "Ghalib!"
wo 'anaasir meN ai'tadaal kahaaN!

P_G · October 23, 2012, 7:11pm

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wow.. ap to baray shaair niklay

yeh pehla misra khud banaaya hay ?

PS > mujhay abi bhi shak hay koi samjh jaye k app nay kia jawab diya hay : P

TLK · October 23, 2012, 7:14pm

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Nahi PG, oosee nazam ke do mukhtalif ash’aar ke misray jor diye thay

Aa gaya ain laRaa’i main jab waqt-e-namaz
Qibla roo ho ke zameen bos hui quom-e-hijaaz

ek hee saf main kharay ho gaye mehmood o ayaaz
na koi banda raha, na koi banda nawaaz

TLK · October 23, 2012, 7:14pm

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I think first verse has 'agar' and not 'jab'

P_G · October 23, 2012, 7:15pm

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joke of the day

KKF · October 23, 2012, 7:16pm

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pahla misr'a kuchh yuN hai:
**
aa gayaa ai'n laRaaii meN AGAR waqt-e-namaaz**

aur pooraa band kuchh yuN hai:

aa gayaa ai'n laRaaii meN agar waqt-e-namaaz
**qibla-roo ho ke zamiiN_bos huii qaum-e-Hijaaz
ek hii saf meN khaRe ho gaye MeHmood o 'Ayaaz
na koii banda rahaa, na koii banda_navaaz

banda_o_saaHib O moHtaaj_o_Ghanii ek huye
terii sarkaar meN pahoNche to sabhii ek huye!**

subHaan Allah...kia umda dars-e-masaavaat hai...subHaan Allah! :)

KKF · October 23, 2012, 7:17pm

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phir bhii aapko haNsii nahiiN aayii? lol

P_G · October 23, 2012, 7:17pm

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manay yeh nazam nahi perhe bus last one wala suna tha

app nay koi jora idher ka udher …i m confuse now

TLK · October 23, 2012, 7:17pm

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Taweel Baeed hai, mushkil se samajh aaygee doosron ko

Aceones · October 23, 2012, 7:18pm

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not sure, lekin shaid shair ka ishara is taraf ho sakta hay

RASOOLALLAH ki hadees-e-mubarika hay, k namaz esay parho jesay tum ALLAH ko dekh rahay ho, agar tum usay nahi dekh rahay, to wo to dekh hee raha hay.

namaz main khushu’ ka hukum hay, khushu’ esa k jesay hum ALLAH SWT ko dekh rahay hoon, dekhnay k liye nigah chahye, wo nigah na ho to khushu’ nahi, aur uski phir koi qaza nahi.

lekin namaz namaz ki khud ibadat k dor par to qaza hay

TLK · October 23, 2012, 7:18pm

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haan, idhar ka oodhr jor ke naya shair bana liya. Aaj kal ke dor main kitna sach hai mera shair, right ?

TLK · October 23, 2012, 7:21pm

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BTW, this is Allama Iqbal's famous 'Shikwa'

TLK · October 23, 2012, 7:23pm

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Shukriya. I caught that myself in post #65. Thanks for reminding

P_G · October 23, 2012, 7:23pm

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nice post ..and bohat ache koshish hay ..lakin shair main yeh tasbeeh nahi hai

positive or negetive?

TLK · October 23, 2012, 7:26pm

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Shaa'ir mosoof farma rahay hain ke namazon kee fikar chorain aur aankh matakkay pe dil lagaain.

toba toba.

Aceones · October 23, 2012, 7:27pm

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phir shair agar W11 wali nigahoon ki bat kar raha hay to behtar hoga shair khud hee tashreeh bhee karday

P_G · October 23, 2012, 7:29pm

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yeh shaair nahi ..App keh rahay hain ...

PS >app ko waqyee samjh nahi aya ?

P_G · October 23, 2012, 7:30pm

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had ho gayee ...app ko mujh say aysay shairoon ki umeed hay?? : O

TLK · October 23, 2012, 7:34pm

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Nahi. BUt is it hinting towards Waqiya-e-Miraaj?