taaweel-e-ba'eed

[Aceones]

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taaweel-e-baa’eed ki aik aur example allama iqbal ka wo shair hay jo aapnay kinzz walay thread main post kiya tha

aye taayer-e-laahoti us rizq say maot achi
jis rizq say aati ho parwaaz main ko-taahi

[TLK]

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@Khalil KhaaN FaaKhta

vaise kisii ne abhii tak “taaveel-e-ba’eed” kaa matlab nahiiN bataayaa!

‘door kee koRee lanaa’?

wo kya shair hai

oos zulf pe bhapti shab-e-dejoor ki soojhi
andhay ko andheray main bari door ki soojhi

waisy what is shab-e-dejoor?

[KKF]

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@TLK

‘door kee koRee lanaa’?

wo kya shair hai

oos zulf pe bhapti shab-e-dejoor ki soojhi
andhay ko andheray main bari door ki soojhi

waisy what is shab-e-dejoor?

shab-e-daijoor means dark nights…andherii raat…

also means siyaah chehraa which is an implied meaning.

[P_G]

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@TLK

bus, hamaari company main rahian gee tou aisee hee ilmi baatain seekhain gee.

ilmi or FILMI : P

@Aceones

taaweel-e-baa’eed ki aik aur example allama iqbal ka wo shair hay jo aapnay kinzz walay thread main post kiya tha

aye taayer-e-laahoti us rizq say maot achi
jis rizq say aati ho parwaaz main ko-taahi

haan lakin is ka jawab to bata diya tha na..yahan new one lana hay

@TLK

‘door kee koRee lanaa’?

wo kya shair hai

oos zulf pe bhapti shab-e-dejoor ki soojhi
andhay ko andheray main bari door ki soojhi

waisy what is shab-e-dejoor?

woh rat jis main chand na niklay ..kaale siyaah … i think..jissay amawas ki raat bhi kehtay hain

taaweel e baeed ka mutlub

mushab’bh or mushab’bah bihi main jo wajah-e-tashbeeh paye gayee us main bohat sare taweelat aate hoon

asan lafzoon main

[TLK]

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@P_G

taaweel e baeed ka mutlub

mushab’bh or mushab’bah bihi main jo wajah-e-tashbeeh paye gayee us main bohat sare taweelat aate hoon

asan lafzoon main

mashallah, yeah asaan lafzon main samjhaya hai?

agar mushkil main samjhati tou allah hee malik thaa hamatra phir

[P_G]

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@TLK

mashallah, yeah asaan lafzon main samjhaya hai?

agar mushkil main samjhati tou allah hee malik thaa hamatra phir

app ko kia samjh nahi aya ?

[ninja_hattori]

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great thread…mazaa agaya parhke…:k:

TLK bhai,P_G,Aceones! aur kkf bhai aap logo ki discussion

[bao_bihari]

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@TLK

On ke zamaanay main bhi eik Alataf Hussain thay. Hali takhallaus thaa oon ka.

Ab KHali Takhalus kartay hay, bhai shairi karay ga tau karachi walo ki jan azab main a jai ge.

@Aceones

taaweel-e-baa’eed ki aik aur example allama iqbal ka wo shair hay jo aapnay kinzz walay thread main post kiya tha

aye taayer-e-laahoti us rizq say maot achi
jis rizq say aati ho parwaaz main ko-taahi

Bhai ye Taer e lahori hay-Ye shair nawaz shareef per hay

@TLK

‘door kee koRee lanaa’?

wo kya shair hai

oos zulf pe bhapti shab-e-dejoor ki soojhi
andhay ko andheray main bari door ki soojhi

waisy what is shab-e-dejoor?

Zara is shair ka pass e manzar (background) bhi baqi logo ko bata dain, mazaidar waqiyah hay

[muqawwee123]

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@bao_bihari

Ab KHali Takhalus kartay hay, bhai shairi karay ga tau karachi walo ki jan azab main a jai ge.

Bhai ye Taer e lahori hay-Ye shair nawaz shareef per hay

**Zara is shair ka pass e manzar (background) bhi baqi logo ko bata dain, mazaidar waqiyah hay **

aap bata den

[bao_bihari]

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^mujhay sharam aa rahi hay

waisay it is about some blind poet who was given a *tarah(theme) *and he started off with uss zuulf ko andhiray main… another shair quickly completed the next shair with this, andhay ko andhairay main…

Itni si baat thee

[muqawwee123]

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@bao_bihari

^mujhay sharam aa rahi hay

waisay it is about some blind poet who was given a *tarah(theme) *and he started off with uss zuulf ko andhiray main… another shair quickly completed the next shair with this, andhay ko andhairay main…

Itni si baat thee

ye konsi zulf hai, jis pe aap sharma rahe hain Khul ke bolen

[bao_bihari]

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^ bata tau diya, sharam tay tajasus paida kernay kay liye thee.

[KKF]

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@muqawwee123

ye konsi zulf hai, jis pe aap sharma rahe hain Khul ke bolen

lol…yeh zulf-e-naa-rasaa kii baat hai…rasaaii ke liye naabeenaa saaHab ko baRii door kii soojhii!

vaise, ek kahaavat aisii Hindi men bhii hai:
**
saawan ke andhe ko haraa hii haraa soojhe! **

[TLK]

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@bao_bihari

Ab KHali Takhalus kartay hay, bhai shairi karay ga tau karachi walo ki jan azab main a jai ge.

Aray, aap ne bhai kee shairi nahi suni? CHalain aap kiya yaad karain ge, for your reading pleasure, here it is.

Poetry

[TLK]

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@ninja_hattori

TLK bhai,P_G,Aceones! aur kkf bhai aap logo ki discussion

Saday naal ra’o ge tou aish karo ge
zindagi ke saaray mazay cash karo ge

[KKF]

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@TLK

Aray, aap ne bhai kee shairi nahi suni? CHalain aap kiya yaad karain ge, for your reading pleasure, here it is.

Poetry

parsoN Bhai ne interview diyaa Jasmin Manzoor saaHiba ko jis men unhoN ne Qur’aan e Paak kii tilaavat aise kii jaise vo English kii taqreer karte haiN [typical Bhai kaa andaaz] aur sone pe sohaaga yeh k uskii tafseer bhii farmaayiui…Allah raHm kare saame’een aur muqallideen par…aameen

[P_G]

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here is another one .

**namazain jub qaza hoon tub ada hoon

nigahain jub qaza hoon kub ada hoon

**not exaclty in taweel e baeed context .lakin nigahoon or namazoon main kia munasbat hay ..is ko hal kerain

[STA]

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@P_G

here is another one .

**namazain jub qaza hoon tub ada hoon

nigahain jub qaza hoon kub ada hoon

**not exaclty in taweel e baeed context .lakin nigahoon or namazoon main kia munasbat hay ..is ko hal kerain

jo ankha ka dekha to qayamat main hi pata chalay ga. ya to aik bohat achi bachi mil jaye gi, ya phir dozakh kay guest banana paray ga.

[KKF]

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@P_G

here is another one .

**namazain jub qaza hoon tub ada hoon

nigahain jub qaza hoon kub ada hoon

**not exaclty in taweel e baeed context .lakin nigahoon or namazoon main kia munasbat hay ..is ko hal kerain

urdu kii koii kitaab hatthe chaRh gaii hai kia?

[P_G]

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@STA

jo ankha ka dekha to qayamat main hi pata chalay ga. ya to aik bohat achi bachi mil jaye gi, ya phir dozakh kay guest banana paray ga.

STA … kia likha hay .?

@Khalil KhaaN FaaKhta

urdu kii koii kitaab hatthe chaRh gaii hai kia?

app tanz kernay kay bajaye jawab per damagh lagaain