Aceones
October 23, 2012, 7:34pm
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Re: taaweel-e-ba'eed
had ho gayee ...app ko mujh say aysay shairoon ki umeed hay?? : O
jiski umeed thi uski tashreeh kardi ooper
itna to samajh aata hay k nigahoon ki qaza nahi hay, lekin kya miss honay ki qaza hay ye nahi samajh aya
huqooq-ul-ibad ki bat hay? ishq-e-majazi hay? aur kya?
P_G
October 23, 2012, 7:35pm
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Re: taaweel-e-ba'eed
Nahi. BUt is it hinting towards Waqiya-e-Miraaj?
nahi bhyee ..thora say namaz or nigaah k concept per ghor kerain .bohat he asaan hay
STA
October 23, 2012, 7:37pm
83
Re: taaweel-e-ba’eed
jab aik na mehram bachi par nazar par jaye to 70 maqbool namazian zaya ho jati hian.
P_G
October 23, 2012, 7:38pm
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Re: taaweel-e-ba'eed
jiski umeed thi uski tashreeh kardi ooper
itna to samajh aata hay k nigahoon ki qaza nahi hay, lekin kya miss honay ki qaza hay ye nahi samajh aya
huqooq-ul-ibad ki bat hay ? ishq-e-majazi hay? aur kya?
yeah now u got it
namaz huqooq ul Allah hay ..is ki qaza ho sakte hay
or nigaah ishara hay huqooq ul ibaad ki teraf .
*Allah huqooq ul Allah muaf ferma dain gay lakin huqooq ul ibaad nahi muaaf fermaain gay
*
TLK
October 23, 2012, 7:41pm
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Re: taaweel-e-ba'eed
yeah now u got it
namaz huqooq ul Allah hay ..is ki qaza ho sakte hay
or nigaah ishara hay huqooq ul ibaad ki teraf .
*Allah huqooq ul Allah muaf ferma dain gay lakin huqooq ul ibaad nahi muaaf fermaain gay
*
Are you sure PG? Nigah aur Huqooqul Ibad main mujhe tou koi link nahi dikhtaa door door tak.
P_G
October 23, 2012, 7:44pm
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Re: taaweel-e-ba'eed
Are you sure PG? Nigah aur Huqooqul Ibad main mujhe tou koi link nahi dikhtaa door door tak.
app shair ka context samjho na qaza or ada kay sath woh laye hain ...
Aceones
October 23, 2012, 7:47pm
87
Re: taaweel-e-ba'eed
yeah now u got it
namaz huqooq ul Allah hay ..is ki qaza ho sakte hay
or nigaah ishara hay huqooq ul ibaad ki teraf .
*Allah huqooq ul Allah muaf ferma dain gay lakin huqooq ul ibaad nahi muaaf fermaain gay
*
taa'weel ka masla to hal hogya, lekin ab bhee meray khyal main first wali tashreeh is say zyada behtar hay
P_G
October 23, 2012, 8:05pm
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Re: taaweel-e-ba'eed
^ may be mere bat ghalat ho ..hamaray teacher nay hamain aysa he samjhaya tha ..is ley mera yehe khiyal tha..khair
yeh shair kis ka hay waysay ?
Aceones
October 23, 2012, 8:08pm
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Re: taaweel-e-ba'eed
aapkay teacher nay agar ye btaya hay to thik hee btaya hoga, main to yunhi tukka mar rha tha
sher to pta nahi kiska hay, molana google bhi kuch madad karnay par tyar nahi hain.
wesay shaer jo bhee hay, most likely usnay ye us hi context main likha hay jismain TLK nay answer diya tha, an tashrih karnay wala iski achi tashrih bhee kar sakta hay, apny zoq kay mutabiq : p
P_G
October 23, 2012, 8:32pm
90
Re: taaweel-e-ba'eed
aapkay teacher nay agar ye btaya hay to thik hee btaya hoga, main to yunhi tukka mar rha tha
sher to pta nahi kiska hay, molana google bhi kuch madad karnay par tyar nahi hain.
wesay shaer jo bhee hay, most likely usnay ye us hi context main likha hay jismain TLK nay answer diya tha, an tashrih karnay wala iski achi tashrih bhee kar sakta hay, apny zoq kay mutabiq : p
dats y i asked yeh shair kis ka hay usee say pata chal jaye ga ..k shaair ka ZOq kaisa tha : P
Re: taaweel-e-ba'eed
is zulf per phabti shab e dejoor ki sojhi
andhey ko andherey meiN buhut door ki soojhi
P_G
October 23, 2012, 9:41pm
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Re: taaweel-e-ba’eed
^ bohat dair ker post kertay kertay
^mujhay sharam aa rahi hay
waisay it is about some blind poet who was given a *tarah(theme) *and he started off with uss zuulf ko andhiray main … another shair quickly completed the next shair with this, andhay ko andhairay main …
Itni si baat thee