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doosr misra tou yaad nahi. Maybe muqawwee can help. But in the context that poet wrote that verse was just amazing. Shows the command on language.
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On ke zamaanay main bhi eik Alataf Hussain thay. Hali takhallaus thaa oon ka.
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muqawwee ka doosra naam google hay kya?
bannay kyun kar, ke hay sab kaar ulta
hum ultay, baat ulti, yaar ulta
edit: fixed after KKF post : p not editing again 
this one reads better
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bane kia baat jab har kaar hai ulTaa
HAM ulTe, BAAT ulTii, YAAR ulTaa
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aap dono coin toss ker ke sahi misra share ker laain please.
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^ google nay dhooka diya warna mainay pehlay post kardiya tha
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meray thread main ultian mat kero plz…:* yukh*
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PG aap ko iss shair ka background pataa hai?
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maiN ne tasHeeH kar dii hai…ab saHeeH ho gayaa hai
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sorry yaaraa…maiN ne bhii Ghalatii kii thii…so maiN ne edit kar dii…ab aap bhii edit kar deN…EDIT ka button kamaal kaa button hai! izzat rakh letaa hai lol 
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nops..kia hai ?
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KKF, it cannot be har Kaar hai ultaa/Yaar Ulta. IT should be Har kaar ultaa/Yaar Ulta
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Shaa’ir ke ek dost thay, Hindu, lekin Urdu ke shaair. Oon ka naam thaa Mehtaab Raye (I am sure it was Roy).
Shair ne oon pe shair likhkha hai, Meh-Taab Raye, teenon lafzon ko ulta likha hai Urdu ke lihaaz se. Meh/Hum Taab/Baat, Raaye/Yaar
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yes…typo…sorry
bane kia baat jab har kaar hai ulTaa
vaise kisii ne abhii tak “taaveel-e-ba’eed” kaa matlab nahiiN bataayaa!
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ye to joke hogya, lekin wo “wrong” wala zyada behtar hay : p
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lol…kabhi kabhaar ‘immitation’ ‘REAL’ se bahtar lagtaa hai lol
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YES, his name was Mahtaab Rai
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wow..mujhay tu is ko samjhnay bhi time laga..bohat interesting hay…kia bat hay ..
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bus, hamaari company main rahian gee tou aisee hee ilmi baatain seekhain gee.