taaweel-e-ba'eed

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:hehe:

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doosr misra tou yaad nahi. Maybe muqawwee can help. But in the context that poet wrote that verse was just amazing. Shows the command on language.

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On ke zamaanay main bhi eik Alataf Hussain thay. Hali takhallaus thaa oon ka.

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muqawwee ka doosra naam google hay kya?

bannay kyun kar, ke hay sab kaar ulta
hum ultay, baat ulti, yaar ulta

edit: fixed after KKF post : p not editing again :/ this one reads better

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bane kia baat jab har kaar hai ulTaa
HAM ulTe, BAAT ulTii, YAAR ulTaa

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aap dono coin toss ker ke sahi misra share ker laain please.

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^ google nay dhooka diya warna mainay pehlay post kardiya tha

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meray thread main ultian mat kero plz...:* yukh*

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PG aap ko iss shair ka background pataa hai?

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maiN ne tasHeeH kar dii hai...ab saHeeH ho gayaa hai

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sorry yaaraa...maiN ne bhii Ghalatii kii thii...so maiN ne edit kar dii....ab aap bhii edit kar deN...EDIT ka button kamaal kaa button hai! izzat rakh letaa hai lol ;)

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nops..kia hai ?

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KKF, it cannot be har Kaar hai ultaa/Yaar Ulta. IT should be Har kaar ultaa/Yaar Ulta

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Shaa'ir ke ek dost thay, Hindu, lekin Urdu ke shaair. Oon ka naam thaa Mehtaab Raye (I am sure it was Roy).

Shair ne oon pe shair likhkha hai, Meh-Taab Raye, teenon lafzon ko ulta likha hai Urdu ke lihaaz se. Meh/Hum Taab/Baat, Raaye/Yaar

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yes...typo...sorry

bane kia baat jab har kaar hai ulTaa

vaise kisii ne abhii tak "taaveel-e-ba'eed" kaa matlab nahiiN bataayaa!

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ye to joke hogya, lekin wo "wrong" wala zyada behtar hay : p

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lol...kabhi kabhaar 'immitation' 'REAL' se bahtar lagtaa hai lol

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YES, his name was Mahtaab Rai

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wow..mujhay tu is ko samjhnay bhi time laga..bohat interesting hay...kia bat hay ..

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bus, hamaari company main rahian gee tou aisee hee ilmi baatain seekhain gee.