Sharing my betukaa pun

[TLK]

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@Pisiform

I didn’t understand the poetry but your voice is really good. You could be a paki version of Morgan Freeman

Much better compliment than what I was called last time; Paki version of Rupaul that is.

[P_G]

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@TLK

Oh yaar, there is nothing explicit in this ghazal. Last shair did not mean what Muqa and you are assuming. Azra Abbas kee shaeree parh parh ke aap dono ka zehen gandaa ho gayaa hai

Lol, actually I have married a Punjabi girl, and she did ask that question

Jazakallah

Thanks Laiha.

So no one liked the 'Zehen dareechay" wala shair. I thought that is the only somewhat decent shair (but glad to know that other shairs are also noteworthy)

i like this one…

[P_G]

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**suggestion (qismat walay shair k ley )
**

tere ik nazr-e-karam, jo ho tera lutf o karam

ban ker Qismat, hatoon ki lakeeroon main uter jaaon ga

[TLK]

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Very nice suggestion PG. I shall make that change

[muqawwee123]

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@Laiha

aww not bad, TLK. I like the last couplet the most.

Tu mujhe laakh qasam de ke main bolon na kabhi
Band honton se bhi shikway tu main kar jaon ga

:k:

ye shayar ki mustaqil mizaji hai ya iss dhitai main sumar kiya jae?

[Laiha]

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@muqawwee123

ye shayar ki mustaqil mizaji hai ya iss dhitai main sumar kiya jae?

Neither. I’d say it’s adaa.

[muqawwee123]

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@Laiha

Neither. I’d say it’s adaa.

adaa to mashooq main hoti hai aashiq main nahin.

[Laiha]

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@muqawwee123

adaa to mashooq main hoti hai aashiq main nahin.

aashiq bhi kisi ka mashooq hota hai

[TS]

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@TLK

So no one liked the 'Zehen dareechay" wala shair. I thought that is the only somewhat decent shair (but glad to know that other shairs are also noteworthy)

I did think that ‘Zehen Dareechy’ and ‘Khwaab kay Aangan’ was a smart combo.

[muqawwee123]

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@Laiha

aashiq bhi kisi ka mashooq hota hai

agar muhabbat yak-tarfa ho to?

[muqawwee123]

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@TS

I did think that ‘Zehen Dareechy’ and ‘Khwaab kay Aangan’ was a smart combo.

As the combination of burqa and ___ in Azra Abbas’s poem

[Laiha]

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@muqawwee123

agar muhabbat yak-tarfa ho to?

Koi app pe marta ho. app kisi aur pe marte hon. everyone is loved by someone. No?

[TLK]

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@muqawwee123

As the combination of burqa and ___ in Azra Abbas’s poem

That is the problem with TS. if my ghazal had words like that, he would’ve asked me to PM him the ghazal

[muqawwee123]

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@Laiha

Koi app pe marta ho. app kisi aur pe marte hon. everyone is loved by someone. No?

yani kisi ne hamen bhi

[Laiha]

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@muqawwee123

yani kisi ne hamen bhi

dil behlaane ko Ghalib yeh khayal acha hai

[muqawwee123]

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@Laiha

dil behlaane ko Ghalib yeh khayal acha hai

jealous log

[Laiha]

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@muqawwee123

jealous log

jealousy kaisi? kisi ko hum na mile, koi hume na mila. dastoor-e-zamana yehi hai.

[muqawwee123]

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@Laiha

jealousy kaisi? kisi ko hum na mile, koi hume na mila. dastoor-e-zamana yehi hai.

khushgumaniyon ka jungle

[Laiha]

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@muqawwee123

khushgumaniyon ka jungle

be tuki baaten mat karen

[muqawwee123]

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@Laiha

be tuki baaten mat karen

maine to post 37 main kahi hui baat ko rephrase kiya hai