~ qalem ko ab-e-baqa de~

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

_Masoom_Muskaan February 21, 2008, 6:18pm 1

qalam ko aab-e-baqa day.. to koi shair kahooN
woh mujh ko dard naya day.. to koi shair kahooN
jo shehr bhar ka maseeha bana hua hai abhi..
woh mujh ko mujh say mila day.. to koi shair kahooN

By Mehroo

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bheegiyaad February 21, 2008, 6:19pm 2

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:k: nice

Shab-e-Hijar February 21, 2008, 6:24pm 3

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Naiiceeee :k:

muncho February 21, 2008, 6:28pm 4

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hmm lakin maseeha kaam tu nahi milna meelana jahan tuk mairee N-maaloomaat ka taaluq hay

Aryaan February 22, 2008, 2:17am 5

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Nice one Muskaan(Dande waali)...

muddii February 22, 2008, 4:21am 6

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Khairiyat Tu Hai MM yeh kaisay mushkil mushkil shair likhnay shroo kar diay tum nay................lagata hai JJW say tution lay rahee hoo ajj kal:)

P.S: Nice choice:)

Daanie February 22, 2008, 10:20am 7

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buhut khoob :)

Jhanjharewali February 23, 2008, 4:30am 8

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tabhi toh inna aa'la qalam pesh kiya hei Mus Mus ne!:biggthumb

muddii February 23, 2008, 4:45am 9

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MM Hai Kahan......................lagta hai uss ka danda khoo giya hai talash kar rahee hai:)

_Masoom_Muskaan February 23, 2008, 7:31pm 10

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thnkooo seb ka :ASA:

Shab-e-Hijar February 23, 2008, 7:46pm 11

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Think of aheem aheem and aheem aheem is here

_Masoom_Muskaan February 23, 2008, 7:50pm 12

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hae aheem aheem na kero sedeh reha apna nam bata do :ASA:

Starlight February 24, 2008, 2:50am 13

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buhat khub.

How to grow tall?

Koyal February 24, 2008, 4:01am 14

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nice 1 mehroo ;)

muddii February 24, 2008, 5:29am 15

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Yeh Sheetan Ka Zikr Kis Nay Kiya?

padfoot February 24, 2008, 6:27am 16

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Itni khoobsorat sharing :ASA:

_Masoom_Muskaan February 24, 2008, 11:33am 17

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uno ne apna zikr ap he kia:cb:

babri February 24, 2008, 2:44pm 18

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really nice MM.

immu February 25, 2008, 5:19pm 19

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Kisi ka Zikre khair aa to gia naa...

NikamiJano February 25, 2008, 9:17pm 20

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nice 1 masoom lakin khud ko samj maiN b aya ya nahi :p