"Poet Of The Month December- - - Poet Of GS"

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Udaas si is shaam meiN ye saath aakhri hey
hum donoN jaantey they ye mulaaqaat aakhri hey

meiN ney kaha kuch to kaho ke aaj aey jaan-e-man
jholi meiN apni lamhoN ki ye kheiraat aakhri hey

wo kehney lagi kehney ko kuch bacha nahi magar
laboN pe ab bhi lagta hey koi baat aakhri hey

** meiN ney kaha ab aaNkhoN meiN koi aks nahi raha
lagta hey jesey zindagi ki ye sa'aat aakhri hey **

wo falak ko tak ke karney lagi mojzoN ki baat
meiN sochney laga umeed ki ye soghaat aakhri hey

meiN ney kaha ab aas ka naya kheil kya kheileiN
ke khuwaahishoN ki bisaat par ye maat aakhri hey

** wo kehney lagi aaj lagta hey har taara sog'waar
jesey chaandni aur chaand ki ye raat aakhri hey! **

By: Amal

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yea Sheal May be App ki inn Koshishon ko Sarahtay hoay Amal Wapis aa jaiyn:)

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Umeed pay duniya qayam hai :). i hope k wo is ko parh rahay hooN. yahan na sahi atleast koi mail hi ker dain :(

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app link send karo na un ko:)

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haan link send kernay ka idea acha hai , lakin kia maloom wo mail bhi open kernaiN ya na karaiN :(

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han ...........pata nahin Dear............App un kay kisee Friend say kah kar dekho............:)

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***Shab-e-intizaar ney aek raat mujhey khaab kuch aesey dikha deeye
meiN ney farsh-e-umeed-e-wisaal par gulaab nazar ke bichaa deeye

meiN ney musarratoN ki dukaan sey kuch muskuraahateiN udhaar leeN
terey laot aaney ka pataa chala to meiN ney saarey aaNsu chupa deeye

tujhey poojney ke eyvaz sanam so sazaaeiN shirk ki milieeN mujhey
merey ‘zummey’ jo jo hisaab they meiN ney ik ik kar ke ‘chuka’ deeye

dil-e-na-muraad yuN heraan hey ke teri chaahatoN ko kya huwa
kiuN darbaar-e-rasm-o-rivaaj meiN sar mohabbatoN ney jhuka deeye!

merey tasav’vuroN ki asaas meiN meri hasratoN ke libaas meiN
jo bhi aarzu ke chiraagh they sab haqeeqatoN ney bujha deeye

suno basti waalo kahaaN chaley tum uttha ke apna bacha-kucha
wo jo panchiyoN ke makaan they wo to aaNdhioN ney giraa deeye

By: Amal<!-- / message -->***

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fiker not unhiN anay jany ki adat hia it's not first time :)
it happen before once or twice :)

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hmm............
acha ye kab ki baat hai Koyal????????

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I was gonna post this :teary2:

gandi baci koyal :smash:

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**Terey tabsarey heiN be-khabar meri daastaan-e-hayaat sey tu keh raha ha dil jisey, wo meri khahishoN ka mazaar hey tera shukriya aey tabeeb-e-jaaN, ye khaloos apni jaga magar teri masihaai bhi kya karey, mera dard hi be-shumaar hey merey raastoN meiN jo aa gaya, merey qaafley ko jo kha gaya wo toofaN to kab ka guzar gaya, par dil meiN ab tak gubaar hey aey meharbaan dost sun, meri mushkiloN ko samajh ke meiN teri mohabbatoN ka kya karooN, kisey dil pe ab ikhtiyar hey! naey mosamoN ko bulao mat ke mujhey khusbuoN ki talab nahi meri rah rehney do khaar khaar, merey leeye to yehi bahaar hey jo nafratoN sey jhulas gaya usey dil sey saarey duwaeiN do par us sitam-zada ka kya kareiN jo mohabbatoN ka shikaar hey! By: Amal**

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wo story suni ho gi aap nay shair aaya shair aaya. or kabhi kabhi waqayee shair aa bhi jata hai :)

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aik dfa 2001 maiN aur 2 dafa aur huwa ap ko phir batiey ghi

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hum sub bhi to chlay gaye thay wapis aye to old id's use hi nahi kiye :D

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Ok chalo bata dayna…bhool na jana Koyal:hugz:

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Haww…ye kab ki baat hai shabbo:faizy:

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:konfused:
hay Sheal Hum Shair ki baat kar rahay hain ya Amal ki:aq:

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3/4 saal purani hogi tum say mane apna ina cute nick hi use nahi kya :hinna:

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:hugz:
koi baat nahin …ab kar lo use…i m thinking to make a new ID:konfused:
mein apni Id say tang aa gaee hon:teary2: