jab door koi Koyal bolay

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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jab ankh main ansoo aatay haiN jab dil ki dharkan roti hai jab door kahi'n sannatay maiN ik chaap si koi hoti hai jab man main ansoo girtay hain dukh hanstay hain , dukh hanstay hain jab door koi *koyal* bolay jab biphri mojai'n mil ja'ien jab pairr se patta gir jaye jab raat k saaye dhalte haiN aur panchi pankh andhaire maiN ghar lot kay aya karte haiN phir hum jese deewanay log prem ki aag main jalte hain *dukh hanstay hain , dukh hanstay hain* jab takya aksar raato'n ko raazo'N ka bojh uthata hai ankhoN ka bojh ghatata hai jab waqt k koray kaaghaz per bas rang bharna rehta hai aur sang chalna rehta hai phir apne sath samandar paar door kahi'n ja baste haiN *dukh hanstay hain , dukh hanstay hain*
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Re: jab door koi Koyal bolay

nice :k:

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Re: jab door koi Koyal bolay

nice :k:

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Re: jab door koi Koyal bolay

Aap door ja ke kiuN bolti ho, sab to idhar hi heiN ;) Nice poem by the way :)

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Re: jab door koi Koyal bolay

ullujii per be koi shair ya poem keh deya karin :(

ps: very nice

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paas walooN ko sunaiy kam kam daita aur bohat dairi baad is leay:halo:

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Re: jab door koi Koyal bolay

beautiful :lajawab:

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Re: jab door koi Koyal bolay

ah nice :k:

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Re: jab door koi Koyal bolay

Nice..

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nice one Koyal :-)

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thanks Gul :)

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Re: jab door koi Koyal bolay

marvellous, ms. koyal. cool!

My auntie has a problem..
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Re: jab door koi Koyal bolay

Nice post:)

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Re: jab door koi Koyal bolay

wah jee wah, kia nai books aai hain Pakistan say?

jab takya aksar raato'n ko
raazo'N ka bojh uthata hai
ankhoN ka bojh ghatata hai
jab waqt k koray kaaghaz per
bas rang bharna rehta hai
aur sang chalna rehta hai
phir apne sath samandar paar
door kahi'n ja baste haiN
dukh hanstay hain , dukh hanstay hain

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Re: jab door koi Koyal bolay

nahi tu ap ka wait akr rehi thei k ap gaye ho tu laa'oo gay gift but ap b darpook ho na :p

"Photoshopped"
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When the tears flow,
the heart quickens,
and it's all silence
far off under a shadow,
the heart weeps
and the pains laugh
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then the lovers like us
burn in the flames of love
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and get together in love,
go far across the oceans,
and forever live in love.

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Re: jab door koi Koyal bolay

very nice :k:

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nice work koyal!

Funny nicks
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Re: jab door koi Koyal bolay

gud translate:)

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:blush: