Hindi poetry is full of thought provoking and catchy dohay (two-liners poetry). Kabir Das, Khan e Khanan (Rahim) are famous poets of dohe. Lets share some of dohe and discuss the thought behind them in this thread.
I start with this:
Tulsi aisi preet na kar jasi lambi khajoor.
Dhoop lage to chhaon nahin bhook lage to phal duur
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Aa Piya moray Nainan Mein, main Palk Dhamp Tohe Loon.
Naa Mein Dekhoon aur Ko, Naa Tohe Dekhan Doon
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Kajal darun kirkara surma saha na jaye
Jin nainan me Pee base duja kon samaye
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Duniya badi bawri pathar poojne jae
ghar ki chakki koi na pooje jis ka peesa khae
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Rahiman Dhaga Prem Ka, Mat Todo Chatkaya,
Toote Se Phir Na Jude, Jude Gaanth PaRi Jaaye
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Mangan maran samaan hai, na mange kabhi bheekh
Mangan se marna bhala, yeh satguru ki seekh
LP
September 7, 2013, 8:25am
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Ye wala tou school days se yaad hai…
Kaal Kare So Aaj Kar, Aaj Kare So Ub
Pal Mein Parlay Hoyegi, Bahuri Kareyga Kub
LP
September 7, 2013, 8:27am
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Another I remember from school ;
Bada Hua To Kya Hua, Jaise Ped Khajoor
Panthi Ko Chaya Nahin, Phal Laage Atidoor
jiia
September 7, 2013, 9:04am
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Shram se hi sab kuch hot hai, bin shram mile kuch nahi
*Seedhe ungli ghee jamo, kabsu nikase nahi
*Efforts can accomplish everything. Nothing can be accomplished without taking efforts. A purified butter that is frozen cannot be taken out with a straight finger
by KABIR DAS
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Another I remember from school ;
Bada Hua To Kya Hua, Jaise Ped Khajoor
Panthi Ko Chaya Nahin, Phal Laage Atidoor
It seems a variation of this one:
Tulsi aisi preet na kar jasi lambi khajoor.
Dhoop lage to chhaon nahin bhook lage to phal duur
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Shram se hi sab kuch hot hai, bin shram mile kuch nahi
*Seedhe ungli ghee jamo, kabsu nikase nahi
*Efforts can accomplish everything. Nothing can be accomplished without taking efforts. A purified butter that is frozen cannot be taken out with a straight finger
by KABIR DAS
This reminds me Bulleh Shah’s line (though that is not a doha):
jhaag bina dudh nai jamda
paawe kaRh kaRh laal hoye
LP
September 7, 2013, 9:46am
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Kabira Khara Bazaar Mein, Mange Sabki Khair
Na Kahu Se Dosti, Na Kahu Se Bair
LP
September 7, 2013, 9:47am
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I learnt the other one in school.
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Kabira Khara Bazaar Mein, Mange Sabki Khair
Na Kahu Se Dosti, Na Kahu Se Bair
Seems Sain Baba was inspired by this philosophy… Sab ka bhala sab ki khair
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please write these in roman. take your time. one by one. no hurry
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LP
September 7, 2013, 10:25am
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First one :
Raheman dhaga prem ko , mat toRo chatkaye
Totay se phir na milay , milay GaNth paR jaye !
Raheman kehte haiN k prem ka dhaga na toRo. Totne par phir nahi juReyga aur juReyga tou gaNth paR jayegi.
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First one :
Raheman dhaga prem ko , mat toRo chatkaye
Totay se phir na milay , milay GaNth paR jaye !
Raheman kehte haiN k prem ka dhaga na toRo. Totne par phir nahi juReyga aur juReyga tou gaNth paR jayegi.
Isn’t this the same though incorporated by Gulzar is this Nazm?
Gaanth agar pad jae to phir rishte ho ya dori
laakh karen koshish khulne main waqt to lagta hai
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LP
September 7, 2013, 10:30am
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Second one :
Gahi sarnagati ram ki , bhawsagar k nao (I’m not sure about the alphabet after ‘bha’ & ‘na’ )
Raheman jagat udhar ko , aur na koO upaye !
Ram nam l nao he bhawsagar se par lagati hai. Udhar ka aur koe upaye (solution) nahi hai.