Contribute your poetic sense : = Poetic Image

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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It looks ok to me GN looking at the theme and the broader picture of the image.... anyway....

Here is one more from me:

Shaayad TumhaiN Naseeb ho Aye Khushtagaan-e-Shab
Ruu-e-Uf'uq pe Subhu kaY aasaaaaaaar dekhnaaaaaa

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One more that comes to mind:

Kiss dais maiN yeh qaafla-e-Waqt Ruka hai
Aa'riz ke ujaaley haiN na ZulfoN ki ghata hai<O:p</O:p

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Phir uss ke baad na raasta na raah-guzar mile
Hadh-e-nigaah talak dasht-e-bekinaar mile

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^
Khoob :k:

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Wow great AQ:)


Aaaaaaaaahhhh yaas ka manzir paint kar diya Daanie:)

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carvan, opposite directions journies, birds vs. humans. night dusk time. nostalgia about getting home. end of the journey. slow pace. less day light.
sadness and gloom.
a sense of hope for tomorrow if the travel is continued and becomes successful.

best,

Dushwari

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Nice prose to describe the picture Dushwari:)

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hmmm describes well about the image. Any sher you can remember along those thoughts?

Dedicate a song OR share a song with special meaning to you
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this is a good idea AQ...this should be done weekly or something
with an image :)

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Just trying to keep the tradition going that Amal brought into :)

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parind aur insaan, dono per aik safar kee tehveel
apney gher seye doori, akser umr aik saza taveel

best,
Dushwari

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nice efforts here :rose:

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^how abt smethng from u sid?

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Yes SID.. where is your contribution???

ok, here is one more that comes to mind:

Raabta laaakh saheeh qaafla-e-saalaar kaY saath
Hum ko chalna hai magar waqt ki raftaar kaY saath

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Meri Taraf Se Bhi Shair Aa Jaye Ga Bas Mein Concentrate Nahi Kar Paa Raha Now a days ! like aap ke matluba no se jawaab mosuuul Nahi ho raha Barah-e-Meharbani Kuch Dair Baad koshish kijiye :rotfl:

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^ ha ha ha

we will wait for your awesome contribution :)

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Aq waise picture naqli lagti hai I mean photoshoped...is it??

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From My Side

http://www.paklinks.com/gsmedia/files/14734/desert_night.jpg

Qayaamat Tak Uray Gi Dil Se Uth Kar Khaak Aankhon Tak
Isii Rastey Gayaa Hai Hasrato’n Ka Qaafilaa Ho Kar

beIng lonEly !!! siD !!!

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might be… but that’s besides the point and intention of this thread :slight_smile:

Awesome:k:

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Three ashaa'r of Ahmed Faraz:

Waqt nay woh Khaak uRaai hai kaY dil kay dasht say
Qaaflay guzraY haiN phir bhi naqsh-e-paa koi naheeN

Khud ko yooN mehsoor kar baiTha hooN apni zaat maiN
ManzilaiN chaaaaaroN taraf haiN, raaaasta koi naheeN

Kaisay raastoN say chalaY aur kis jagah pahuNchay ‘Faraz’
Yaa hujoooom-e-dostaaaN thaa, saaath yaa koi naheeN