Contribute your poetic sense : = Poetic Image

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Share of what could be ONE sher that you think would describe the best feelings of this image?

http://www.paklinks.com/gsmedia/files/14734/desert_night.jpg

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interesting thread :k:
lemme think abt it :emmy:

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meray mind mein yehi sher aaya :bummer:
ajeeb morr pay thehra hai kafla dil ka
sakoon dhoondnay niklay thay wahshatein bhi gaean

How many of you...
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Hamarey Saffar Mein Hamaray Sath Bas Dil-jAlli Se Fiza Nahi
Kuch TiShnagii Ke Sa’atien, Kuch UdaaSiyOun Kai Lamhey Bhi HAin … :hinna:

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azaab yeh bhi kisi aur par nahi aya
k aik umr chalay aur ghar nahi aya

How many of you...
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:k:

Feminine Charms
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:konfused: Can it be **TWO ** shair :smiley:
kisi kalli nay bhi daikha na aankh bher k mujhey
guzer gai jars-e-gul udaas ker k mujhey
mein so raha tha kisi yaad k shabistaan mein
jaga k chor gaey kaflay sahar k mujhey

ps. nice one deadsoul :k:

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hum logh samandar kay bichray huway sahil hain
is par bhi tanhaye us par bhi tanhaye :(

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Safar Me Dhoop To Hogi, Jo Chal Sako To Chalo
Sabhi Hain Bheed Mein Tum Bhee Nikal Sako To Chalo

Kisi Ke Waaste Raahen Kahan Badalti HaiN
Tum Apne Aap Ko Khud Hi Badal Sako To Chalo

Yahan Kisi Ko Koi Raasta Nahin Deta ...
Mujhe Gira Ke Agar Tum Sambhal Sako To Chalo

Yahi Hai Zindagi Kuch Khwaab, Chand Ummeeden
Inhi Khilonon Se Tum Bhee Bahal Sako To Chalo

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safar kii had hai vahaa.N tak ke kuchh nishaan rahe
chale chalo ke jahaa.N tak ye aasmaan rahe

:D

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Zindagee yun hui basar tanha...
Qafla saath aur safar tanha...

Apne saaye se chowk jaate hain...
Umr guzri hai isqadar tanha...

Pure Love...

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Great contributions.

Here is what I can think of right now. This is my personal sher though:

BhoolaY Khushtagaan-e-Shab, manzil-e-maqsood kaa suraagh
nishaaN-e-rah-guzar Anwaar naY samjhaaYe thaY raat bhar

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Ab bhi ojhal hey nigaahooN se nishaan-e-manzil
zindegi tu hi bata kitna safar baqi hey!

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mujh ko mere humsafar aesa safar darpesh hae
raasta katt bhi gaya toh faasla reh jayega

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yeh Ik Ishara Hai Afaat-e-Nagihanii Ka
Prindoun Ka Kisse Jaga Say kouch Kar Jana

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qaafila saath aur safar tanha
zindagi yuun huwi basar tanha

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Wah...............:)

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Uss Sham Woh Rukhsat Ka Samaan Yaad Rahay Ga...............

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Great contributions... WoW.. you guys are awesome :)

Now this one is off the hook. I see the birds flying away in opposite direction makes me wonder if this sher is actually on their perspective? How do you see it Jhanjharewali?

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na jaane kis liye ummiidavaar baiThaa huu.N
ik aisii raah pe jo terii rahaguzar bhii nahii.n
[Faiz Ahmed Faiz]