Contribute your poetic sense : = Poetic Image - PART III

Share from the poetry you know, what comes in your mind after seeing the following Image:

http://www.paklinks.com/gsmedia/files/14734/midnightlake.jpg

Here is what comes in my mind at the moment:

KahaaN kay **Ishq-O-Mohabbat**, kahaN kay hij'r-O-visaaL Abheeeeeeee tau loug tarastay haiN **zindagi** kay liye.....

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chand ke sath kae derd porane nekle

2nd line nehe ate :halo:

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^
kitnaY gham thaY jo teraY gham kaY bahaanaY niklaY :)

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thnx :)

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chaand ke saath kai dard puraane nikale
kitne gham the jo tere gham ke bahaane nikale

:chai:

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**Din mai wehshat sambhal gayi thi
Raat hui aor nikla chaand *
*

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:smilestar:

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hamsafar ho to koi apna sa, chaand ke sath chalo ge kab tak. :chai:

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kia keheyn kese beser hijer ke rateyn ke heyn
omr bher chand se ek schkhs ke bateyn ke heyn

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MM tum ko pata hai shaks kya hota hai??


Justujoo main chand ki, urnay ki koshish kar to lee
Laikin uske baad na raas aai mujhko zindagi

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umm person:snooty:

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shukar hai pata tha maen socha kahi gadhay ko hi na skhs samjh rahi ho :p

kahiN chand rahoN meiN kho gya kahiN chandni bhi bhaTak gaei
maiN charagh wo bhii bujha hua, meri raat kaisy chamak gaei
meri dastaN ka urooj tha, teri narm palkoN ki chaoN meiN
mery sath tha tjhe jaagna, teri aankh kaisy jhapak gaei...

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Tanha udaas Chaand ko samjho na be- khabar
har baat sun rahaa hey magar bolta nahiN

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Chakori kahan hy is pic main :hmmm:
Shyr zabardast hy, :lajawab:Hasby hal-e-GN

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chand baN kaR teray aangaN mein utar he jA'ouN
raat k piChlay pehaR maa'ngi hOii dUa hON meiN bhe *
*yOuN na mUrjha K mUg'hey khud pey bharOsa na rahay *
*piChlay mOusam meiN teRay sAth khila hOoN meiN bhe

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chakor na ho chand to hai :barbie:

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Raat sunti rahi main sunaata raha
Dard ki daastan main bataata raha

:)

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Aik se musafir haiN
Aik sa muqadar hai
MaiN zameen par tanha!
Aur woh aasmaanooN meiN!

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^
classic Perveen Shakir - my all time favourite

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my old time favourite

khoob

:lajawab: