Contribute your poetic sense : = Poetic Image - PART III

being_lonely · May 2, 2008, 8:24am

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Here comes from my side:

Poocha Kisi ne haal Kisi ka to roo diye
Paani main aks chaand ka dekha to roo diye

abeeha · May 2, 2008, 8:38am

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Ye sare per pode tum bin kae raat jage hen
tum aa k aik baar in ko sula do phir chale jana

_Masoom_Muskaan · May 2, 2008, 8:50am

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yeh chand door falak par kahin gumm summ sa rehta hai
isay shayad meri tanhaaii ka kuch ghamm sa rehta hai

:D

muddii · May 2, 2008, 9:18am

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Share from the poetry you know, what comes in your mind after seeing the following Image:

http://www.paklinks.com/gsmedia/files/14734/midnightlake.jpg

Raat Sunsaan Dhasht-o-Dar Kahmoosh
Chand Sitara Shajar Hajar Kahmoosh

goodnews · May 2, 2008, 9:20am

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^^ Hello Muddi:waves:

_Masoom_Muskaan · May 2, 2008, 9:22am

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muge sitara nezer nehe aia:ASA:

muddii · May 2, 2008, 9:22am

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Jii Jii:)

muddii · May 2, 2008, 9:23am

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Baqi sub tu nazar aaya na sitara nahee to nah sahee:)

goodnews · May 2, 2008, 9:24am

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Or sunao Iqbali muqably ky liy bari ly dy hoi tumhari entry per Kia tum sy kissi ny rabita kiya ya tum ny:aq:
PS: Shyr waqai acha or pic ky mutabiq hy arry baahi wah:k:

_Masoom_Muskaan · May 2, 2008, 9:26am

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sitara ko peker ke lao :ASA:

muddii · May 2, 2008, 9:34am

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Actually I was very late for the entry…Office main work load buhat increased hai aaj kaal…collected all the material sort out kiya n tried to post but jub pic post key to sara ka sara message ghaib hoo giya…message likhat tu pic ghaib…Shab nay kaha tha key usssay post kar doun she will pot it for me but woh message mujhay aaj milla…I am sorry for not being able to post something despite I had collected all the matter…

muddii · May 2, 2008, 9:36am

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Sitara hai to sahee massom sa choota say but chand cuz poora hai uss key rooshni main chup giya hai..........nazar key aainak laga kar daikhoo nazar aaiy ga sitara:)

S.786 · May 2, 2008, 12:33pm

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http://www.paklinks.com/gsmedia/files/14734/midnightlake.jpg

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ae chaandni raatu mujhy bas itna batadu…

kiya wo bhi kabhi jagy hen tasawr men hamaary.!

muddii · May 2, 2008, 1:12pm

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Nice S.786:)

redidentity · May 2, 2008, 1:36pm

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Thak Gaya Chaand, So Gaye Taaray
Abb To Aao Ke Raat Dhalti Hai

muddii · May 2, 2008, 1:39pm

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Kiya baat hai Ahmer:)

muddii · May 2, 2008, 1:42pm

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Kyun kooshish key thee urrnay Kawa chala hans key chall apnii bhee bhool giya:) Nice shair:) *

Zhind · May 2, 2008, 2:03pm

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***Chaand kay tamanaee ***
***Shahar e dil ke galiyoon mein ***
***Shaam say bhatak’tay hain ***
***Chaand kay taman’nai ***
***Bay’qaraar sodaai’ee ***
***Dil gudaaz tareekee ***
***Jan gudaaz tunhai.. ***
***Rooh o jaan ko dastee hai.. ***
***Rooh o jaan mein bastee hai.. ***
***Shahar e dil ke galiyoon mein.. ***
***Taak shab ke bailoon par ***
***shabnameen sarkashoon kee ***
***bay qaraar logoon nay.. ***
***bay shumaar logoon nay ***
***yaad’gaar choori hai ***
***itni baat thoori hai ?? ***
***sud hazaar battain theen.. ***
***heelaaa e shakeebayee ***
***sourtoon ke zay’bayee ***
***qamtoon ke ra’nayee ***
***in sayaah ratoon mein ***
***ik bhi na yaad aye.. ***
***ja baja bhataktay hain.. ***
***kis ke raah taktay hain ***
***chaand kay tamanayee. ***
***yeh nagar kabhi pehlay ***
***iss qadar na vairaan tha.. ***
***kehnay wallay kehtay hain.. ***
***qaryaa nagaraan thaa ***
***khair apnay jeenay kaa.. ***
***yeh bhi aik samaan tha… ***
***aaj dil mein vairaani.. ***
***aabr ban kay ghir aye.. ***
***aaj dil ko kaya kahiyeah.. ***
***ba wafa na har jayee ***
***phir bhee loug divaanaay ***
***aa gai hain samjhanay.. ***
***apni wahshaat e dil kay ***
***bun liyeah hain afsaanay.. ***
***khush khayaal duniyaa nay ***
***garmiyaan tu jaati hain ***
***woh rutaain bhi aati hain.. ***
***jab malool ratoon mein ***
***dostoon ke batoon mein ***
***jee na chain paye ga ***
***aur aoob jaye ga.. ***
***ahatoon say gounjay gee ***
***shahar e dil ke punhayee ***
***aur chaand ratoon mein ***
***chandini kay shaydayee ***
***har bahanay nikllain gay ***
***azmanay niklaain gai ***
***dhoondhnay ko ruswayee.. ***
***sard sard ratoon ko ***
***zard chaand bakhshay ga ***
***bay hisaab tunhaee ***
***bay hijaaab tunhaee ***
***shaahar e dil ke gailiyoon mein.. ***

Zhind · May 2, 2008, 2:08pm

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Kal chudhween ke raat thee, shab bhar raha charcha teraa
kuch ne kaha ye chand hay, kuch ne kaha chehra teraa

Hum bhi waheen moujood thay, hum se bhi sub pocha kiyee
Hum hanse diye, hum chup rahay, Manzoor tha pardaah teraa

goodnews · May 2, 2008, 3:51pm

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