Competition Ghazal Of The Week

being_lonely · October 27, 2007, 8:05am

Asalam U Alaikum ! My dear forum members this week we are having a competition of “Ghazal Of The Week”.

Rules

Post only one ghazal
Ghazal must be in its orignal form
Ghazal will be judged only on the basis of its quality
Competition starts on Saturday 27 October 00:01 Am (PST)
Competition ends on Wednesday 31st October 00:01 Am (PST)
Results will be announced as soon as possible.
Point Scale
Source : 1
Ghazal : 9

Judges:

**Innocent_Smile
Muncho **
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Comments: Please don not discuss things in this thread..go to time pass thread if you need to say something.If anyone wants to be judge please contact Shab-e-Hijar.

bholibisri · October 27, 2007, 3:13pm

Re: Competition Ghazal Of The Week

mUjhey Dii Khabar Teray Shehar Sey Idher Aaney Walii HawaaOn Ney
*Key Bana Liye Naye Daairey Teri DhArkAnOn Kii SadaaOn Ney *

Gham e Dehar Ney Meray Ishq Key Par o Baal nOch Key Rakh Diye
Main Uraan lOon Bhi tO Kaisey lOon Teri AarzOo Kii FizaaOn Mein

Na Gaii Kabhi Meri Be-Basii Yeh Ajeeb HadSa mUjh Sey hAi
wOhi FaaSley Teray Shehar Key wOhii Bairiyaan Meray PaaOn Kii

Teri FurQatOn Kii Udaas Rutt mUjhey Lamha Lamha Liye Phirii **Kabhi Meray dArd Kii DhOop Mein Kabhi Teri Yaad Kii ChaaOn Mein **

tOo HameSha mUjh Mein Basii Rahey Main dUa KHUDA Sey KarOn
Magar **wO tO Mil Gya Kissi Aur kO jO Asar Tha Meri dUaaOn Mein **

wO hAi Zindgii Sey Bhi Kuch HaSee'n Main BaGhair Jis Key Na Jee SakOn **jO Yhaan Nahii tO "Qateel" Usey Kabhi Jaa MillOn Ga KhalaaOn Mein **

Bholay_Bisray · October 27, 2007, 4:22pm

Re: Competition Ghazal Of The Week

ye kaun Duub gayaa aur ubhar gayaa mujh me.n
ye kaun saaye kii suurat guzar gayaa mujh me.n

ye kis ke soG me.n shoridaa-haal phirataa huu.N
vo kaun shaKhs thaa aisaa ki mar gayaa mujh me.n

ajab havaa-e-bahaaraa.N ne chaaraasaazii kii
vo zaKhm jis ko na bharanaa thaa bhar gayaa mujh me.n

vo aadamii ki jo patthar thaa jii rahaa hai abhii
jo aa_iinaa thaa vo bikhar gayaa mujh me.n

bisaal kyaa ki vo jab bhii qariib se guzaraa
vo yuu.N lagaa ki ko_ii raqs kar gayaa mujh me.n

vo saath thaa to ajab dhuup chaa.Nv rahatii thii
bas ab to ek hii mausam Thahar gayaa mujh me.n

Razi Akhtar Shauq

Shab-e-Hijar · October 28, 2007, 12:31am

Re: Competition Ghazal Of The Week

:halo:
sub kaha hain??
jago jago logo

being_lonely · October 28, 2007, 12:50am

Re: Competition Ghazal Of The Week

hum to jaag bhi rahe hain aur kaam bhi kar rahe hain

High-Tech · October 28, 2007, 12:51am

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^
is tarhan jagany say to ‘abdi neend’ so jaien gaie sary

being_lonely · October 28, 2007, 1:09am

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Momin Khan Momin

Asar Usko Zara Nahin Hota
Ranj Rahat Faza Nahin Hota

Tum Hamare Kisi Tarah Na Hue
Warna Duniya Main Kya Nahin Hota

Narasai Se Dam Ruk To Ruk
Main Kisi Se khafa Nahin Hota

Tum Mere Paas Hote Ho Goya
Jab Koi Duusra Nahin Hota

Hal-e-Dil Yar Ko Likhun Kyon Kar
Hath Dil Se Juda Nahin Hota

Kyon Sune Arz-e-Muztarib Ae ‘Momin’
Sanam Akhir KHUDA Nahin Hota

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Being Lonely !!! sID !!!

bholibisri · October 28, 2007, 2:32am

Re: Competition Ghazal Of The Week

^ is ka blood peecahy se keon niqal raha :halo:

Bholay_Bisray · October 28, 2007, 3:17am

Re: Competition Ghazal Of The Week

^^
Hal-e-Dil Yar Ko Likhun Kyon Kar
Hath Dil Se Juda Nahin Hota
Kyon Sune Arz-e-Muztarib Ae 'Momin'
Sanam Akhir KHUDA Nahin Hota

PS:- Sanam ka dill nikal kur chupppa liya hay na :)

bholibisri · October 28, 2007, 3:21am

Re: Competition Ghazal Of The Week

lagta hia tajurba bolta hia :D

Bholay_Bisray · October 28, 2007, 3:26am

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:halo: me aap ko khooni lugta iss thurha ?

Shab-e-Hijar · October 28, 2007, 3:46am

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^ to kya ap ko being khonni lagta hai

being_lonely · October 28, 2007, 9:58am

Re: Competition Ghazal Of The Week

Bholi according to poetry mei related pix post karta he hon :p n thanks bholay for explaning her on my place :)

bholibisri · October 28, 2007, 11:48am

Re: Competition Ghazal Of The Week

but che che kisi ka khoon kar k nazam post ...aur wesay b ap tu judge ho kia panay ap ko b vote karo gay :p

Amarbail · October 28, 2007, 2:50pm

Re: Competition Ghazal Of The Week

*Woh ashk ban kar meri chashm-e-tar mein rehta hai
Ajeeb shaks hai paani ke ghar mein rehta hai

Bhooli bisri yaadoon ki kirnoo ko saja kar roye hain
Woh chehra jab yaad aaya hum shamma jala kar roye hain

Saath tumhara kya choota thaa dard se har rishta toota thaa
Yeh aansoo hain khushi ke aansoo tum ko paa kar roye hain

Apni hi majboori thee jo hont hamaare khul na sakay
Jab bhi maanga khuda se tumhein bas haath utha kar roye hain

Yaad hai ab tak shaam-e-judai woh palkain bhi bheegi theen
'Rashid' aaj unhee aankhoon ke khwaab saja kar roye hain ... *

being_lonely · October 28, 2007, 5:56pm

Re: Competition Ghazal Of The Week

No I am pArticipant now :p Judges Koi Aur Hain :)

bheegiyaad · October 28, 2007, 6:16pm

Re: Competition Ghazal Of The Week

**phuul the baadal bhii thaa aur vo hasii.n suurat bhii thii
dil mein lekin aur hii ek shaql kii hasarat bhii thii

jo havaa mein ghar banaaye kaash koii dekhataa
dasht mein rahate the par taamiir kii aadat bhii thii

kah gayaa main saamane us ke jo dil kaa mudd'a
kuchh to mausam bhii ajab thaa kuchh merii himmat bhii thii

ajanabii shaharo.n mein rahate umr saarii kat gaii
go zaraa se faasale par ghar kii har raahat bhii thii

kyaa qayaamat hai "Munir" ab yaad bhii aate nahii.n
vo puraane aashnaa jin se hamein ulfat bhii thii**

Shab-e-Hijar · October 29, 2007, 4:22pm

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only 5 entries :halo:

bheegiyaad · October 29, 2007, 7:37pm

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^TP mein entry band kardo jo yahan na post karay
phir dekhna

NikamiJano · October 29, 2007, 9:04pm

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Good work ppl keep posting :) peR judge kon hia :)