Competition Ghazal Of The Week

[Shab-e-Hijar]

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@NikamiJano

Good work ppl keep posting peR judge kon hia

judge to hain lakin mane un say kaha hai kay mai unkay naam 10 posts honay kay badh likho gi
lakin yaha to sub ko pata nahi kya huwa hai

[NikamiJano]

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hmmmmm sab tame pass :D aik tame pass compition rakhiN shabo :)

[Shab-e-Hijar]

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@NikamiJano

hmmmmm sab tame pass :D aik tame pass compition rakhiN shabo :)

phir to flood ajaye ga idhar :D

[NikamiJano]

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acah hai na khshi huwei huwei hiaN we need sme rain and flood :)

[ghazal_kisi_ke]

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i’ll post my winning entry soon

[being_lonely]

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@Shab-e-Hijar

only 5 entries :halo:

where is yours ?

[Ali_2]

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Kabhi shakiston kay dukh uthaye to us say poochon
wo meri manind toot jaye to us say poochon

Koi sitara usay bhi manzil say dur kar day
usay bhi rasta nazar na aaye to us say poochon

Safar main wo bhi kisi kade imtihan say guzray
usay bhi yun koi aazmaye to us say poochon

Usay muhabbat main kaun sa dukh diya hai main nay
Kabhi nazar se nazar milaye to usay poochon

meri tarah din chadhe talak wo bhi soye SALAK
usay bhi shab bhar na neend aaye to us say poochon

[_Masoom_Muskaan]

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Ahat si hoi thi na koi burg hila tha
main khud hi sare manazali e shab cheekh para tha

lamhoon ki faseleen bhi miray gird khari theen
main phir bhi tujhay shahr main awara laga tha

too nay jo pukara hai too bool utha haoon;warna
main fikar ki dehleez pay chup chap kara tha

phalien theen baray shahr main tanhai ki batain
shaid koi dewar kay peechay bhi khara tha

ab is kay sawa yad nahin jashan-e-mulaqat
ik matami jhgnoo meri pulkoon pay saja tha

ya barash-e-sung ab kay musalsil na hoi thi
ya phir main teray shahr ki rah bhool gaya tha

ik jalwah-e- mahjoob say roshan tha mira zehan
wajdan yeh kehta hia wohi mera khuda tha

wairan na hoo is darja koi mousam e gul bhi
kehtay hain kisi shaakh pay ik phool khila tha

ik too kay gureezan hi raha mujh sya bahar toor
ik main kay teray naqash e qadam choom raha tha

dekha na kisi nay bhi meri simat palat kar
muhsin main bikhartay hoay sheeshon ki sada tha

By Mohsin Naqwi<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->

[Shab-e-Hijar]

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:halo:

Attention peepz poet kay name kay 2 Points hai :aq:

[_Masoom_Muskaan]

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@Shab-e-Hijar

:halo:

Attention peepz poet kay name kay 2 Points hai :aq:

acha pher kia keryn

[Shab-e-Hijar]

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@_Masoom_Muskaan

acha pher kia keryn

jo karna tha woh kardiya

ab result ka wait karo

[Starlight]

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Nayee tarhan say nibhaaney ki dil nay thaani hai
Wagarna tujh say mohabbat bohot puraani hai

Khuda wo din na dikhayee keh mai kisi say sunon
Keh tu nay bhi gham-e-duniya say haar maani hai

Zameen ay reh kar sitaarey shikaar kartey hain
Mizaaj ahl-e-mohabbat ka asmaani hai

Humein azeez ho kyonkar na shaam-e-gham keh yehi
Bichadney waaley---teri aakhri nishaani hai

Uttar paraey ho toh darya pay poochna kaisa?
Keh saahilon say udhar--- kitna taiz paani hai

Bohot dinon mai teri yaad orh kar utri
Yeh shaam kitni seheri hai---kia suhaani hai

Main kitni der usay sochta rahun **Mohsin**
Keh jaisay uska badan bhi koi kahaani hai*

Written by
Mohsin Naqvi

[deadsoul]

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har yaad ko yon zakham banatay nahi dil ka
har teer ko paiwast e rag e jan nahi kartay

yeh masla ab ahl e wafa ka hai apna
martay hain to kuch ap pay ehsaan nahi kartay

khat layen na layen tera, hum namaa baron ko
bass dekhtay rehtay hain pareshan nahi kartay

aisay bhi to rakhtay nahi khanjar pay gulo ko
itna bhi to qatil ko pashaiman nahi kartay

kab shammain jalata hai shab e maah me koi
tu ayay to hum ghar main charaghan nahi kartay

logon ko guman tak nahi hota hai junon ka
hum dil ki tarah chaak, giraiban nahi kartay

hum taj k chalaay atay hain yaron dar e jana
ghalib ki tarah minnat e darban nahi kartay

[IS]

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*meri aik request hay k poet k naaam k 1 point rakha jaiay na k 2 points *

[Shab-e-Hijar]

Re: Competition Ghazal Of The Week

*meri aik request hay k poet k naaam k 1 point rakha jaiay na k 2 points *

hogya :)

[IS]

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*^ thanks :-) *

[deadsoul]

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time to khtm hogaya na
abhi tak lock nahi hua

[being_lonely]

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time to khtm hogaya na abhi tak lock nahi hua

mere bhai zara ghor se closing date parhein ya apne pc ki date theek karein :p

[deadsoul]

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Competition ends on Wednesday 31st October 00:01 Am (PST)

i think ghor say parhnay ki zarorat apko hai bhai
aj date 31st hai month octobr hai aur time 3:52 am

lagta hai apko time chk karna nahi ata:)

[Shab-e-Hijar]

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@bholibisri

mUjhey Dii Khabar Teray Shehar Sey Idher Aaney Walii HawaaOn Ney
**Key Bana Liye Naye Daairey Teri DhArkAnOn Kii SadaaOn Ney **

Gham e Dehar Ney Meray Ishq Key Par o Baal nOch Key Rakh Diye
Main Uraan lOon Bhi tO Kaisey lOon Teri AarzOo Kii FizaaOn Mein

Na Gaii Kabhi Meri Be-Basii Yeh Ajeeb HadSa mUjh Sey hAi
wOhi FaaSley Teray Shehar Key wOhii Bairiyaan Meray PaaOn Kii

**Teri FurQatOn Kii Udaas Rutt mUjhey Lamha Lamha Liye Phirii ****Kabhi Meray dArd Kii DhOop Mein Kabhi Teri Yaad Kii ChaaOn Mein **

tOo HameSha mUjh Mein Basii Rahey Main dUa KHUDA Sey KarOn
**Magar ****wO tO Mil Gya Kissi Aur kO jO Asar Tha Meri dUaaOn Mein **

**wO hAi Zindgii Sey Bhi Kuch HaSee’n Main BaGhair Jis Key Na Jee SakOn ****jO Yhaan Nahii tO “Qateel” Usey Kabhi Jaa MillOn Ga KhalaaOn Mein **

@Bholay_Bisray

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ye kaun Duub gayaa aur ubhar gayaa mujh me.n
ye kaun saaye kii suurat guzar gayaa mujh me.n

ye kis ke soG me.n shoridaa-haal phirataa huu.N
vo kaun shaKhs thaa aisaa ki mar gayaa mujh me.n

ajab havaa-e-bahaaraa.N ne chaaraasaazii kii
vo zaKhm jis ko na bharanaa thaa bhar gayaa mujh me.n

vo aadamii ki jo patthar thaa jii rahaa hai abhii
jo aa_iinaa thaa vo bikhar gayaa mujh me.n

bisaal kyaa ki vo jab bhii qariib se guzaraa
vo yuu.N lagaa ki ko_ii raqs kar gayaa mujh me.n

vo saath thaa to ajab dhuup chaa.Nv rahatii thii
bas ab to ek hii mausam Thahar gayaa mujh me.n

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Razi Akhtar Shauq

@being_lonely

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Momin Khan Momin

Asar Usko Zara Nahin Hota
Ranj Rahat Faza Nahin Hota

Tum Hamare Kisi Tarah Na Hue
Warna Duniya Main Kya Nahin Hota

Narasai Se Dam Ruk To Ruk
Main Kisi Se khafa Nahin Hota

Tum Mere Paas Hote Ho Goya
Jab Koi Duusra Nahin Hota

Hal-e-Dil Yar Ko Likhun Kyon Kar
Hath Dil Se Juda Nahin Hota

Kyon Sune Arz-e-Muztarib Ae ‘Momin’
Sanam Akhir KHUDA Nahin Hota

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Being Lonely !!! sID !!!

@zawanfira

*Woh ashk ban kar meri chashm-e-tar mein rehta hai
Ajeeb shaks hai paani ke ghar mein rehta hai

Bhooli bisri yaadoon ki kirnoo ko saja kar roye hain
Woh chehra jab yaad aaya hum shamma jala kar roye hain

Saath tumhara kya choota thaa dard se har rishta toota thaa
Yeh aansoo hain khushi ke aansoo tum ko paa kar roye hain

Apni hi majboori thee jo hont hamaare khul na sakay
Jab bhi maanga khuda se tumhein bas haath utha kar roye hain

Yaad hai ab tak shaam-e-judai woh palkain bhi bheegi theen
‘Rashid’ aaj unhee aankhoon ke khwaab saja kar roye hain … *

@bheegiyaad

**phuul the baadal bhii thaa aur vo hasii.n suurat bhii thii
dil mein lekin aur hii ek shaql kii hasarat bhii thii

jo havaa mein ghar banaaye kaash koii dekhataa
dasht mein rahate the par taamiir kii aadat bhii thii

kah gayaa main saamane us ke jo dil kaa mudd’a
kuchh to mausam bhii ajab thaa kuchh merii himmat bhii thii

ajanabii shaharo.n mein rahate umr saarii kat gaii
go zaraa se faasale par ghar kii har raahat bhii thii

kyaa qayaamat hai “Munir” ab yaad bhii aate nahii.n
vo puraane aashnaa jin se hamein ulfat bhii thii**

@Ali

Kabhi shakiston kay dukh uthaye to us say poochon
wo meri manind toot jaye to us say poochon

Koi sitara usay bhi manzil say dur kar day
usay bhi rasta nazar na aaye to us say poochon

Safar main wo bhi kisi kade imtihan say guzray
usay bhi yun koi aazmaye to us say poochon

Usay muhabbat main kaun sa dukh diya hai main nay
Kabhi nazar se nazar milaye to usay poochon

meri tarah din chadhe talak wo bhi soye SALAK
usay bhi shab bhar na neend aaye to us say poochon

@_Masoom_Muskaan

Ahat si hoi thi na koi burg hila tha
main khud hi sare manazali e shab cheekh para tha

lamhoon ki faseleen bhi miray gird khari theen
main phir bhi tujhay shahr main awara laga tha

too nay jo pukara hai too bool utha haoon;warna
main fikar ki dehleez pay chup chap kara tha

phalien theen baray shahr main tanhai ki batain
shaid koi dewar kay peechay bhi khara tha

ab is kay sawa yad nahin jashan-e-mulaqat
ik matami jhgnoo meri pulkoon pay saja tha

ya barash-e-sung ab kay musalsil na hoi thi
ya phir main teray shahr ki rah bhool gaya tha

ik jalwah-e- mahjoob say roshan tha mira zehan
wajdan yeh kehta hia wohi mera khuda tha

wairan na hoo is darja koi mousam e gul bhi
kehtay hain kisi shaakh pay ik phool khila tha

ik too kay gureezan hi raha mujh sya bahar toor
ik main kay teray naqash e qadam choom raha tha

dekha na kisi nay bhi meri simat palat kar
muhsin main bikhartay hoay sheeshon ki sada tha

By Mohsin Naqwi

@Starlight

Nayee tarhan say nibhaaney ki dil nay thaani hai
Wagarna tujh say mohabbat bohot puraani hai

Khuda wo din na dikhayee keh mai kisi say sunon
Keh tu nay bhi gham-e-duniya say haar maani hai

Zameen ay reh kar sitaarey shikaar kartey hain
Mizaaj ahl-e-mohabbat ka asmaani hai

Humein azeez ho kyonkar na shaam-e-gham keh yehi
Bichadney waaley—teri aakhri nishaani hai

Uttar paraey ho toh darya pay poochna kaisa?
Keh saahilon say udhar— kitna taiz paani hai

Bohot dinon mai teri yaad orh kar utri
Yeh shaam kitni seheri hai—kia suhaani hai

Main kitni der usay sochta rahun Mohsin
Keh jaisay uska badan bhi koi kahaani hai*

Written by
Mohsin Naqvi

@deadsoul

har yaad ko yon zakham banatay nahi dil ka
har teer ko paiwast e rag e jan nahi kartay

yeh masla ab ahl e wafa ka hai apna
martay hain to kuch ap pay ehsaan nahi kartay

khat layen na layen tera, hum namaa baron ko
bass dekhtay rehtay hain pareshan nahi kartay

aisay bhi to rakhtay nahi khanjar pay gulo ko
itna bhi to qatil ko pashaiman nahi kartay

kab shammain jalata hai shab e maah me koi
tu ayay to hum ghar main charaghan nahi kartay

logon ko guman tak nahi hota hai junon ka
hum dil ki tarah chaak, giraiban nahi kartay

hum taj k chalaay atay hain yaron dar e jana
ghalib ki tarah minnat e darban nahi kartay

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