Bait Bazi Part---LIX

NikamiJano · February 9, 2002, 11:52am

yeh umray gurayzaan kaheen thehray to main janoon
harr saans main mujh ko yahee lagta hai keh tum hoo

~kabi alwida na kahNa~

Amjad_Chohan · February 9, 2002, 12:53pm

vafaa ke bhes me.n ko_ii raqiib-e-shahar bhii hai
hazar! ke shahar ke qaatil tabiib-e-shahar bhii hai

Farwa · February 10, 2002, 1:38am

yeh kiya howa teri dunya ko aey khuda-e-kareem
ke zinda loog tarastey hain zindagi kay leyay.

khubsoorat_khoab · February 10, 2002, 1:52am

~Ya khuda loag banaaye thay agar pathar kay
Meray ehsaas ko sheesha na banaya hota~

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Zara yeh to bataao
Tum ne mujh say ziada zindagi ki
Baharain daikhee hain
Dunya ke nashaib-o-faraz say bakhoobi waqif ho
Yeh dunya itni zalim
Khudgharz aur behiss kyon hai?
Jis main tum bhi shamil ho :~(
~~~~~ ~~~~~

Farwa · February 10, 2002, 2:08am

aay ankh abb to khoab ki duniya say lot aa
annkain taras gayeen meri dariya ka wastay.

chand_chehra · February 10, 2002, 6:20am

*
ye tumhari talk nawaiya koi aur sah kar dekha to day
ye jo hum main tum main nibha hai mere hoslay ka kamaal hai

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phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa'N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
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~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*

ahmadjee · February 10, 2002, 3:21pm

*yeah or ba’at kay tum ayay ho tou yahaN koi nahiN
wagarna ghum tou yahaN bay shumar rahtay haiN *
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Farwa · February 10, 2002, 4:24pm

ahmedjee, acha sher tha

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Na tu zameen kay liye hay na aasmaan kay liye
Tera wajood hay ab sirf daastan kay liye.

‘ye’

chand_chehra · February 10, 2002, 5:21pm

*
ye na thi ha'mari qismat ke wisale yaar hota
gar aur zinda rahtay yehi intazar hota

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phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa'N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
~~~~~~~~~

~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*

ahmadjee · February 10, 2002, 6:06pm

iss qadar musalsal theeN shidataiN judayee ki
Ajj pahli bar iss say maiN nay bay-wafayee ki

-Faraz

"ye"

Farwa · February 10, 2002, 6:18pm

Yaad nahiiN kyaa kyaa dekhaa thaa saare manzar bhuul gaye
Us kii galiyoN se jab lauTe apanaa bhii ghar bhuul gaye.

'ye'

chand_chehra · February 11, 2002, 2:51am

*

ye jo sargashta se phirtay hain kitabooN walay
in se mat mil ke inhay rog haiN khwabooN walay

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phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa'N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
~~~~~~~~~

~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*

Gemini_the_Great · February 11, 2002, 3:04am

yay rukay rukay sey ansoo yay ghuti ghuti si aahian
yuN he kab talak khudaya gham-e zindagii nibahian

next: "NooN"

"Don’t be shallow by saying: if people do good, we will do good; and if they do wrong, we will do wrong; but accustom yourselves to do good if the people do good, and not to do wrong if they do wrong."

khubsoorat_khoab · February 11, 2002, 6:12am

~Nasheman par nasheman is kadr tameen karta ja,
Ke bijlee girtey girtey aap khud bezaar hojayee~

p.s. kiya aisa nahin ho sakta kae jo shair likhae woah apni tarah sae aik letter bolae, aisa letter jis sae usae pehlae sae shair ata ho...aur doosrae us sae shair kahain agar sab hi give up ho jayen to woah us sae shair kahae....is tarah yae, alif, noon waghaira kae ilawah bhi shair share ker saktae hain ham...

what do u guys think???

~~~~~ ~~~~~
Zara yeh to bataao
Tum ne mujh say ziada zindagi ki
Baharain daikhee hain
Dunya ke nashaib-o-faraz say bakhoobi waqif ho
Yeh dunya itni zalim
Khudgharz aur behiss kyon hai?
Jis main tum bhi shamil ho :~(
~~~~~ ~~~~~

chand_chehra · February 12, 2002, 3:50am

*
ye jaaN kani ke ghari kya thar gaye hai ke huM
kabhi qaz'a kabhi chara gar ko dekhtay haiN

~~~~~~~~
phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa'N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
~~~~~~~~~

~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*

RahGeeR · February 12, 2002, 9:23am

Khushak veeraaN aaNkhoN meiN ab to aaNsu bhi nahi
kuch to hota jise ishq ka haasil khete

Irfan Ismail

Gemini_the_Great · February 12, 2002, 3:42pm

Rahgeer u was suppose to start with "Yay"

CC.. tumhara signature shair hamesha dhoka deta :)

yahi tu wajah-e shikasht wafa hoye meri
khaloos-e ishq main sada dili ki amazish
samandaron ke tarah meri ankh sakit hai
magar sakoot main kis be qali ki amazish

next: "sheen"

"Don’t be shallow by saying: if people do good, we will do good; and if they do wrong, we will do wrong; but accustom yourselves to do good if the people do good, and not to do wrong if they do wrong."

[This message has been edited by Gemini the Great (edited February 12, 2002).]

chand_chehra · February 14, 2002, 12:44am

*
shikast day gya apni garoor hi us ko
wagrna us ke muqabil bisaat kya thi meri

ye

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phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa'N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
~~~~~~~~~

~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*

NikamiJano · February 14, 2002, 2:09am

yehi mizaj hai apna kisi ka dil na dukhaY
juda'eoN ko be chaha hai quRbatooN ki tarha

~kabi alwida na kahNa~

chand_chehra · February 14, 2002, 4:13am

*
apna ye haal ke ge haar chukay aur lut bhi chukay
aur muhabaat wohi andaz purane mangay

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phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa'N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
~~~~~~~~~

~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*