Bait Bazi Part---LIX

Sehar · February 6, 2002, 3:47am

Rules of Bait Bazi:

Shair should be genuine and not a fabricated one.
One “response shair” is allowed per shair.
Dont break the chain and always follow the last posted shair.
If more than one shair is posted in response, follow the last posted shair.
If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other’s knowledge sake).
We should follow urdu alphabets.
Always mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair. (if it’s “HAMZA” by any chance,
which could hardly be the case, then also mention the second last alphabet).
Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Rubai, qita) at max
will be allowed.
Avoid posting film songs.

Sehar · February 6, 2002, 3:50am

iss liye toot ke roya hooN meiN aksar Mohsin
kuch to dil khool kar haNsnay ka qareena aaye

RahGeeR · February 6, 2002, 9:48am

muthion main khak lai kae dost aa`ae waqtae dafan
zindagi bher ki mohabbat ka sila dae gaey

Irfan Ismail

Farwa · February 6, 2002, 12:35pm

yeh barsho ke mausam yuonhi ra'egaa na jaye
kisi yaad ko bulao kisi dard ko jagao

'wao'

chand_chehra · February 6, 2002, 7:43pm

***
wafa kaisi? kahaan ka ishq? jab sar phordna thehra
to phir ae sangdil! taira he sang-e-aastaaN kiu ho?

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phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa'N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
~~~~~~~~~

~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*

ahmadjee · February 7, 2002, 1:25am

Woh tou kushbo hay, hawaoN maiN bikhar jayay ga
Masala phool ka hay, phool kidhar jayay ga

"alif"

Gemini_the_Great · February 7, 2002, 1:35am

itnay majboor hain hum apni ana ki khatir
raiza raiza bhi howay aur bhikray bhi nahin

next: "NooN"

"Don’t be shallow by saying: if people do good, we will do good; and if they do wrong, we will do wrong; but accustom yourselves to do good if the people do good, and not to do wrong if they do wrong."

[This message has been edited by Gemini the Great (edited February 06, 2002).]

Farwa · February 7, 2002, 1:43am

GTG ahmed ji was supposed to start with ‘wao’

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nishaani koi to ab ke safar ki ghar lana
thakan paaoN ki aur titalioN ke par lana
safar ke shoq mein chal to pare ho ghar se
dukhoN ki gard se daman na apna bar lana

alif

Roshi · February 7, 2002, 1:48am

Nahi Nigha mei manzil tau justajoo hi sahi
Nahi Wisaal mayasar tau arzoo hi sahi

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Next please “yeh” (i think)

Farwa · February 7, 2002, 1:50am

i hate ‘ye’

ya rab dil-e-muslim ko wo zinda tamanna de
jo qalb ko garma de jo rooh ko tarhpa de

‘ye’ again

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Roshi · February 7, 2002, 1:55am

sorry but i replied to Gemini the Great's shair. but i guess farwa and i posted at the same time

Farwa · February 7, 2002, 1:58am

i didn't even notice that. edit your posts and i'll edit mines as well.

Sehar · February 7, 2002, 2:24am

Farwa and Roshi, you guys don’t need to edit. Just continue on. Roshi, great to see you here my friend

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ye hijar hai to iss ka faqat wasal hai elaaj
hum ne ye zakhm waqt ko bharnay nahi diya

‘alif’

Farwa · February 7, 2002, 2:29am

Aik Ishq Ka Gham Aafat, Or Us Pay Yeh Dil Aafat,

Ya Gham Na Diya Hota, Ya Dil Na Dia Hota.

'alif'

Gemini_the_Great · February 7, 2002, 2:54am

Farway… shorry

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ansoo ko kabhi oas ka qatra na samjhna
aisay tumhain chahat ka samandar na milay ga

next: “Alif”

Farwa · February 7, 2002, 3:05am

Andaaz-e-byaan aGarche mera shokh nehin
Shayed ke tere dil mein utar ja'ey meri baat.

'tay'

ahmadjee · February 7, 2002, 5:16am

Teri kushboo nahiN milti, tera lahja nahiN milta
HumaiN tou sehar main koi teray jaisa nahiN milta
Zamanay ko karenay say woh apnay sath rakhta hay
Magar meray liyay osay koi lamha nahiN milta —>

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p.s: Farwa, I did start with ‘wao’ :~P

chand_chehra · February 7, 2002, 5:24am

***

ankh se itna barsa pani dekh ke main heraaN huwa
jane kitni sadio ka tha ek samandar toot gya

~~~~~~~~
phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa'N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
~~~~~~~~~

~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*

[This message has been edited by chand_chehra (edited February 06, 2002).]

RahGeeR · February 7, 2002, 6:56am

Keya shart hai ke sab ko mile ek saa jawaab
aao na hum bhi Sair kareN koh-e-toor ki

Irfan Ismail

Farwa · February 7, 2002, 1:44pm

Ahmed ji i know u were started with ‘wao’. I was telling that to GTG, she said something, look at her message, she edited it now

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Rahgeer, you were suupposed to start with alif

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kher i’ll continue with yurs.

Yunhi to her waqt na phira karro
koi shamm ghar bhi rah karo
ye ghazal ki schi kitab hai
isse chupke chupkey parha karoo

‘wao’