Rules of Bait Bazi:
Shair should be genuine and not your own. Post your own in Bait Bazi — Personal Edition of Sho’ra-e-Gupshup.
Dont break the chain and always follow the last letter of the last posted shair.
Always mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair.
If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other’s knowledge sake).
Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Rubai, qita) at max will be allowed.
Avoid posting film songs.
Starting with bheegiyaad’s SheR
**ACHA SA KOI MAUSAM, TANHAA SA KOI AALAM**
**HER WAQT KA RONA TOU BEKAAR KA RONA HAI**
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**ye**
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**bheeghi please ap agar lower case use karan tu ;)thanks in advance**
2 Likes
Sheal
March 2, 2008, 1:58pm
2
Re: Bait Bazi... Month of March..2008
**Yay kaisi fasl-e-gul aai hai chaman maiN
Parinday khouf say sehmay hoay haiN
Damakrtay gungunatay mousmooN kay
Lahoo maiN zaiqay phailay hoay haiN
" Noon " **
3 Likes
Re: Bait Bazi... Month of March..2008
Naye sukhan ki talabgar hai, naii duniya..
wo aik baat purani, kahain to kis se kahain
Noon
3 Likes
Koyal
March 3, 2008, 3:55am
4
Re: Bait Bazi... Month of March..2008
nahi mumkiN k meiN zinda rahooN tujh se juda ho ker
rahoonga Terey qadmoN meiN hamesha khak'pa ho ker
"ray'
2 Likes
Re: Bait Bazi... Month of March..2008
Raat Yuun Dil Main Teri Khoi Hui Yaad Aai
Jese Veeranay Main Chupke Se Bahaar Aa Jaye
Jese Sehra Main Holay Se Chalay Baad-e-Naseem
Jese Beemar Ko Be'Wajha Qaraar Aa Jaye
'Ye'
Re: Bait Bazi... Month of March..2008
ye na thi hamari qismat kay visal-e-yaar hota
gar aur zinda rahtay yehi intazar hota
alif
Re: Bait Bazi... Month of March..2008
Ashaar Meray Yuun To Zamanay Ke Leay Hain
Kuch Sher Faqat Unn Ko Sunanay Ke Leay Hain
'Noon'
Re: Bait Bazi... Month of March..2008
na ho unn pe jo mera bus nahi , ke yeh Aashqi hai Hawas nahi
main unhi ka tha , main unhi ka hoo'n , wo merey nahi to nahi sahi
yeh
Re: Bait Bazi... Month of March..2008
Ye Ajeeb Khel Hai Ishq Ka Mainay Aap Dekha Ye Moj'za
Wo Lafz Meray Gumaan Main Thay Wo Teri Zubaan Pe Aa Gaye
'Ye'
Re: Bait Bazi... Month of March..2008
Ye merii kitaab-e-hayat hay issey dil kii aankh sey parr zaraa
mein warq warq terey samney terey rubaru terey paas hooN
Noon''
Re: Bait Bazi... Month of March..2008
Na Mila Ker Udaas Logon Se
Husn Tera Bikher Na Jaye Kaheen
'Noon'
Re: Bait Bazi... Month of March..2008
Naala-e-Woh Neem Shab Ho Ya Idaabat Ho Koi
Her Dua Main Bus Tumhi Ko Mangna Acha Laga
"Alif"
2 Likes
Re: Bait Bazi... Month of March..2008
Abhi Abhi Wo Gaye Hain Magar Ye Aalam Hai
Buhat Dino'n Se Wo Jese Nazar Nahin Aye
'Ye'
Re: Bait Bazi... Month of March..2008
Ye ajeeb marhalay hain yeh ajeeb silsilay hain
kay jahan say hum chalay thay uss mor per kharay hain
"Noon" :)
Re: Bait Bazi... Month of March..2008
Nasir mujhe chairein ge bohat chand, nadi, phol
aayaa naa maiirra dostt abb kay barasss bhiii...
Yeh
Re: Bait Bazi... Month of March..2008
Ye Zindagi Yahan Khushi Ghamon Ke Sath Sath Hai
Rula Sako To Saath Do, Hansa Sako To Sath Do
'Wow'
Sheal
March 6, 2008, 6:30am
17
Re: Bait Bazi... Month of March..2008
Wo hairaaN haiN hamaray zabt pay keh do Qateel in say
Jo daman pay nahi girta, wo aansoo dil pay girta hai
" Yay "
Re: Bait Bazi... Month of March..2008
Yunhi Be'Sabab Na Phira Karo Koi Shaam Ghar Bhi Raha Karo
Wo Ghazal Ki Sachi Kitaab Hai Usay Chupke Chupke Parha Karo
'Wow'
Sheal
March 6, 2008, 7:30am
19
Re: Bait Bazi... Month of March..2008
Wo barg-ekhusk tha or daman-e-bahar maiN tha
Namood - e - no ki basharat kay intezar maiN tha
** "Alif "**
Re: Bait Bazi... Month of March..2008
Andhairon ko haqarat kii nazar se daikhne waalon
ujaalon ka pas-e-manzarr barra tareek hotaa haii
Yeh