Re: Bait Bazi -- July 2007
**
Ye neend ki dewi bhi ajab dushman-e-jaaN hey
aaNkhoN se sada door rahey raat gaey tak
paspa huwey tanhai ki yalghaar sey jab bhi
hum shehar meiN aawaara phirey raat gaey tak
**
"Kaaf" (for a change :~) )
Re: Bait Bazi -- July 2007
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Ye neend ki dewi bhi ajab dushman-e-jaaN hey
aaNkhoN se sada door rahey raat gaey tak
paspa huwey tanhai ki yalghaar sey jab bhi
hum shehar meiN aawaara phirey raat gaey tak
**
"Kaaf" (for a change :~) )
Re: Bait Bazi – July 2007
kaantoo'n kii chubhan paye phuulo'n kaa maza bhi dil dard ke mausam mai roya bhii hansa'a bhiye ![]()
Re: Bait Bazi -- July 2007
yeh bhi adaab hamaray hain tumhain kia maloom
hum tumhain jeet k haray hain tumhain kia maloom
"meem"
plz ab aisay sahir post karain jo "yey" aur "alif" pa na khatma hotay hain
Re: Bait Bazi -- July 2007
yeh bhi adaab hamaray hain tumhain kia maloom hum tumhain jeet k haray hain tumhain kia maloom
"meem"
plz ab aisay sahir post karain jo "yey" aur "alif" pa na khatma hotay hain
mujhe barish ki chaht nai doboya,,,,,
mai pukhta shahr ka kaccha maka'n ho'n.............
"noon"
Re: Bait Bazi -- July 2007
lol
nice shair
Re: Bait Bazi -- July 2007
na tujh ko maat hui na mujh ko maat hui
so ab k dono ki chalain badal k dekhtay hain
"noon"
Re: Bait Bazi -- July 2007
Naam Bhi Jiska Zubaan Per Tha Dua'on Ki Tarah
Wo Mujhay Milta Raha Na'Aashna-on Ki Tarah
'Hay' (Halway Wali)
PS: Btw Bait Bazi Ka Maza Hi Iss Main Haina Ke Opponent Ke Pass Required Sher Khatam Hojayen :D
Re: Bait Bazi – July 2007
ab halway wali heh kaha say laye ![]()
ye ![]()
Re: Bait Bazi – July 2007
Aap Ne Haathi Wali ‘Hey’ Se Suna Dia.. Ghalat ![]()
Re: Bait Bazi -- July 2007
Naam Bhi Jiska Zubaan Per Tha Dua'on Ki Tarah Wo Mujhay Milta Raha Na'Aashna-on Ki Tarah
'Hay' (Halway Wali)
PS: Btw Bait Bazi Ka Maza Hi Iss Main Haina Ke Opponent Ke Pass Required Sher Khatam Hojayen :D
hua hai tujh say bicharnay k baad yeh maloom
kay to nahi tha, teray saath aik dunya thi
sher khatam nahi huay but "alif" aur "yey" say he chal raha hai aur in alfaaz k sher buhat hain so kuch diff karain
Re: Bait Bazi -- July 2007
Hudd Se Guzar Gai Yahan Rasm-e-Qahiri
Iss Deher Ko Abb Iss Ki Saza Dena Chaheay
'Ye'
Re: Bait Bazi -- July 2007
hua hai tujh say bicharnay k baad yeh maloom kay to nahi tha, teray saath aik dunya thi
sher khatam nahi huay but "alif" aur "yey" say he chal raha hai aur in alfaaz k sher buhat hain so kuch diff karain
Ap Ne Bhi Haathi Wali 'Hey' Se Sunaya :(
Btw I have Place A Sher Wid 'Halway Wali Hey' :)
Re: Bait Bazi -- July 2007
Ya to har shakhs tazkira karey tera
ya koi bhi hum sey guftugu na karey
"Ye"
Re: Bait Bazi -- July 2007
"ye"
Re: Bait Bazi -- July 2007
Ye jhulasti dhoop meiN bhi tujhey jalney nahi de ga
muhabbat ka jo aik abar humara hey terey saath
He''
Re: Bait Bazi -- July 2007
Hum Na Hongay To Bhala Kaun Manaye Ga Tumhain
Yeh Buri Baat Hai Her Baat Pe Rootha Na Karo
'Wow'
Re: Bait Bazi -- July 2007
**Wo gumaan gumaan sa kayas sa,kabhi door sa kahbi paas sa,
Kabhi chandani main chupa howa kabhi khushboon main basa hoa.
-alif-
**
Re: Bait Bazi -- July 2007
gaaf :D
Re: Bait Bazi -- July 2007
Go Zara Si Baat Pe Barsoon Ke Yaranay Gaye
Lekin Chalo Ye To Hua Kuch Log Pehchanay Gaye
'Ye'
Re: Bait Bazi -- July 2007
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Ye bhi hey tamanna ke usey dil sey bhula deiN
is dil ko magar us ki zaroorat bhi bohat hey
**
"Ye"