Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
Yeh din yeh raat yeh lamhay achay say lagtay hain..
Tumhain sochoon to saaray silsilay achay say lagtay hain…
Bohat door tak chalna or phir bhi waheen rehna..
Humain tum say tum hi tak k Da-ayray achay say lagtay hain
"Noon"
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
Bohot Khoob. Aap ki picture say bhee yahi mehsoos hota hai 
Main bhee hairaan thee k aakhir aap thaktay kyun nahin hain 
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
nasiim-e-subah gulashan me.n gulo.n se khelatii hogii
kisii kii aaKhirii hichakii kisii kii dillagii hogii
tumhe.n daanistaa mahafil me.n jo dekhaa ho to mujarim huu.N
nazar aaKhir nazar hai be-iraadaa uTh ga_ii hogii
"Ye"
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
ye ju nai larki aye hei kahin wohi tu nai
us nay her chehra yahi sooch ke dekha ho ga
"alif"
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
aaj dil khol ke roye hai.n to yuu.N Khush hai 'Faraz'
chand lamho.n kii ye raahat bhii ba.Dii ho jaise
"Ye"
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
Yeh log kaisay magar dushmanee nibhaatay hain
Hamain tau raas na aaeen muhabbatain karnee
"Ye"
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
ye fazaa raas na aayegii tumhe.n ai "Najmi"
yaad guzare hue lamhaat kii taazaa na karo
"WavÖ"
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
Waqt-fursat tha main ibrat kada hastii main
Kaf-e-afsoos millay jiss nay kia gum mujh ko
"Waoo"
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
Woh havaaon kee tarah Khaanaa-bajaan phirta hai
Aik jhonkaa hai jo aaye gaa, guzar jaaye gaa
Aakharish woh bhee kaheen rait pe baithee ho gee
Teraa yeh pyaar bhee dariyaa hai utar jaaye gaa
"Alif"
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
wo muddate.n huii.n hai.n kisii se judaa hue
lekin ye dil ki aag abhii tak bujhii nahii.n
aane ko aa chukaa thaa kinaaraa bhii saamane
Khud usake paas merii hii nayyaa gaii nahii.n
"NooN"
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
Naik nay Naik Bud nay Bud jana mujhay
jis may jitna zarf tha utna pehchana mujhay
"Ye"
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
Yeh Na Thi Humari Kismat Ke Visa - Lay - Yaar Hota
Kuch Aur Jeetay Rehte Yahee Intazaar Houta
Alif
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
[quote=NikamiJano]
Rules of Bait Bazi:
1. Shair should be genuine and not your own. Post your own in Bait Bazi — Personal Edition of Sho'ra-e-Gupshup.
2. Dont break the chain and always follow the last letter of the last posted shair.
3. Always mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair.
4. If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other's knowledge sake).
5. Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Rubai, qita) at max will be allowed.
6. Avoid posting film songs.
Vivo k is sher se bait bazi shoro ki jati hai
koi phool laakh qareeb ho kabhi meiN ne uss ko chu'a nahiN
ye khuda ki dain ajeeb hay keh issi ka naam naseeb hay
jissey tu ne chaha woh mil gaya, jissey meiN ne chaha mila nahiN
next "noon"
Naa ganwaao naawak e neem kash! Dil e reza reza ganwaa diyaa! Jo bachey hain sang samet lo! Tan e daagh daagh lutaa diyaa! Mere chaaragar ko naveed do! Saf e dushmanaan ko khabar karo! Jo woh qarz rakhte the jaan par! Woh hisaab aaj chukaa diyaa!
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
[quote=Sahaab]
Yeh kyun hamesha meri talab hee tumhain sadaa day
Kabhi tau khud bhee sapurd'gi kee thakan main aa'o
Kabhi tau aisa bhee ho k logon kee baat sunn kar
Meri taraf tum raqaabaton kee jalan main aa'o
"Wa'o"
Wo nayee nayee shikaayatein! Wo mazey mazey ki hikaayatein! Mujhe yaad sab hain zara zara! Tumhe yaad ho keh na yaad ho? Jisey aap ginte the aashnaa jise aap kehte the baa wafaa! Main wahi hoon Momin e mubitlaa! Tumhe yaad ho keh na yaad ho? Hakeem Momin Khan Momin Dehlavi]
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
[quote=Bholay Bisray]
vo shamaa ban ke Khud hii akele jalaa kiyaa
paravaane kal kii raat pareshaan se gaye
aayaa teraa salaam na aayaa hai Khat ko_ii
ham aaKhirii safar ke bhii saamaan se gaye
"Ye"
Yeh na thi hamaari qismat jo wisaal e yaar hotaa! Agar aur jeetey rahtey yahi intazaar hotaa! Koi mere dil se poochhe tere teer e neemkash ko! Yeh khalish kahaan se hoti jo jigar ke paar hotaa? [Mirza Assadullah Khan Ghalib]
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
[quote=Amal]
Yeh udaas udaas phirna, yeh kisi sey bhi na milna
yuNhi be'sabab nahin sab, koi saaneyha to ho ga
"Alif"
[quote= Meer Taqi Meer]
Ab ke bhi sair e baagh ki ji mein hawas rahi!
Apni jagah bahaar mein kunj e kafas rahi!
Main paa shikasta jaa na saka qaafile talak!
Aati agarche der sadaa e jaras rahi!
"Ye"
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
[quote=kaleemhk]
Ik shaam ki dahleez par, baithay rahey woh dher tak,
Aankhon say kee batain bahut, munh say kaha kuch bhi nahin
"NooN"
<O:p</O:p
[quote=Bahadur Shah Zafar]
Na kisi ki aankh ka noor hoon! Na kisi ke dil ka qaraar hoon!
Jo kisi ke kaam na aa sakey! Main wo eik musht e ghubaar hoon!
Paye faatiha koi aaye kyun? Koi chaar phool charhaaye Kyun?
Koi aake shamma jalaaye kyun? Main wo bekasi ka mazaar hoon!
"Noon"
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
[quote=Bholay Bisray]
Nice shair Amal!
na jii bhar ke dekhaa na kuchh baat kii
ba.Dii aarazuu thii mulaaqaat kii
ka_ii saal se kuchh Khabar hii nahii.n
kahaa.N din guzaaraa kahaa.N raat kii
:)
"Ye"
[quote=Faiz Ahmad Faiz]
Yeh jafaa e gham ka chaara, woh najaat e dil ka aalam!
Tera husn dast e Eissa! Teri yaad roo e Mariyam! **
**Dil o jaan fidaa e raahey! Kabhi aa ke dekh hamdam!
Sar e koo e dil figaaraan! Shab e aarzoo ka aalam!
"Meem"
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
[quote=Sahaab]
Very nice ash'aar, Amal and BB :)
ye sochtaa huun k main but-parast kyuun na huaa
tujhe qariib jo paauun to khud se dar jaauun
main zindaa thaa k teraa intazaar khatm na ho
jo tuu milaa hai to ab sochtaa huun mar jaauun
"Noon"
[quote=Meer Taqi Meer]
**Naaz ki us ke lab ki kya kahiye! Pankhudi ik gulaab ki si hai!**
** Main jo bola to kaha ye aawaaz! Usi khaana kharaab ki si hai!**
** "Ye"**