Bait Bazi-II 2006

Rules of Bait Bazi:
1. Shair should be genuine and not your own. Post your own in Bait Bazi — Personal Edition of Sho’ra-e-Gupshup.
2. Dont break the chain and always follow the last letter of the last posted shair.
3. Always mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair.
4. If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other’s knowledge sake).
5. Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Rubai, qita) at max will be allowed.
6. Avoid posting film songs.

Vivo k is sher se bait bazi shoro ki jati hai
Usse paak nazroN se choomna bhi ibadattoN maiN shumaar hay
koi phool laakh qareeb ho kabhi meiN ne uss ko chu’a nahiN
ye khuda ki dain ajeeb hay keh issi ka naam naseeb hay
jissey tu ne chaha woh mil gaya, jissey meiN ne chaha mila nahiN


next “noon”

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

na koi khwab hamaray hayn na taberayein hayn
yeh jo pani pay banee hoe tasweerein hayn

kiya khabar kab kese insan pay chataan giray
qarya-e-sang hayn aur kanch ke tameerain hayn

"NOON"

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

nighaahooN maiN shama tamana jala k taki hooN ghi tum b raahaiN kisi ki kisi ne tu wada kia ho gha tum se kisi ne tumhaiN b rulaa'ya tu ho gha "alif"

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

aik tum ho kay samhajtay nahi ho hum ko
aik hum hayn kay tumhary hayn tumhay kiya maloom
yah bhi aAdab humary hian tumhay kiya maloom
hum tumhay jeet ker haray hayn tumhay kiya maloom

"MEEM"

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006


meRay khaloos k muqabil thei mohabat ki roshni
tum ne bhi auRooN ki taRha dualat ko chuN lee'ya

"alif"

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

Ah ko chahiye ik umar asar honey tak
kon jeeta hai terei zulf k sar honey tak

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

Kuch to hawa sard thi kuch tha tera khayal bhi
dil ko khushi k sath sath hota raha malal bhi
meri talab tha aik shakhs wo jo nhi mila to phir
hath dua sey yoon gira k bhool gya sala bhi

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

Iss ka socha bhi na thaa ab ke jo tanha guzri
Wo qayamat he ganemat thi jo yakja guzri

Aa gale laga lou'n tujh ko mere pyare dushman
Ik meri baat nahi tujh pay bhi kya kya guzri

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

Ajnabi ban k jo guzra hai abhi
tha kisi waqt mein apna logo
khush na tha mujh sey bichar k wo bhi
us k chehrey per likha tha logo

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

woh bara raheem-o-kareem hai mujhey ye saft bhi ata karey
tujhey bholney ki dua karun meri dua mein asar na ho

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

wo mujh sey pooch raha tha batao kaisa laga
puraney zakhmon ko choro ye ghao kaisa laga

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

nice sher rani sahiba 3 3 sher :) sath main likh b dya karain last k kis se next shoro..next one "alif"

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

abhi to ishq mai aisa bhi haal hona hai
ke ashq rokna tum say muhaal hona hai

tumhain to habar hi nahi'n tum to lot jao gay
tumhare hijr mai lamha bhi saal hona hai

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006


ye dil hai aik khana-e-wayraa'N magaR saleem
jalta hai ik dee'yaa sar-e-dewaR dekhna

"alif"

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

Ashar mere youn to zamane ke liye hain
Kuch shair faqat un ko sunane ke liye hain

Ye elm ka sauda, ye risale, ye kitabe'n
Ik shaks ki yado'n ko bhulane ke liye hain

Next "Noon"

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

Neend a jaye to kya mehfilen barpa dekhun
ankh khul jaye to tanhai ka sehra dekhun
sham bhi ho gai dhundla bhi gain ankhen meri
bhoolney waley main kab tak tera rasta dekhun

NEXT"" noon""

nikammi g mera khayal tha itna adraak to sab hi rakhtey hon gey k kis sey shuru karna hai

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

Nikal ke der-o-kaba se agar milta na me hana
To thukraye huve insaa khuda jaane kaha'n jaate

Tumhari be-rukhi ne laaj rakh li baada khane ki
Tum aankho'n se pila dete to paimane kaha'n jaate

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

yoon dil sey kissi dard ka paimaan nahi kartey
ab jaan pey bani bhi hai tu darmaan nahi kartey

poet: Ahmad Faraz

"yey"

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

Ye Musla ab ahl-e-mohabbat ka hai apna
Marte hain to kuch aap pe ahsa'n nahi kartey

poet: Ahmad Faraz

"yey"

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

Ye shikayat hai bas doori ki
mujh ko qurbat teri hasil kab thi

***"YE"