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Assalam-o-Alaikum All,
Yeh teri kaj-adaaiyan, koee aur seh k dikhaye tau
Taray maray beech jo nibah hai,maray hoslay ka kamal hai
"YE"
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
Wa alaikum assalam Sahaab , welocme to GS Poetry She’r is very nice:k:
Ye meri talash ka jurm hay ya meri wafa ka qasoor hay
jo dil kay jitna qareeb hay wuh nazar sey utna hi door hay
Ye’’
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Thanks Gul 
Ye saane’ha hai k wa’izon say ulajh paray ham
Ye waqe’a hai k pee rahay thay sharaab saaray
Faraz kis nay maray muqaddar main likh diye hain
Bus aik daryaa ki dosti main saraab saaray
“Ye”
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Beautiful Shair **Sahaab, **aap new here or with new (or duplicate) nick? :) ----------
ye kyaa ke ek jahaa.N ko karo vaqf-e-iztaraab
ye kyaa ke ek dil ko shakebaa.N na kar sako
aisaa na ho ye dard bane dard-e-laazaval
aisaa na ho ke tum bhii mudaavaa na kar sako
"WavO"
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Brand New, BB Had been a silent admirer of this Mehfil before. Now, thought to share my Intikhaab as well. Hope it won’t be too bad.
Thanks for admiring
Weh’shat thee magar chaak libaada bhee nahin tha
You.n zakhm numa’ee ka iraada bhee nahin tha
Hum mar’haba kehtay teray her teer-e-sitam par
Such baat k dil itna kushaada bhee nahin tha
“Alif”
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Brand New, BB :) Had been a silent admirer of this Mehfil before. Now, thought to share my Intikhaab as well. Hope it won't be too bad. Thanks for admiring :)
ok ji aap nay kaha tu hum aitbaar kurtay hain :) nice shair again! i believe you know the fact that your own poetry should go to Poetry section 2 :) so lets see if you comeout with something?
ai paikar-e-mahabuubii mai.n kis se tujhe dekhuu.N
jis ne tujhe dekhaa hai vo diidaa-e-hairaa.N hai
sau baar teraa daaman haatho.n me.n mere aayaa
jab aa.Nkh khulii dekhaa apanaa hii girebaa.N hai
"Ye"
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
ye chaand agar kabhi taaroN sey kisi roz larrey to kya ho ga!
kisi roz yuNhi zid meiN aa kar na raat dhaley to kya ho ga!
"alif"
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
nikami ji pore ghazal post kar he dayein ap =)
apnay hatho'n say khud he likh kar mujhe **
**janay phir kion mitaa diyaa us nay ..
-YEH-
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:halo: 
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sorry 
link he day dayein us ghazal ka at least =\
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Yeh kyun hamesha meri talab hee tumhain sadaa day
Kabhi tau khud bhee sapurd'gi kee thakan main aa'o
Kabhi tau aisa bhee ho k logon kee baat sunn kar
Meri taraf tum raqaabaton kee jalan main aa'o
"Wa'o"
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Wo Picture say dhoka ho giya na unhain 
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vo shamaa ban ke Khud hii akele jalaa kiyaa
paravaane kal kii raat pareshaan se gaye
aayaa teraa salaam na aayaa hai Khat ko_ii
ham aaKhirii safar ke bhii saamaan se gaye
"Ye"
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**
Yeh udaas udaas phirna, yeh kisi sey bhi na milna
yuNhi be'sabab nahin sab, koi saaneyha to ho ga
"Alif"
**
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Ik shaam ki dahleez par, baithay rahey woh dher tak,
Aankhon say kee batain bahut, munh say kaha kuch bhi nahin
- "NooN"*<O:p</O:p
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Nice shair Amal!
na jii bhar ke dekhaa na kuchh baat kii
ba.Dii aarazuu thii mulaaqaat kii
ka_ii saal se kuchh Khabar hii nahii.n
kahaa.N din guzaaraa kahaa.N raat kii
:)
"Ye"
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Very nice ash'aar, Amal and BB :)
ye sochtaa huun k main but-parast kyuun na huaa
tujhe qariib jo paauun to khud se dar jaauun
main zindaa thaa k teraa intazaar khatm na ho
jo tuu milaa hai to ab sochtaa huun mar jaauun
"Noon"
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Shukriya *Sahaab *!
nashtar hai mere haath me.n, kaa.ndho.n pe maiqadaa
lo mai.n ilaaj-e-dard-e-jigar leke aa gayaa
'faakir' sanamakade me.n na aataa mai.n lauTakar
ik zaKhm bhar gayaa thaa idhar leke aa gayaa
"AliF"
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Dedicate to Amal:
AMAL SAY BHI MANGA WAFA SAY BHI MANGA
MAIN NAY TUJHAY TERY RAZA SAY BHI MANGA
AGAR KUCH NA HO SAKA TO DUA SAY BHI MANGA
KASAM HAI KHUDA KI KHUDA SAY BHI MANGA
"Alif"
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Aatish-e-namrood hai, har samt hai ik Karbalaa
Zindagi O Zindagi, kitnee tuu mushkil ho gaee
Kab Teree Rehmat ko josh aaye ga Rabb-e-Mustafaa (SAW)
Aaj phir aal-e-Muhammad (SAW) gham se ghaayel ho gaee
"Ye"