Bait Bazi-II 2006

Amal · July 31, 2006, 10:54pm

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

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Use kehna ke palkoN per na taankey khaab ki jhaalar
samandar ke kinarey ghar bana kar kuchh nahi milta
yeh acha hey ke aapas ke bharam na tootney paeiN
kabhi bhi dostoN ko aazma kar kuch nahi milta

"Alif"

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goodnews · July 31, 2006, 11:16pm

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

Khub Amal,

Usy khna December A giya hy,
December ky guzarty hi
**Baras ik or mazi ki **
Gupha main dob jay ga
(Arsh Sidiqi)
:peshow:Alif

Amal · July 31, 2006, 11:33pm

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

Thanx goodnews :)

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Abhi kuch deir meiN jab phir merey tanha dil ko
fikr aa ley gi ke tanhaai ka kya chaara kareiN!
dard aaey ga dabey paaoN, liyay surkh chiraagh
wo jo ek dard dharakta hey kaheiN dil sey parey

"Ye"
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goodnews · August 1, 2006, 1:07am

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

U welcome **Amal and **behtreen hamysha ki trha,
…

**yaaro mujhy muaf karo main nashy mein hoon **
ab do to jaam khaali hii do main nashy mein hoon
yaa haatho.n haath lo mujhy jaisy ky jaamy-may
yaa thuri duur saath chalo main nashy mein hoon
(Meer Taqi Meer)

“Noon”:peshow:

darwesh · August 1, 2006, 2:07am

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" Nahi Ab Koi Khwaab Aisa Teri Surat Jo Dikhlaye
Bichar Kar Tujhse Kiss Manzil Pe Hum Tanhaa Chale Aaye. "

peace_please · August 1, 2006, 2:36am

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"ye or baat hy dushman hua hy aaj mager
woh mera dost tha kel tak ussy bura na kahoo
na janny kitnni hi majboriyoon ka qaidi ho
wo sath choor gya hy tu kuch gila na kero"

goodnews · August 1, 2006, 3:07am

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

vafaa ke bhys mein koii raqiiby shahar bhii hai
hazar! ke shehar ka qaatil tabiiby-shehar bhii hai

karii hai jang ky ab ky muqaabile pe ‘Faraz’
amiiry shahar bhii hai aur khatiiby shahar bhii hai

:peshow:“Ye”
Shehar(city)?

I_am_in_Love · August 1, 2006, 3:21am

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Pride ka nsha sab nashon se bura:nono4:
…

ye or bat k manzil pe ham puhanch na sky
mugar yeh kam he k rahon ko chan bethy hain

goodnews · August 1, 2006, 3:37am

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

Naz hy Taqaty guftar py insanon ko
Bat krny ka saliqa nahi nadanon ko
(Allama Iqbal)
Wao:peshow:

Bholay_Bisray · August 1, 2006, 5:49am

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

vo savaa yaad aaye bhulaane ke baad
zindagii ba.Dh ga_ii zahar khaane ke baad
dil sulagataa rahaa aashiyaane ke baad
aag Tha.nDii hu_ii ik zamaane ke baad

"DaL"

goodnews · August 1, 2006, 5:55am

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Dil sy ju bat niklti hy asar rakhti hy
Pr nahi taqty prwaz mgr rakhti hy
Allama Iqbal

“Ye”:peshow:

Bholay_Bisray · August 1, 2006, 6:03am

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

ye ajanabii sii ma.nzile.n aur raftagaa.N kii yaad
tanha_iiyo.n kaa zahar hai aur ham hai.n dosto.n

"NooN"

goodnews · August 1, 2006, 6:56am

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[RIGHT]Na dykha ankh utha kr jalway Dost
Qiyamat main tmasha ban giya main
(Allama Muhammad Iqbal)
“Noon pr Noon”:peshow:[/RIGHT]
…
Khudi ki khlwaton main gum rha main
Khuda k samny guya na tha main

Bholay_Bisray · August 1, 2006, 7:19am

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na kisii kii aa.Nkh kaa nuur huu.N na kisii ke dil kaa qaraar huu.N
jo kisii ke kaam na aa sake mai.n vo ek musht-e-Gubaar huu.N
na to mai.n kisii kaa habiib huu.N na to mai.n kisii kaa raqiib huu.N
jo biga.D gayaa vo nasiib huu.N jo uja.D gayaa vo dayaar huu.N

"NooN"

goodnews · August 1, 2006, 7:42am

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Wah wah BBH, Bahadur Shah Zafar k klam ka guhry abdar chun kr dil khush kr diya jity rho,
Na tum mery na dil meraa na jaany naatavaa.N merii
tassavur mein bhii aa sakatii nahin majabuuriyaaN merii

Na tum aaye na chain aayaa na maut aaii shaby vaadaa
dily-muztair thaa main thaa aur thii betaabiyaan merii
“Faiyaz Hashmi”
" YE":peshow:

Bholay_Bisray · August 1, 2006, 7:53am

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**Ji shukriya! but itni mushkil urdu … … pur kay laga jaysay koi Bahdur shah zafar ki koi choori kur li hay

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goodnews · August 1, 2006, 8:05am

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Hahaaha,Shukriya ki koi bat nahi yeh tu mera fraztha.Rahi bat Mushkil urdu ki tu Socha itna classical shyr samjh kr hi type kia hoga tu hamari salees urdu bhi samajh lo gy, Khyr guhry abdar mera khiyal hy qimti heery ko khty hain. “YE” sy shyr nahi aya.Shab Bakhyr

Bholay_Bisray · August 1, 2006, 8:43am

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Shair tu sumagh k hi likha tha *though urdu itni aachi bhi nahi hay mayri....but aap ki urdu thori mushkil lugi,

Sorry Shair likhna i forgot! :)*

ye ab khulaa hai ki ko_ii bhii manzar meraa na thaa
mai.n jis me.n rah rahaa thaa vahii ghar meraa na thaa
mai.n jis ko ek umr sambhaale phiraa kiyaa
miTTii bataa rahii vo paikar meraa na thaa

"Alif"

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · August 1, 2006, 9:10am

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Aey sarab hasratoN key zara baat suntey jaana
jo choor choor ho pehley usey aur kya sataana
honton pe kuch nahi hay,Ansoon bhari hein ankhein
lagta hey aaj uss ney seekhaa hey naya bahaana

Wahab_Gujjar · August 1, 2006, 9:43am

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*aa bhii jaao kii zindagii kam hai *
*tum nahii.n ho to har Khushii kam hai *

vaadaa kar ke ye kaun aayaa nahii.n
shahar me.n aaj raushanii kam hai.

YE