Bait Bazi-II 2006

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yeh-hi dil tha keh turusta tha maraasim ke lya
ab yeh-hi turk-e talug ke bahaanay maaNge
zindagi hum tere daghooN se rahe sharminda
aur tu hai keh sada aina khaanay maaNge


"Ye"

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Ye koi sooraj sey jaa ke keh dey ke apni kirnoon ko chun ke rakhey
meiN apne sehra ke zarrey zarrey ko khud chamakna sikha raha hoon

"Noon"

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

Na dawa milay na nawa milay
Teray Dil maiN dard utha karay
Tu Jo mauT kii Duaa karay
teriii Umr aur daraaz ho

wao''

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Woh harfy raz k mujh ko sikha giya junun
Khuda mujhy nafsy Jibrail dy tu khon!!!
(Allama Iqbal)
:(“YE” nahi “Noon”:peshow:

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"Ye" ???

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Muazrat! Ky Shyr Edit kia kia tha; pehly Mahdrja zyl shyr tha by Iqbal,
Wohi/ meri kam nasibi wohi teri byniazi
Mary kam kuch na aya yeh kmaly ny nwazi
sahih yad nahi arha shuro main" yehi" hi k "wohi" 10years bad ju shyr zbani yad hain on main sy kuch bhol sa gay hain fysla nahi ho rha tha "whoi" "yehi" shuro main Allama ki koi books nahi socha Iqbal k klam main ghalti ki gunjaish nishta, shyr badal diya magar "Ye" drust krna yad na rha Thanks for correction."Noon "sy kho ab.

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:lajawab:

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Jigar Amal.... Yeh Sher Aapki Nazr !

Kuch Kam Nazar Yeh Manzar Hairat Se Tak Rahe Hain
Kajla Rahe Hain Suraj Zar're Chamak Rahe Hain.... !


Na Yaad Rakhta Tha Mujh Ko Na Bhool Jataa Tha
Kabhi Kabhi Woh Mujhe Yuon Bhi Aazmataa Tha !!

Mushfiq Khwaja.

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Subhan Allah kia bat hy. Dash Sahib:lajawab:Buhat umda.
aabalaapaa koi is dasht mein aayaa hogaa ***
varnaa aaNdhii mein diyaa kis ne jalaayaa hogaa
*
***pyaas jalaty huye kaaNTon kii bujhaai hogii ***
risaty paanii ko haathelii pe sajaayaa hogaa
(Meena Kumari “Nazz”)
Alif pr Alif :peshow:

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Aik Mudat Say Tari Yad Bhee Aaie Na Hamain
Or Ham Bhool Ga'ye Hon Tujhey Aisa Bhee Nahi

"n"

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“I” guya english main byt bazi ho gi ab “I” kia shyr ho ga Irshad:confused: :blush:

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I assume this is “Ye”
Ye muamly hain nazuk ju teri razza ho tu kr!
K mujhy tu khush na aya yeh tariqy khanqahi
(Allama Iqbal)
“Ye” agian:peshow:

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I" guya english main byt bazi ho gi ab “I” kia shyr ho ga Irshad:confused: :blush:

sorry it should be “N”

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I assume this is “Ye”
Ye muamly hain nazuk ju teri razza ho tu kr!
K mujhy tu khush na aya yeh tariqy khanqahi
(Allama Iqbal)
“Ye” agian:peshow:

i think

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Yad Us Ki Itni Khoub Nahi Meer Baz Aa
Na'dan Phir Jee Say Bhula'ya Na Jaye Ga

"Alif"

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aaj to bysabab udaas hai jii
ishq hotaa to koi baat bhii thi
tu jo itanaa udaas hai ‘Nasir’
tujhe kyaa ho gayaa bataa to sahii
(Nasir Kazmi):peshow: “YE”

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Yeh Arzoo Thi Tujhay Gul K Ru'baru Kartay
Hum Or Bulbul-e-Betaab Guftagu Kartay

(Haider Ali Aatish)
"Ye"

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ye tabiyat hai to Khud aazaar ban jaaingy ham
chaaraagar roainngy aur GamKhvaar ban jaingy ham
(Ahmed Fraz)

:peshow:“Meem”

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Bari dyr ki mehrban aty aty.:halo:
Meem hy ab

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Meer Un Neem Baz Aankhon Main
Sari Masti Sharab Ki See Hai

Meer Taqi Meer
"Ye"