Bait Bazi-II 2006

goodnews · July 31, 2006, 1:47am

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Thanks a lot for appreciation Amal sahib I am feeling proud of my self.Ap ky is Amal ny meri sham Janat bna di Ap ky Ashar o andaz ky bary main itna khna hy k on ki tareef krna tu soraj ko chiragh dikhany ky mutradif hy. Noon sy shyr nazar hy,
na jaane aaj ye kis kaa Khayaal aayaa hai
Khushii kaa rang liye har malaal aayaa** hai**
kiyaa na zikr bhii jis kaa tamaam umr kabhii
hamaare kaam bahut vo malaal aayaa hai
(Ahmed Hamdani)
“YE”
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darwesh · July 31, 2006, 2:07am

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Doston Ye **Lebnan Ke Shaheedon Ke Naam:**

" Yahi ghari hai ke Tareekh Khud Ko Dohraye
Mili Hai Aik Zamane Main Qatl E Aam Ki Chout " !!

Ghulaam Murtaza Rahi.

goodnews · July 31, 2006, 2:31am

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HAsby hal o halat shyr hy, Darwesh Sahib.

Tal na skty thy agar jang main ar jaty thy
Paon shyron k bhi mydan sy ukhar jaty thy
[RIGHT](Allam Muhammed Iqbal)[/RIGHT]
:peshow:“Ye”

Bholay_Bisray · July 31, 2006, 6:40am

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**Correct! I luved most this one **

goodnews · July 31, 2006, 7:21am

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Ki Mery Qattal K bad os ny Jafa sy toba!
Hay os zood pshyman ka pshyman hona

Ghaliban" Ghalib" ka hy
:peshow:** “Alif”**

I_am_in_Love · July 31, 2006, 7:51am

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“Phool kr kuppa hona” jumle main Istamal kro:D
…

yon boohat hans ke mila tha laikin
dil hi dil main voh khafa ho jese
by my favorite P.S

Bholay_Bisray · July 31, 2006, 8:59am

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yeh sakoon-e jaan ki ghari dhale tau chiragh-e dil hi na bujh chale
wo bala se ho ghum-e ishq ya ghum-e rozgaar koi tau ho
sir-e muqtil-e shub-e aarzoo hai kuch tau ishq ki aabroo
jo nahin aadoo tau Faraz tu keh naseeb-e daar koi tau ho

"Wavo"

I_am_in_Love · July 31, 2006, 9:11am

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vo tu khushboo hy hawaon main bikhar jae ga
masla phool ka he phool kidhar jae ga

                                                                                                                  P.S.

Bholay_Bisray · July 31, 2006, 9:34am

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ab kise waza-e mohabbat ka khayal
aur hi loag yahaan thay pehle
ab to khudh per bhi nahin zaam-e wafa
tujh se hum shikwa kinaaN thay pehle

"Ye"

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · July 31, 2006, 10:46am

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Yaas meiN daaman-e-ummeed na chuhtega kabhii
raat bhar kartey haiN hum noor-e-sahar kii baateiN

Meri aankhoN meiN hay ek shahr-e-wafaa kaa manzarKaisey bhoolooN maiN terii raahguzar kii baateiN

Amal · July 31, 2006, 11:50am

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goodnews, you deserve it :k: … And thanx for liking my aashaars
**
Na gubaar meiN na gulaab meiN mujhey deikhna
merey dard ki aab-o-taab meiN mujhey deikhna
kisi waqt shaam-e-malaal meiN mujhey sochna
kabhi apney dil ki kitaab meiN mujhey deikhna

“Alife”

**

Bholay_Bisray · July 31, 2006, 12:44pm

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ab do aalam se sadaa-e-saaz aatii hai mujhe
dil kii aahaT se terii aavaaz aatii hai mujhe
yaa samaat kaa bharam hai yaa kisii naGme.n kii guu.Nj
ek pahachaanii hu_ii aavaaz aatii hai mujhe

"Ye"

goodnews · July 31, 2006, 2:52pm

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Nice Again Amal &** BBh.**

yaar thaa gulzaar thaa baady-sabaa thii main na thaa

laayaqy paa bosy jaan kiyaa hinaa thii main na thaa ?

main ne puuchhaa kyaa huaa vo aap kaa husn-o-shabaab

haNs ke bolaa vo sanam shaany Khudaa thii main na thaa

(Bahadur Shah Zafar)

“Alif”:peshow:

[RIGHT]Jalny(Hssad) pr bhi koi shyr hy kia?
I am in love needs it![/RIGHT]

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · July 31, 2006, 3:17pm

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Weldone GN:k:

Achanak ho chali raghbat ussi sey
mujhay dekhaa tha jis nay sadgii sey

Amal · July 31, 2006, 3:18pm

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Thanx goodnews :)
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Ye din ye raat ye lamhey mujhey achey lagtey heiN
tumhey sochooN to sarey sil-siley achey lagtey heiN
bohat door tak chalna magar phir bhi waheeN rehna
mujhey tum sey tum tak ke daerey achey lagtey heiN

"Noon"

**

Bholay_Bisray · July 31, 2006, 4:05pm

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na hareef-e jaan, na shareek-e ghum, shub-e intazaar koi tau ho
kise buzm-e shauk mei lain hum, dil-e be-qarar koi tau ho
kise zindagi hai aziz ab, kise aarzoo-e shub-e taurub
magar ai nigar-e wafa talub, tera aitebar koi tau ho

"Wavo"

ded9211 · July 31, 2006, 8:55pm

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Waqt ky sath ham bhi ay Nasir
khar o khas ki trha bhay gay
"ye"

goodnews · July 31, 2006, 9:49pm

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[RIGHT]Nwan Ayan ay sohnia?[/RIGHT]

Ye pehly soch lo phir or bhi tanha na ho jana
osy chuny ki khahish main osy pany ki khahish main
Buhat sy zakahm hain dil main magar ik Zakham aysa
Ju Jal Uthta hy ratoon main, ju loaw Dyta hy barish main

(Noshi Gilani)
“Noon”:peshow:

Thanks GT and Amal u r more then welcome*:)** *

darwesh · July 31, 2006, 10:09pm

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** G-N....Huzoor Kiya Kahna !**

" Nahi Aati To Yaad Unki Mahinon Tak Nahi Aati
** Magar Jab Yaad Aate Hain Tou Aksar Yaad Aate Hain "**

Hasrat Mohaani.

goodnews · July 31, 2006, 10:18pm

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DASH ji shukriya and Shandar moti nikal kr lay hain Clasic shairi ky samundar sy, Humm phir NOON tu li jiy Noon sy Noshi Gilani ka nooni shyr,

Nam ly ly ky na mera shehr ki nazaron main A
Mujh sy milna hy tu mery dil ky sehraon main A
Is safar main dykh ghul jata hy Mati ka badan
Mujh sy milny ki na khahish kr na barsaton main A
Alif
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