Bait Bazi — Personal Edition

[fazeelat]

Re: Bait Bazi — Personal Edition

Ik aks mery zehn mein shakal nah ho saka
tu dil mein raha mger meri aqal nah ho saka

[umer.ashraf]

Re: Bait Bazi — Personal Edition

Aqal hai to phir junooN nahiN hai
kia tere alfaz meiN khooN nahin hai?

[system]

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yaqeen hoga tuhjay meree muhabbat ka k jab

khushi k badlay tere ghum tamaam lay loonga

[fazeelat]

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Apny honton per sajana chahti hoon
aa tujhy mein gungunana chahti hoon

[umer.ashraf]

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Na meiN koi geet hoon ke aap ke laboN tak rasai ho
Na mein koi khyal hoon ke mujh mein koi gehrai ho

log muhabbat ka ehsas to dilate rahe zindagi bhar
Saath kisi ne naa diya magur ke kahin ruswai ho

[system]

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woh gungunaata sa lehja wo baat kertee nazar
mere wajoud ti taptee zamee.N ko tar ker dey

[umer.ashraf]

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Yeh dhoop, yeh dil aur yeh taptee hui zameen
Meri dua ko aisa asar de ke sub sard kar dey

[Golden_Scorpion_1]

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Wah… Very Nice… WE are getting some very nice Poetry here

Thanks to All of You for Sharing ur Poetry

[umer.ashraf]

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^^^^
"yeh unn ka daad dene ka andaz, yeh masoomiat
Mere khudaya main isse kia matlab doon, tu hi bata"

[umer.ashraf]

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Aik upna dil tha, baher aane ko bechain
Warna dunya kia thi siwae khamoshi key

[fazeelat]

Re: Bait Bazi — Personal Edition

yeh sach hey ke mil k bhe wo dil he dukhaye ga
phir bhe koi mulaqaat ki soorat to kijiye
khulty he chaly jaein gey israar zandgi key
peada zara khayalaat mein wussat to kijeiye

[Golden_Scorpion_1]

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@umer.ashraf

^^^^
“yeh unn ka daad dene ka andaz, yeh masoomiat
Mere khudaya main isse kia matlab doon, tu hi bata”

Ye tou Andaaz-e-Muhabbat hay, issay Jo bhi kaho
Kuch bhi matlab do muhabat tou bas muhabbat hay.

[fais]

Re: Bait Bazi — Personal Edition

yeh keh ke ghamoon me mere hoslay bharaey hain
ghamoon ki dhoop ke agay khushi ke saey hain

[fais]

Re: Bait Bazi — Personal Edition

neend es soch se tooti aksar
kiss tarah kat ti hain raatein uski

Parveen shakir

[Amal]

Re: Bait Bazi — Personal Edition

fais, welcome to Gupshup and to Bait Bazi. Here is something for your information.

@Amal

A modified version of **Bait Bazi ** is being started in Sho’ra-e-Gupshup with a simple difference that the poster must be the author! Unlike the Intikhaab’s Bait Bazi, work of others is not allowed here AT ALL. To exactly matche the theme of this forum — please post your own aashaar only! Every participant is requested to please strictly adhere to this restriction or otherwise the fun will go. That’s all guys:)

[Amal]

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Starting where GS left.

**
Ye dunya waaley kya jaaneiN meiN kiuN ye ghazleiN kehta hooN
apney likhey sheiroN meiN meiN tujh ko dhoondta rehta hooN
ab bhi meri nazmoN meiN tu mujh sey baateiN karti hey
mera saara aalam bhool bhula kar tujh ko sunta rehta hooN

Next: "noon"

**

[umer.ashraf]

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Naa to tera koi suraagh mila, naa hi kabhi koi jawab aayaa
Mein hooN ke phir bhi tujhe hi mehsoos karta rehta hooN

Aye Khuda yaa to soch mitta de, yaa phir mila de humeiN
MeiN to mamooli sa banda hoon, faryaad karta rehta hooN

Next: "Noon"

[Golden_Scorpion_1]

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Mashallah.. Very nice..

**UnhaiN milnay se pehlay dil ki dhaRkan sun bhi letay thay
Jo dekha hay unhaiN tou dil hay na dhaRkan hay seenay maiN. **

Nooon Gunaan

[umer.ashraf]

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Good one.

Nazuk tha mera dil, aur woh bhi thay
Aur kya aetraaz tha mujhay jeenay maiN

next: Noon (Gunaan*)*

[fais]

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Na kal tha, na Ab hai , Na hi Kalo Hoga
Yeah pyaar kya hai mera dil na jaanay

Next " Ye"