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Its oki
asal mai mujay b kesi nay us ghazal k chand ishaar sms kyiay thay phir usi ghazal k tasalsal ko qaiem rakhtay howay mai nay yea wala shair banaya tha
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century mukamil
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Wah… Very Beautuful Ashaar 
Keep it UP Frends…
Incomplete … Welcome On Board… 
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yaqeeN nahee agar usko to aazmaa dekhay
mein jaan waar doon us per jo ik nazar ker day
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Nice one Ehsan…
YhaaN Pa aankh hay purnam WahaaN pe Dhool bajay
Aaj phir Dil ka janaaza hay iss bayabaaN maiN.
NOON GHUNNA 
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nazaroN ki ye bisat hai, baazi hai pyar ki
ab ke, hamaray dil ko bhi, hasrat hai haar ki
YE
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Wah… Very Nice Mamba :k:
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Very nice:-)
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:(
yahan to sabhi aala paye ke shaer hain
main kisi mushaeray main hi chalta hoon
Next: Noon
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^
Na khud pe bas chalay na hai kuch dil pe ikhtiyar
aNkhaiN jo meri nam haiN, ye marzi hai yaar ki
PS: Thanks Golden and Gul e TasBeeh
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yeh aNkhaiN to sari hayati yaad raheiN gi mujhe
magar acha tha agar woh bi hote dil meiN kahiN
Next: Noon
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Wah.. Very nice.. MAMBA & U.Ashraf
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yey loog na jaanay nibhaatay hain dushmunia kaisay
humain to raas na aai kabhi mohabatain kurni
"yeey"
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yey khuwaab hay, khusbu hay, jhoonka hay ky pal hay
yey dhund hay, badul hay, saaya hay kay tum ho
yey umr-e-guraiza kuhi thehray to yey jaano
hur saans main mujh ko yehi lugta hay kay tum ho
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naan khalo naan khalo…
sorry sorry
sheir is…
nah dukh mera nah chein
nah khawab mera nah nean
nah din mera nah rean
nah hasii meri nah wean
ki jana’n mein kon…
next NOON (gud after noon)
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harf-e-junoon and fazeelat, poetry of other poets and songs are not permitted here.
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Na chorr diya na nibaah kia
merey dost tu ney ye kya kia!
Next: "alif"
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^ Amal..... Its Ur Thread :D So.... when U see that someone has Posted Someone's else poetry tou aap Point out karaiN. :)
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akhir bhool gaya na IMRAN ab ghar ka rasta
yonhi baysababb na phira karta to acha tha
Next:- Alif
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aik sher hi to urz kia tha aap ki mehfil mein
uss pe bhi aetraaz hai ke tum ne ye kya kia
Next: "alif"
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for ur kind information, it was not a song neither a choori poem , it 's my own poetry.U can check it with my same poem in “intikhab”.
i agree there is also a song by this name but other wordings are com. different.
i hope u can understand.