Bait Bazi — Personal Edition

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Yeh Uns-o-mohabbat ki baat keh kay kia khana kharab kar dya aap nay
Hum to kabhi khud ko naa khoj paaey, dosroon ki kia kareiN talash

Next: Sheen

Pakistani scientist in Nobel team
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shukriya nawazish karam aap ka
yeh merey aangan mey kaisey khila phool gulab ka

next: alif

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Aik gulab kay khilnay say utha kion aisa shor-o-ghul
Jahan kaantay hotay hain wahan gulab ka hota hay guzar

Next: Ray

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Rait ke gharondooN maiN, Zindagi na dhoondo tum
Jitna bhi sanbhalogay, inko Gir hi jaana hay.

NEXT ... YE :)

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Yeh uss kay piyar kay qissay faqat qissay puranay hein
bhala kachay gharay par kon dariya par karta hay :)

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Hum ne dekha unhain to nigaahain kuch aise jamm si gayeen
Keh jaise…

i thought long and hard but i couldn’t finish this sher :crying:
why is it so hard for me… am i this thick :crying:

Shape Shifting
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[quote=“Hum Hain”]
Hum ne dekha unhain to nigaahain kuch aise jamm si gayeen
Keh jaise…
i thought the next shair spose to start with YE not H :confused:

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^^ yeah; u thought right; its ye not h; my mistake...

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OKie.. Leme Complete it for you :slight_smile:

Hum unko dekhtay hiaN aur NigaheiN jamm si Jaati haiN
NaheeN maloom ye ulfat hay ya meri Ibaadat hay.

Wesay Leme tell U very choTi si baat… Try it Regardless of ke Shair Banta hay ke naheeN… here on GS we have very good Poets… I am sure they will help you out.

If U wana Write Shair… the First thing is the Idea… Wat you want to Paint in your Verse… That is the most important thing… after that… Initialy it will be hard for you to Find words for your Idea but if you try n try words will come automaticaly and you would be able to transform those into a verse :slight_smile:

:wave:

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YouN kuch, sikhlaya unhoN ne sabaq humeiN
Madrasay ka khauf hi uttar gya mann say

Next: Yeh

AnGeL_eYeS on the Hot Seat
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:wave:
waah; kya zabardast finish kiya hai hai.. :hola:

thankyou so so much lol :slight_smile:

yaa; i’ll try as u said from now on… :blush:

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Yeh iztarab meara yunhi baysabab nahi
Dil hay mata-e-Raz tujhay kia kahon kay bass :)

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i guess ye bait bazi apnay kahay huwey sheron ki nahi?

Time Pass
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so agar aetraz tha bhi kisi ko koi
naqaali ka ilzam to na deetay woh

Next:** Hey**

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sun kay hamara sher, kuch youn jhoomay woh
Kay jazbat meiN Ghalib ka qaseeda parh dala

:) :( (......another Faithful..... ):( :)

Time Pass
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sorry people my apology i didnt know it was personel peotry sorrrrrrrrrrrrrry:blush:

Al Flooding ul Fateh ... Imshi yallah.. kullun aiiyohan naas indal fateelatun haadhaa
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haerut yeh kis baat ki meray sheroun ko sunn kar
aakhir ko taluq hai mera IQBAL kay shehr say

Next: YEY

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You are most welcome :slight_smile:

Thank You!!
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umer asharaf nice poetry.keep it up

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meri ANkhoN se chalakta hai janooN
dil maiN ubla hua lawa hai ya khooN?
deed gar teri muqaddar maiN nahiN
maut mil jaye ya mil jaye sakoN.

NOON