A modified version of **Bait Bazi ** is being started in Sho’ra-e-Gupshup with a simple difference that the poster must be the author! Unlike the Intikhaab’sBait Bazi, work of others is not allowed here AT ALL. To exactly matche the theme of this forum — please post your own aashaar only! Every participant is requested to please strictly adhere to this restriction or otherwise the fun will go. That’s all guys:)
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Baadal cheekhtey phirtey heiN aaj subha sey
kinaarey darya ke koi piyaasa mar gaya ho ga
Koyal aur Gul, aap log koshish to kijeeye jesey hum log kartey heiN. Mujhey poora yaqeen hey ke aap log bhi sheir keh saktey heiN. Just give it a try :~)
That’s beautiful Bookworm:k:…lemme also try the same theme :~)
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Aesey mosam meiN har roz aana theek nahi
usey mila bhi to deikho kya bahaana mila
hameiN to kaheiN nahi tum sa koi mehboob mila
tum batao kya hum sa koi deewaana mila!
Rameesha ji merey khayal sey ye hargiz sahi nahi ho ga agar aap ya jesey Koyal or Gul aur log is bait bazi meiN shirkat na kareiN. Aap sab log likh saktey heiN, khaas tor par aap ke leeye to sirey sey koi masla hey hi nahi, aakhir ko 2 lines hi ki to baat hey na. Chalye poori ghazal ya nazm to masla ho sakti hey, lekin aek sher likhna to koi mushkil baat nahi. Otherwise hameiN ye silsila band karna parrey ga, kya faeda agar aap log participate nahi karna chahatey to :(
