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Thanks GKK
wesay aap ke poetry kidher hay ![]()
Re: Bait Bazi — Personal Edition
Thanks GKK
wesay aap ke poetry kidher hay ![]()
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hummm ![]()
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We have outclassed them :~)
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Aaghaaz likhooN to kesey likhooN, anjaam likhooN to kesey likhooN!
meiN aek kaaghaz pe haal dil ka tamaam likhooN to kesey likhooN!
na-jaaney qismat ke band saheefoN meiN kon kis ko ataa huwa hey
meiN apni khahish ke kaaghzoN par tera naam likhooN to kesey likhooN!
“noon”
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i wrote only one ghazal plus i’m really bad in writing ghazals and shers =p
AZAD: puts him in her ignore list
Amal: hehe. I think we don’t have many girls who actually write poetry.
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i am not use too of writting poetry bas kabi kabi barhi mushkil say thorhi bohat likh laita hon
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Na dukh ho na dard ho ayr na ho koi gam
logoo mie ik esa jahan dhondna chata hoon
“noon”
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^ You said and I tried. Here it is. No need to laugh everyone ![]()
Perhaps not =p
na janay kion uskay qadm ab uthay nahi
jesay manzil ke kohish he chehn gaye ho
:WAOO:
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thats really nice sis keap it up ![]()
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^ thanx IS =)
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^^ Always welcome and
here's mine
*Wo inkaar karti rahi, mien iqraar karta raha
wo sulagti rahi ayr mein tarhapta raha *
"alif"
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Aay muhabat! azal se abad tak safar main rahay
Sotay jagte, rah chaltay teri asar main rahay
Saa't janum ki aass ki akhiri shaam main Azad~
'khuch din bad' ke wade par barri dair tak kafan me rahay
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Wah… Very Nice… Amal, IS, Azad and Specialy **Ghazal **for Ur Start ![]()
So.. Here I am again ![]()
Yahi kaha tha mujhay usnay jab mila tha ussay
Ke jab bhi junbish-e-lab ho, wo sukay naam ki ho.
Waav.. ![]()
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Ye
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Ya mujhay iss nazar se matt dekho
Jo dekhti ho tou phir dil ki kuch Dawa bhi karo
Waav....!!
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YE
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Nice one AQ... BUT.. Iss YE ka Peecha chooR bhi do na ab :)
YaqeeN naheeN hay mage phir bhi raah takta hooN
Muajuzaat -o- Kiramaat bhi tou hotay haiN...!!
NOON.....
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na haarta mein kabhii Bait bazii mein ![]()
Nice ashaars , keep it up loko
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**
Naam aatey hi tera hoNtoN par
phool khiltey heiN lafz ban ban kar
"rey"
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rahay chuntey hum wo phool jo lafzooN se banay
naam hoontooN pe tera subha ho ya shaam dhalay:blush:
pata nahi kesa likha per himat kar le chahay jaisa b ho daa’d daina na bholliey gha:p
“ye”
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wah wah kya baat hai bohat acha likha ![]()