Bait Bazi — Personal Edition

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**YaadoN kee chilman maiN, yeh chehraa kissi kaa hai ****Baat kuch aur laboN pe hai, yeh naqaab kissi kaa hai**

*Ye *

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:frowning: :rolleyes: :crying:

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kyaaaaaaaaaaaa huwa mane to tareef ki ap sad hogaye :konfused:

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KOYAL … Keep it Up… :k: Keep on Writing :slight_smile:

AMAL & Anwaar :k:

Shab-e-Hijar Thanks :flower1:

Ye Again humm :rolleyes:

Ye shehr jiss maiN wafa ki Talash hay tum ko..!
Milaygi tum ko Sar-e-Daar har ghaRI har soo.

Waav…!!

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**Woh aankhoN kee chamak bhee kiYaa, khoob chamak thee woh ****Piyaar kay jazbaY maiN aik fareb kaa pardah hai**

Ye

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Yadain teri chali ati hain me'khanay main
Ban ke me' dhal jati hain pe'manay main

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bohot aa'la, Amal, Anwar, Azad, GS, IS, worm and all

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Thanx GS and Aceones! :slight_smile:

Bohat khoob Koyal Ji:k:…aap ney to aatey hi mushaera loot liya, to phir hum log chaleiN? :~)

Bohat khoob Azad:k: :slight_smile:

**
Naao haayat ki ghiri hui hey maojoN meiN
lamhoN ki deri hey merey doob jaaney meiN
utth ke har toofaan meri or chalaa aata hey
meiN hi milta hooN hawaadis ko zamaney meiN

“noon”
**

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naqsh teray qadmoo k ham bolay nahi abi
yea bay-chain ankhian ab b tumhari rah takti hian

"NooN"

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Wah… The Mushaira is Getting HOT :smiley:

Very Nice… Anwaar, Amal, Azad & Imran :flower2:

Tnx** ACE… :flower1:**

So… Shama-e-Mehfil Phir Hamray paas humm :stuck_out_tongue:

Arz kia hay…

Na zindagi na wafa ki na mout ne chaha..!
Ke mar tou jayeeN teray waastay, jo jee na sakay.

Ye Again … :slight_smile:

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**Ye Zindagi, uss kee wafa say ta'beer tau naheeN laikin duaa hai meri kay uss bay wafaa ko kabhi sazaa na milaY**

Ye :)

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Golden: Can I request you to atleast keep this thread sticky as long as you are a mod here..????

This thread by any comparision is the best thread all over poetry forum for many reasons :)

It made me write two full poems in a week:D hahaha..

I was just making up sherz all this time on the spot:p but then this is such an inspiration:D

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Anwaar Bhai… Jab tak Ye Chalayga… It will be STICKY :slight_smile:

And.. U r Right … I am the same… :smiley:

I had Not Written anything in months… and.. now Atleaset I do Write One SHAIR :stuck_out_tongue:

I also Write on SPOT… so… Its making me think everyday to Write Full Poems on these Ashaar…

Its a Good Contributrion by AMAL… Your contributions will Keep this Forum alive… :slight_smile:

:wave:

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Ye or bat na samjhe wo nazakat e Hayaa~ warna
Phail gia tha woh meri aankh main kajal ki tarah

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Har aik aahat pe lagtaa hay ke tum Aa rahey ho
gulshan mein hota hay gumaN tera aur gul mein teri yaad pali hay

Ye''

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Yeh gila roz karta tha koi
~! tumhari aankhain bolti hain bohut

Uss din hum ne aayna daikha
Bohut dair tak khamoshi rahi.

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^-- :flower1:

Yeh thread kab khuli… great idea jiska bhi tha… and it’s amazing to see key kitney baRey baRey shayar yahaN pey moujood haiN… Good work everyone :slight_smile: Keep it up!

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woahhhhhhhhhhhhh :slight_smile:

simply beautiful.

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Very Nice…** Azad**, AQ and GUL:flower1:

KN Dear… It was AMAL’s Idea :slight_smile:
Now Post Urs as well … :stuck_out_tongue:

To ALL of U my Dear Guppies… I wont be Online for 4 Days… So… Miss me okie :wink:

For Today… :slight_smile:

Intiha Pyar ki jo dekhna chahay koi…!!
Dekh le Daar pe ye kaun muskurata hay.

Ye …

:wave:

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To Continue ur Ghazal…
SaaNs ukhRi hai magar ankh maiN khushi ki chamak
dheeray dheeray se wo mehboob ke gun gata hai