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I would Strongly Double what AMAL said… 
We all should Participate then we will have FUN …
Some Very Good Ashaar 
Me again 
Yahi Jaga hay jahaN hum ne banaya tha Muhabbat ka Mehil
Aaj hum ko yahaN weeraana nazar ata hay
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Yeh Weeraanaa hai jahaaN hum nay jalaaYe thaY umeedoN kaY charaagh
Aaj hum ko yahaaN 'Taaj Mehal' nazar aataa hai
YE
*I just want to comment on the word Taaj Mehal in my above sher... Taaj Mehal is although a beautiful place but at the same time it is a fact that it is a graveyard... so umeedoN kay chaaragh kaa haasil abhee tuk naa maaloom hai.. it depends how you look at it.. either glass is half full or half empty is unknow.
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Yahi Charagh Jissi Hum Kabhi Jalaatay Thay
Jala Chauka meray khwab merai UmeedaiN.
NOON.... :)
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Yeh jaam, hum or tanhaii
talki e ma'e se teri yaad aii
khan'te gulab bane ...
...................... khwab porana daikha
modaton baad aiyne ne
.......................haal humara daikha
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AZAD Uncle… its NOON..
Not YE… 
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**Amal ji! ** Tum to sha’air ho our woh ik aam sa shahs 
do lines likh laina itna hi aasaaN hota to keya hi baat thi
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aap kahan beech mein aa gaye GS.. barhi hi mushkil say eik shair tayyar kiya tha “alif” say our…
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**Nahi karta INtaazaar Waqat Kesi ka **
mai waqat ke is rawish ko badlna chata hoon
Nooon again
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:k:
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Thanx Amal,
Nam hi Kya Nishan hi Kya Khwab-o-Khyal hu Gaey
Teri Missal dey kay hum teri missal hu gaey
Yeh
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Yun raat chal gai koi chaal ke hum deikhtey rahey
hamarey khaab hamarey waastey wa’baal ho gaey
Next: “ye”
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do lines likhna itna aasaan shaed na ho, lekin itna mushkil bhi nahi hey jitna aap log banaa rahey heiN. It hardly took me 20 seconds to write the above sheir. Aur deikhye ke Bookworm ke sheir sey qaafya bhi milaya hey meiN ney. Aap ka masla ye hey ke aap aur baaqi kuch dost koshish karney ko taiyaar nahi heiN Deikhye is Bait Bazi ke zarye hum log aek doosrey ki islaah bhi to kar saktey heiN. Seekh saktey heiN aek doosrey sey. Lekin jab tak hameiN pata hi nahi chaley ga ke aap ney ya meiN ney likha kya hey, hum apni ya doosroN ki islaah kar hi kesey saktey hein.
P.S.: A general note, aap sab dostoN sey guzaarish hey ke agar kisi aur ke sheir meiN aap ko islaah ka pehlu nazar aata hey to dostaana mashwara zaroor dijeeye. Creativity demands encouragment! Achi creation ki taareef na karna merey nazdeek bohat hi ghalat baat hey. Abhi tak is thread meiN ye kaam sirf GS hi ney kia hey. Please take some time to read what has been posted earlier and spend some words of praise - they won’t cost you anything but would be of utmost value to others.
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Yeh intizaar ha tera ke Waqt kAAtay nahi kattay
Ya waqt yun kat gaya, ke Lamhe MAH-O-SAAL hogaye
Next 'YEH'
I hope Amal ki baat par AMAL karnay par AMAL saheb ko Shikayat na ho kai mainay SAHI sai AMAL nahi kia,, mainay kaafi koshish kii aur 20 sec sai phele hi sher bana lia, QAAFIA mila kay..
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yea meri surakh ankhien aur un say behta pani **
**raat raat par meri bay-basi ka qisa sunati hain
Last:- Noon
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Here I am again :)
Na haarta maiN kabhi Bazi-e-Muhabbat bhi
MaiN kia karooN ke Kabhi Tujh ko maiN Hara na saka.
RAMEESHA...!!
Specialy for You on ALIF... So You could Use Ur Shair here :)
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Azad! dil hayaa ke bojh se dobta dekhaii de
Koi nahi oor buss apni dharrkan sunaii de
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yea mera junoon, mera hosla, mera jazba ayr mera yaqeen
jab koi bicharhta hay sab sath chhorh jatay hien
bas meri surakh ankhien ayr un say behta pani
raat raat bar meri bay-basi ka mazaq urhati hian
Noon again
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Na ja'ne kiss gumaaN main rehta hay
dil main humare sorat e armaaN rehta hay
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Ye hosh hi kahaaN hey meiN kahaaN pe reh raha hooN
koi mujh sey ab na poocho mera aashiyaaN kahaaN hey
Next: "ye"**
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yea kaisa muqadar hay hamaara kay
is dil mein jo b basa us nay dhoka he diya
Last:- Alif
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Beautiful guys :k: keep them coming =)
I just realized there are only guys in this thread who are posting their poetry =D kahan hai larkian 