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yaad aata hai ab bhi woh bheegi shaam ka manzar
kahani shooro honay se pehlay anjaam ka manzar
woh tera hans ke bicharnay ki aarzoo karna
aur hamari aakhri hansi ke ikhtetaam ka manzar
Thanks Amal ji
next word is "Ray"
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RAAT YUN DIL MAIN TERI KHOYEE HUI YAAD AAYEE
** JAISE WEERANE MAIN CHUPKE SE BAHAAR AAJAYE -**
** JAISE SAHRAON MAIN HOULE SE CHALE BAAD E NASEEM**
** JAISE BEEMAAR KO BE WAJHA QARAAR AAJAYE !!!**
** ( Faiz)**
Re: Bait Bazi — Personal Edition
| A modified version of **Bait Bazi **is being started in Sho’ra-e-Gupshup with a simple difference that the poster must be the author! Unlike the Intikhaab’s Bait Bazi, work of others is not allowed here AT ALL. To exactly matche the theme of this forum — please post your own aashaar only! Every participant is requested to please strictly adhere to this restriction or otherwise the fun will go. That’s all guys:)
** Baadal cheekhtey phirtey heiN aaj subha sey Next: “alif” | |
meiN pal do pal ka shaer hooN... |
Re: Bait Bazi — Personal Edition
*Ruki ruki si chal hay, thaka thaka jamal hay
Wu jub say loat ker gaya mera ajeeb haal hay
Wu saath tha tu sath thein tamam manzilein meri
Wu lay gaya hay rastay, aur khahishoon ka kaal hay...
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keep up everyone :k: we got talent on this forum :=)
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YahaaN mann hay wahaaN wajood
ishq meiN manzil hay maadood
"dil say dil ko raah hoti hay"
sada un ki aayi aur hum maujood
Next:** Daal**
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sorry Yousuf saheb...
main shiad ek hi waqt kai posting main sarshaar tha....
yeh sher aapke liye !
** " DAASTAN KHATM HUI TOOT GAYA AHDE WAFA**
** RAASTA DEKH RAHA HAI DIL E MUZTAR KISKA "**
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Welcome to **Bait Bazi — Personal Edition ** :~)
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Aey meharbaan dost sun, meri mushkiloN ko samajh ke meiN
teri mohabbatoN ka kya karooN, kisey dil pe ab ikhtiyar hey!
jo nafratoN sey jhulas gaya usey dil sey saarey duwaeiN do
par us sitam-zada ka kya kareiN jo mohabbatoN ka shikaar hey!
“Ye”
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Yeah kissss naay aajj pardaa haay rukh eey rooshan saay sirkayaa
munnawar rastaaay dikhnaay lagaay haain char soo hum koooo
Hay surkhee ankhoon maain , utheen makhmoor see lahreen
yeah phir kiss sookh kee honaay lagee haay justajoo humm ko
Faqat eek "hadsaaa haay" kaay marry dil koo wooo hee bhaya
wagarnaa rahh maaain miltaay thaay kitnaay khobaroo hom koo
" woo"
Friendz this is my own poetry .. :)
Khalid
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Jigar Amal Bhai...khushbash,
Yaadawari aur khuloos ka shukriya...
yeh sher aapki nazar...
Woh Purani Qadren Sharafaten, Woh Rawayaten Nahi Dhoondiye,
** Hain woh Guzre Din KI Nishaniyaan, Woh Kahawaten Nahi Dhoondiye" !!**
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Wu Ju 'Kal' Ki Hein Sub Hikayatein, Unhein Ab Yahan Nahi Dhoondiyee
Yeh Kahan Hay Derj Kay 'Aaj Kal' Naye Aaasman Nahi Dhoondhiyee...
Kia khayal hay derwesh?
Zameen buhat achi thee socha mein bhee kuch likh loon ismein.. sorry parayee zameen per kabza... lol
Yankee 'Yee' ....
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Yahan khud apni hi talash thi, aur mil naa saka mujhe kabhi
haal dekha aur kaha kisi nay, Naye meharbaan nahi dhoondhiyee!
Next*: Yeh*
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Yahan roshni ka guzar nahi, Yeh azal say ta-reek bastiyaan
Yahan jugnoo'wun ko bulaiyeee, koi pasban naya dhoondiyee
I have written this couplet for Karachi, I feel that after all this westernization and so called modernization, we still lack 'the light', we need a torch bearer who would guide us as muslims...
Does it make sense?
Fara
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Lovely 
k:
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Ye wafa-gari ki rivaayateiN heiN zindagi ki alaamateiN
jesey khuwaahishoN ka libaas ho barri mohabbatoN sey sila huwa!
koi chahatoN ki rida leeye merey saath rehta hey har gharri
yehi aek dhoka wisaal ka mujhey khalwatoN meiN sada huwa
“alif”
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Fara saheba.....it makes sence, it will make sence, if the poets dare to make it,
keep it up....
yeh sher apki nazar !
Yeh jo Shola zan hai Ghazaal sa, hai mere Sukhan main Kamal sa,
Yeh faqat hai mera Shaoor e Gham, Kahin Rahaten Nahi Dhoondye !!
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well done darwesh niz farah keep it up :) now mine one
**yahan khwahishon ko kabhi bhi qarar nahi milta.
jis ka jitna zarf ho,utni hi aazmaish hai.
main ru'oon magar aankh se aansoo nahi niklay.
bas itni si hi mere siyaad ki farmaish hai.**
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**Yun kuch ujara sakoon shaher ka zaalim nay, hulya hi to bigar dya
Jis aankh mein aansoo naa dekhtay thay, us jism mein khanjar utar dya
gham-e-maazi hay, to tahreek-e-haal bhi hay, umeed-e-farda bhi hay
Tareeki ko roshni se badaliyee, ya koi nishan naya dhoondiyee**
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Yahi na Hoga, Ke Woh Jaan Bhi Le jayega,
Ab Aur, Aye Dil E Khana Kharaab Kiya Hoga !!
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Aey toofaan-e-hawaa zaraa phir sey aa in bastiyoN meiN har us jagaa
jahaaN bach gaey heiN chand garib, aesey kuch makaaN abhi aur heiN
abhi kaavishoN meiN lagey raho zara saaNs leney ko ruko nahi
mujhey hey yaqeeN yaheiN aas paas naey aasmaaN abhi aur heiN
"noon"
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Naya jub chand niklay ga, naya tub roop utray ga
Mein khud ko bhee sajaoongi, usay khud say milaon gi
Wu meri rooh ka saathi, mujhay aisi panah dey ga
Mein apni rooh mein utray huway dukh bhool jaoon gi