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Nice one Fara
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Yehi deikh ab ke terey khaab sab kiuN dhal gaey heiN saraab meiN
dil-e-be-khabar zaraa hosh kar ke terey imtehaaN abhi aur heiN
wo daag yaadoN ke bad’numa tu ney mitaaey to heiN par sab nahi
masiha-e-waqt merey zehan par aesey kuch nishaaN abhi aur heiN
“noon”
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" Nizaam e Zar Ki Khudayee Agar Rahi Baqi
Tarap Tarap Ke Yunhi Eidiyaan Ragarna Hai
Aseer Rahna Hai Mahoul Ke Shakinjon Main
Ghareeb Ke Liye Bin Aaye Mout Marna Hai !"
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Yahan kay silsilay sub ko he karb bant-tay hein
Magar humein sirf apna hisab daina hay
Tamam rastoon ka khoon-baha bhee lazim hay
Aur apni zaat mein phir bay misal bhee hona hay
"Yee"
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Amazing stuff darwesh :k:
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yeh karb-e-musalsal hai barhta hai dawa karnay sekahan milta hai khuda bhi khuda khuda karnay seaankh aur aansoo ka is tarah ka rishta haikuch sukoon nahi milta in ko juda karnay seNext word is "yeh"
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Jigar Amal Bhai.....Shukriya, hosla afzai ke liye mashkoor hun !
Noor ji...Misron ko alag alag line main likhha karen...main Naya Naya Hun
Ulhaj jata hun..... yeh ek dost ki guzarish hai...criticism nahi... cheers !
" Yug Se Tujh Ko Dhoond Raha Hun
** Kyun Ab Tak Inkaar Hai Baba !! "**
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Ujalay rastoon mein hein, baharein raah tak-ti hein,
Main uskay sath say in manzaroon ko bhee saja'oon gi
Karoongi zulf ka saya, Kabhi cheerongi aanchal say
Agar wu rooth jayee ga tu aisay he mana'oon gi
Wu mujhko zeest kehta hay, samaghta hay
Wu hasil hay meri is zeest ka usko bata'oon gi
'Yee'
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yeh zindagii meri dard se ibarat hai **
**doston se kaho ke ab waar kam karna.
hum tumhaari raah main naye gulaab khilayen ge.
tum hamaray raastay ke khaar zara kam karna.
next word is "alif"
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Fara ji...subhanallah,
"Kahan Woh, Kahan Ye Maqaam Allah Allah....... Mubarak Ho..cheers !
Noor ji.... Thanks ! Karam hai aapka !
**( Zakhmi Ana.. )**
** " Aankhen Khushk,**
** Magar Dil Bheeg Raha Hai-**
** Mere Andar Baitha,**
** Koi Toot Raha Hai,**
** Rafta Rafta Mujh Se-**
** Shaid Rooth Raha Hai !!!"**
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**Kia Matlub 
I can never read between lines…
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Beautiful Noor_gr8 :k:…though a little difficult to read in this format 
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Ujalay rastoon mein hein, baharein raah tak-ti hein, Main uskay sath say in manzaroon ko bhee saja'oon gi
Karoongi zulf ka saya, Kabhi cheerongi aanchal say Agar wu rooth jayee ga tu aisay he mana'oon gi
Wu mujhko zeest kehta hay, samaghta hay ** **Wu hasil hay meri is zeest ka usko bata'oon gi
'Yee'
Mohtarema, between lines to kuch bhi nahi.... itni acche Ashaar ki main Tareef kar raha hun, Aur Uss Khush Bakht Ki qismat par Rashk Karraha hun...jo Apki Zeest ka Hasil Hai....
Sada Lafzon main dil ki khoob Akkasi ki hai aap ne... issi liye Mubarak bad bhi de raha hun. **
**"Zakhmi Ana " Kaisi lagi ?
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Darwesh aapki nazm 'zakhmi anaa' buhat achi hay; mukhtasir magar pur asar...
Shukriya meray ashar ki tareef ka, mazmoon tu purana he tha lekin shayd jazboon ki shiddat her chiz mein naya ehsas bher deiti hay...
Shukran,
Fara
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Yaad ka kya hey yaad ko aaney dena
aur nighahoN ko ashq bhi bahaney dena
waqt ki gard sey magar dil ko bachana ho ga
apni nazar ko merey khaab na bhulaney dena
"Alif"
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**its not my mistake Amal ji 
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abhi tu aankh main jaltay hain diye shayad is liye
samander ki her mouj tumharay liye kinara hai
zindagii kahan guzri jis tarah se chahi thi
apnay hisaay ka waqt bas sab ne guzara hai.
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**ji darwesh ji main bhi ulajh gaye thi jab apni post ki yeh halat dekhi any ways ur nazam is beautiful:blush: **
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Buhat khoob guys, keep sharing your Ash’aar:-) :k:
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And we thought nobody read us anymore. Thanx for reminding us that we are being watched :~)
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Tamaam Qadardanon Ki Zaranawazion ka shukriya...
" Yahi Woh Hai Jo Tere Sath Hone se Pahle
Haseen Sapnon Ki Chhaon Main Gungunati thi,
Issi Ko Kahte Th'y Kal Zindagi Ki Dosheeza
Jo Chand Taron Ko Hans Hans Ke Munh Chirhati Thi "