Bait Bazi — Personal Edition II

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Likh likh ke tera naam hum aaNkhoN sey falak par
taaroN sey sajaatey heiN harfoN ko saari raat

"Tey"**

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Beautiful :-)

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ta-umer riyaazat ka hum ne hai sila paya
ik ghari rafaaqat ki , aik pal muhabbat ka

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Shukriya Gul

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Apni mohabbat ka malba uttha ke kya karta!
wafa ki maot pe dil aaNsu baha ke kya karta!
usey to aadat thi rastey badaltey rehney ki
meiN uski raah meiN palkeiN bicha ke kya karta!

"Alif"
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Zabardast Amal:k:

Aa jao keh ab tou aankh bhi nam ho chali hay
chalay bhi aao ab keh bahar bhi kam ho chali hay

Ye’’

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Thanx again Gul. And welcome to the mehfil :flower1: :slight_smile: Nice sheir :k:

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Ye dhanak mohabbatoN ki merey paas ab na laao
jo rang bigarr gaey heiN unhey phir sey kya sajaana
ye be’rukhi ke nashtar to meiN kab sey seh raha hooN
is baar tum milo to koi zakhm naya lagaana!

“Alif”
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Ab jo nikli tou aasmaaN cheer dey gi
keh ab phir Dua dard mein ik dhali hay

Ye''

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Ye qabaa-e-hayaat taar taar haalaat ke deemak ka hey shikaar
ye jaga jaga sey phatti hui meiN kahaaN kahaaN sey siyuN isey!

"Ye"

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^Mashallah Amal this one is zabardast:k:

… Ye jaantey hein hum
aur maantey hein hum
phir bhi diya jalanay ki
arzoo rakhtey hein hum…

does it make sense :bummer:

Meem’’

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Thanx again Gul

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Mohabbat kehkashaaN to hey magar aksar ye hota hey
zara si 'dhoop' nikalney par 'nazaarey' toot jaatey heiN
suno har rut meiN saahil par ttheharna theek nahi hota
kabhi toofaaN ke aaney par kinaarey toot jaatey heiN

"Noon"
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nahee aisa ke ab dil ko teri khwaahish nahee hai
wisaal e yaar ki ab mujhko fermaaish nahee hai
magar jaanaaN agar samjho, bohat majboor hoon mein
ana ke khol me jhukney ki gunjaaish nahee hai

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Beautiful Amal!

Sorry, here i can only read, quote and comment :)**

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Thanx a lot Bholay Bisray sahab :) Wesey ye Bholay Bisray hey ya Bhooley Bisray hey? ;)

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yun tou tanha hoon azal sey is safar mein lekin
sirf aik tujhhi ko raah-numaa banaey baethi hoon
jo aag dil mein dehak rahi hay usey dabaey baethi hoon
apni ibadat ka har pal anchal mein sajaey baethi hoon

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Sahab Ji :slight_smile: , its Bholay (Forgotton ?? ) may be i misspelled it , tussi tay MOD ho change kur devo uger wrong likh dayta hay tay…:bummer:

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According to me:
Bholey = Simple
Bhooley = Forgotten

Wesey hum mod zaroor heiN, lekin itney powerful nahi ke aap ke nick par haath daal sakeiN :)

Welcome to the mehfil Pakeeza:~(

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Nahi kuch khabar ke kis gharri terey raastoN ka sira miley
terey naqsh-e-pa ki talaash meiN lagi to hey meri justuju

"Wao"
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Wuhi baam-o-dar hein wuhi hain fazaaiN
sunaai detii hain humko dil ki sadaaiN

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*Naakaam hasratoN ka anbaar ley ke dil
pal bhar ko kisi saath ka saaya dhoondta hey
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"Ye"

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it is** Bhooley** = Forgotten

simple i am NOT :p

wasay ub mughay kiya pata aap kay haath kitnay lumbay hain :) i thought aap tu Power MOD hain jo murzi kurtay rahain!

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ye udass mosaam, bay rung bahar ye bay subab si udassi
bikhrnay ko hay chmaan kay ussay dhoond lavo ub tu

"Wavo"