Bait Bazi — Personal Edition II

This is the second part of Personal Edition of Bait Bazi. We had 300 beautiful aashaar in the first edition. Let us continue from where we had stopped.

Unlike the Intikhaab’s Bait Bazi, work of others is not allowed here AT ALL. To exactly match the theme of this forum — please post your own aashaar only! Every participant is requested to please strictly adhere to this restriction or otherwise the fun will go. That’s all guys.

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Hum kab tum sey rootthey they wo gafgi to ik bahana tha
tum aur zara si zid kartey to hum ney maan hi jaana tha

“Alif”
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"** Aik Ur'te Huwe Panchee Ka Nasheeman Tum Ho**
** Zakhm Se Choor Mere Qalb Ki Dharkan Tum Ho "**

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Waqt ke haath tum ney apna har khaab beych diya
par ye meri wafa ka bhaao hey jo girta hi nahi hey
sehra ney thak haar ke ye poocha hey falak sey
kya faaeda us baadal ka jo barasta hi nahi hey

"Ye"
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Yeh phool khilay kion nahi rahtay
yeh mosam kion hain badal jatay
hai zindagi k baad mot, hoshi k baad ghum
janay kaisay bhool gai mein

"noon"

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Nahi kuch khabar ke kis gharri terey raastoN ka sira miley
terey naqsh-e-pa ki talaash meiN lagi to hey meri justuju
bas deikhna hey kis tarhaN wo ji raha hey merey baghair
yuN to dil meiN hey wo aaj bhi jisey dhooNdta hooN ku-ba-ku

"wao"
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وقت نا جانے زمانے کو کہاں لے جاےگا
ھم تو رک جا ینگے لیکن وقت چلتا جاے گا

may be the type setting is too small in urdu bhat here is what I worte....

Waqat na jaane zamene ko kahaan le jaayega
hum to ruk jaayinge lekin waqat chalta jaayega

aleef....

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ik zara si baat pay tark taulak ajj us nay kia
jis ik taulak kay liye tark zamana main nay kiya

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AaNkheiN khuleiN to khaaboN ko bura laga magar
kuch deir wo reh ke muztarib khud hi behal gaey
pehley pehal to ajeeb lagey badley huwey chehrey
phir yuN huwa ke waqt ke saath hum bhi sambhal gaey

"Ye"

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I will try to stay on the topic used in the share before me with all of my shairs.

youn khuab huye sab reza reza teray rukhsat honay par
dil qatra qatra khoon hua, aNkhaiN bhee haiN banjar banjar
Is sheher kee galyaN vereeni kay andhay sooraj maiN doobeeN
Ab din ka ujala raat kee kaalee tareekee ka pas manzar

(By Asif)

"Ray"

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Ranj Ki Shiddat Bayaa(n) To Main Kiye Deta Magar
Haasil-e-Qaamoos Koi Lafz Gham-Paima, Na Tha...
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alif

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atba tang huway charagari se is ki
dil teri yad main jaise koee nakhcheer huwa
jistarh miltay hain bichrde huwae barson bad
mujh se yo,n aa ke tera dard bagalgir huwa

nakhcheer means (wounded bird)
** alif**
shan

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Something to stand out :k:

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Aan-e-waahid mein khud-supurdagi ka ye aalam
dil hamaara goya usi ki hi jaageer huwa

Alif
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us aik khwaab kee talash maiN hooN sargirdaN
wo aik khwaab sirf khwaab maiN ta'abeer huaa

*HaNste chehray pe aanswoN ka samundar thaa ajeeb
teraa maatam teree khushyoN se bagalgir huaa
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*"alif"
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sorry.. double post

"alif"

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apni tanhai ki baho,n main sma kr roy
rat soei to tere gam ko jga kr roy.
**shan

***ye*

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sorry net problem

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Buhat khoob :slight_smile: keep posting guys :k:

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yaad ayee thee teree shaam ke ba'd
kis peher beetee shab yaad naheeN

tujh se karte rahe baataiN shab bhar
kis same mil gaye lub yaad naheeN
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**"noon"

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Naaz tha zabt pe ke tujh sey bicchreiN ge to behal jaaeiN ge
kab ye socha tha tujhey deikhneiN ge to pighal jaaeiN ge

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Yad rakho to dil k pass haiN hum
Bhool jao to faslaiy haiN bohat

tay