Bait Baazi Month Of March 2010

P_G · March 11, 2010, 5:30pm

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^ akhri word kia hay wow ya noon ?

the reader > to main us ka bhi shair bana daytee snooty

Kinzz · March 11, 2010, 5:32pm

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^ ..

last word WOw hai

P_G · March 11, 2010, 6:04pm

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Wafa ke waday woo saray bhula gaiya chup chap
Woo mairay dil ki dewarein hila gaiya chup chap

pay

Kinzz · March 11, 2010, 7:22pm

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Palkon pe aanso’on ko sajaya na jaa saka
us ko bhi Dil ka haal bataya na jaa saka
zakhmon se choor choor tha yeh Dil mera
ek zakham bhi us ko dikhaya na jaa saka

Alif

P_G · March 11, 2010, 7:49pm

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Ajj main Akaila hoon dil sawal kerta hai

log to us kay thay .kia khuda bhi us ka tha

alif

the_reader · March 11, 2010, 8:00pm

phir ghalat, aakhri word "noon" tha, noon ghunna, ab aap har gaiee hain, 2 dafa mistake ki hay

the_reader · March 11, 2010, 8:02pm

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aye taaer-e-lahooti, is rizq say maot achi
jis rizq say aati ho parwaaz main kotahi

ye (chooti : p)

P_G · March 11, 2010, 8:20pm

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^ mujhay pata tha noon hai lakin kinzz kay nazdeek wow hay to main ker sakte hon kinz us sahir ki malik hain woh jo chahay lafz bataain ... smilestar

ye ajib khel hai ishq ka main ne ap dekha ye mojeza
vo jo lafz mere guman main the vo teri zuban par a gaye

yey

the_reader · March 11, 2010, 8:24pm

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^ ji ok, baray logoon ki bari baatain : )

ye saaneha bhi muhabbat main baar-ha guzra
ke usnay haal bhee poocha to aankh bhar aai

ye

Kinzz · March 11, 2010, 8:24pm

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the reader are you a Urdu Teacher?? just asking..:p

the_reader · March 11, 2010, 8:26pm

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ji nahi, kahaan aik teacher aur kahaan main, itni auqaat nahi hay

Kinzz · March 11, 2010, 8:31pm

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In hasratoon se keh do kaheen aur ja basain
Itni jagah kahaa hai dil-e-daghdaar mein

Noon

the_reader · March 11, 2010, 8:34pm

P_G: ye aapka subject hay

P_G · March 11, 2010, 8:37pm

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baray log ? aaho i 100 years old maaiee hoonh

Nadaan hai jo dertay hain duniya k sitam say

saahil nay bhala kon sa toFaan nahi dekha
alif

the_reader · March 11, 2010, 8:47pm

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insaan nay mah-o-anjum ki raahain to dekh leeN
khud uski anjuman maiN ujaala na ho saka

alif

Kinzz · March 11, 2010, 9:03pm

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**Aaye tu yun ke jaisay hamesha thay meharbaan
Bhoolay tu yun ke goya kabhi aashna na thay

Ye
**

P_G · March 11, 2010, 9:29pm

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oyee yeh ki jaan chor do ab

yeh do din main kia maajra ho gaya

k jungle ka jungle hara ho gaya naraz

alif

Kinzz · March 11, 2010, 9:38pm

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**Us shaks se wabasta khush fehmi ka yeh aalam hai
Maut ki hichki aayee tu main samjha ke us ne yaad kiya

Alif
**

the_reader · March 12, 2010, 2:42pm

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aanay ko keh gaye thay, na aaiN khuda karay
kya lutf aaraha hay mujhay intezaar main

noooon

Heiress1 · March 12, 2010, 5:04pm

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Na hareef-e-jaan na shareek-e-gham, shab-e-intezaar koi to ho
Kisay bazm-e-shauq main laayen hum, dil-e-beqaraar koi to ho

*** Wao***