Bait Baazi for the month January 2011

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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:hehe:

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Ye chubhan akeley-pan ki ye lagan udas shab sey
me hawa se larr raha hooN, tujhey kya bataooN kab sey

"Ye"

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yeh zarori nahi har shakhs masiha hi ho
pyar ke zakhm amanat hain dikhaya na karo

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** tum apni taqdeer uski lakeeroN sey mila beitthey ho**
** ab na jaaney isey bachaaney ki kya qeemat ho gi**
** tum toofaan meiN ye jo chiraagh jalaa beitthey ho**

**

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**vo merii cheen-e-jabiiN se Gham-e-pinhaaN samjhaa
raaz-e-maktoob, ba be_rabtii, 'unvaaN samjhaa

Ghalib

alif se**

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*aah ko chaahiye ik umr asar hone tak *

** kaun jetaa hai teri zulf ke sar hone tak **
** ham ne maanaa ke tagaaful na karoge lekin **
** Khaak ho jaenge ham tum ko Khabar hone tak**

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**kia kahuuN beemaarii-e-Gham kii faraaghat kaa bayaaN
jo k khaayaa Khoon-e-dil be_minnat-e-kamyoos thaa

Ghalib

ALIF se
**

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urra hun jab to falak pe liya hai dam ja kar **
** zamin ko torr gea hun jo rah gea hun mein
** rahi hai Khaak ke zarron mein bhi chamak meri**
** kabhi kabhi to sitaaron mein mil gea hun mein **

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**waah waah...mere maHboob shaa'ir janaab e AsGhar Husain "AsGhar: GonDvii ke ash'aar bahooot pasand aaye :)

unhiiN kaa ek aur she'r:

nigaah-e-naaz kii kaifiiyateN haiN dil meN vohii
k rooH tan meN ho, sheeshah meN jis taraH ho parii :)

YE se**

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Khalil bhai ye fakhta ko chorr kar ab aap kisi “parii” ke chakkaroN meiN parr gaey heiN :nono:

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Awesome indeed!

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Shukran fara :)

*Ye jo paani hey meri doobti kishti mein Qamar
tum kinara jo na kartey to kinara hota *

"Alif"

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**uThaaye kuchh varaq laale ne, kuchh nargis ne, kuchh gul ne
chaman men har taraf bikhrii huii hai daastaaN merii

'allaamah Iqbaal

YE se**

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*ye mujh se puuchhiye kya justaju mein lazat hai
fazaa-e-daher mein tahleel ho gea hun mein *

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Yeh Tere Khat Teri Khusbu Yeh Tere Khwaab o Khayal
Mata'a- e -Jaan Hain Tere Qol- o -Qasam Ki Tarha'
Guzishta Saal Inhein Mein Ne Gin K Rakha Tha
Kisi Gareeb Ki Jori Hui Raqam Ki Tarha

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**
waah bahot Khoob :)

AsGhar GonDvii ke shaagirdoN meN Jigar Muradabadi bhii the aur mere vaalid e marHoom bhii. apne vaalid kaa ek she'r pesh kartaa huN:

merii pastiyoN meN jo noor hai vo naseeb-e-charKh-e-bariiN nahiiN
yeh meh-e-tamaam bahot sahii, mire daaGh-e-dil se HasiiN nahiiN

NOON se
**

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^ It was Noon not Meem ...

Masoom muskan reply ends on 'mein' (Noon) ...

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bohat acha sher hai , i like it poori poem bhi likhyn

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Arif bhai aap kiuN sirf observer ban kar reh gaey heiN...post bhi to kareiN na kuch :)

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Acha lagta hai jab Poetry forum mein itne khoobsurat contributors maujood ho jin ke dam se Poetry Forum mein bahaar laut aee hai ...