Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
Ye chubhan akeley-pan ki ye lagan udas shab sey
me hawa se larr raha hooN, tujhey kya bataooN kab sey
“Ye”
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
yeh zarori nahi har shakhs masiha hi ho
pyar ke zakhm amanat hain dikhaya na karo
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
**Wo ajnabhi hey na'jaaney kya dil meiN ho us ke**** tum apni taqdeer uski lakeeroN sey mila beitthey ho**
** ab na jaaney isey bachaaney ki kya qeemat ho gi**
** tum toofaan meiN ye jo chiraagh jalaa beitthey ho**
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Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
**vo merii cheen-e-jabiiN se Gham-e-pinhaaN samjhaa
raaz-e-maktoob, ba be_rabtii, 'unvaaN samjhaa
Ghalib
alif se**
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
**aah ko chaahiye ik umr asar hone tak **
** kaun jetaa hai teri zulf ke sar hone tak **
** ham ne maanaa ke tagaaful na karoge lekin **
** Khaak ho jaenge ham tum ko Khabar hone tak**
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
**kia kahuuN beemaarii-e-Gham kii faraaghat kaa bayaaN
jo k khaayaa Khoon-e-dil be_minnat-e-kamyoos thaa
Ghalib
ALIF se
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Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
urra hun jab to falak pe liya hai dam ja kar **
** zamin ko torr gea hun jo rah gea hun mein
** rahi hai Khaak ke zarron mein bhi chamak meri**
** kabhi kabhi to sitaaron mein mil gea hun mein **
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
**waah waah…mere maHboob shaa’ir janaab e AsGhar Husain "AsGhar: GonDvii ke ash’aar bahooot pasand aaye 
unhiiN kaa ek aur she’r:
nigaah-e-naaz kii kaifiiyateN haiN dil meN vohii
k rooH tan meN ho, sheeshah meN jis taraH ho parii
YE se**
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
Khalil bhai ye fakhta ko chorr kar ab aap kisi “parii” ke chakkaroN meiN parr gaey heiN :nono:
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
Awesome indeed!
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
Shukran fara
**Ye jo paani hey meri doobti kishti mein Qamar
tum kinara jo na kartey to kinara hota **
“Alif”
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
**uThaaye kuchh varaq laale ne, kuchh nargis ne, kuchh gul ne
chaman men har taraf bikhrii huii hai daastaaN merii
'allaamah Iqbaal
YE se**
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
**ye mujh se puuchhiye kya justaju mein lazat hai
fazaa-e-daher mein tahleel ho gea hun mein **
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
Yeh Tere Khat Teri Khusbu Yeh Tere Khwaab o Khayal
Mata’a- e -Jaan Hain Tere Qol- o -Qasam Ki Tarha’
Guzishta Saal Inhein Mein Ne Gin K Rakha Tha
Kisi Gareeb Ki Jori Hui Raqam Ki Tarha
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
**
waah bahot Khoob
AsGhar GonDvii ke shaagirdoN meN Jigar Muradabadi bhii the aur mere vaalid e marHoom bhii. apne vaalid kaa ek she’r pesh kartaa huN:
merii pastiyoN meN jo noor hai vo naseeb-e-charKh-e-bariiN nahiiN
yeh meh-e-tamaam bahot sahii, mire daaGh-e-dil se HasiiN nahiiN
NOON se
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Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
^ It was Noon not Meem …
Masoom muskan reply ends on ‘mein’ (Noon) …
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
bohat acha sher hai , i like it poori poem bhi likhyn
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
Arif bhai aap kiuN sirf observer ban kar reh gaey heiN…post bhi to kareiN na kuch
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
Acha lagta hai jab Poetry forum mein itne khoobsurat contributors maujood ho jin ke dam se Poetry Forum mein bahaar laut aee hai …