Rules of Bait Bazi:
Shair should be genuine and not your own.
— > Post your own in Bait Bazi — Personal Edition of Sho’ra-e-Gupshup.
Dont break the chain and always follow the last letter of the last posted shair.
Always mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair.
If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other’s knowledge sake).
Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Rubai, qita) at max will be allowed.
Last shair was :
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
Ya Rab meri sochoon ko woh ejaaz-e-assar day
Mein toot bhi jaun tau mera naam Amar ho ...
Next: "Wao"
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
*wo zindagi ho kay dunya faraz kya kijiye
kay jis sey ishq karo bewafa nikalti hai *
"Noon"
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
*wo zindagi ho kay dunya faraz kya kijiye kay jis sey ishq karo bewafa nikalti hai *
"Noon"
Nikalti hai ... Ended on "Ye" and not NOON ...
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Yehi socha musalsal gham mein reh kar
Humein gham se riha hona nahe hai
Mila hoon yun kisi gul rukh se jaise
Kabhi is se juda hona nahe hai ...*
Next: "Ye"
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
You are right Arif :)
Yaad kartey raha karo aye dost
is sey rishtey puraney nahi hotey
"Ye"
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
yeh ajeeb khel hai ishq ka main ne aap dekha yeh mujzah
woh jo lafz mere guman me the woh teri zaban pe aa gaey
'yeh'
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
**yahaN kahaN ham_nafas moyassar, yeh des naa_aashnaa hai, ai dil!
vo cheez tu maangtaa hai mujh se k zer-e-charKh-e-kohan nahiiN hai
'allaamah Iqbaal
Harf-e-"YE" se :)**
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
Ye kon shakhs hey jo meri baat nahi sunta
meiN chalta hooN to merey saath nahi chalta
"Alif"
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
Alfaaz ki surat mein sakoon maang lo mujh se
Ehsaas ka suraj tau yahaan doob chala hai ...
Next: "Ye"
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
Arif, bohat khoobsoorat sheir hey :k:
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
yun to har shaam ummidon mein guzar jaati thi
** aaj kuchh baat hai jo shaam pe ronaa aayaa**
** next: "alif"**
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
yun to har shaam ummidon mein guzar jaati thi ** aaj kuchh baat hai jo shaam pe ronaa aayaa**
** next: "alif"**
**nice she'r and equally nicely sung by Begam AKhatar marHoomah
here a she'r by my vaalid nmarHoom:
isii raaste men saHar bhii hai, gul_o_laalah bhii haiN, qamar bhii hai
miraa saath, teraa Khiraam, yeh kisii aur ko bhii miTaa na de
Harf-e-"YE" se aglaa she'r marHamat farmaaiye...shukria**
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
Ya Rab merey sakooN ko wo iztiraab dey
jo ishq to janooN ke qaalib meiN dhaal dey
ik maoj-e-be-qaraar utthey dil sey is tarha
mehroomiyoN ko aaNkhoN ke rastey nikaal dey
"Ye"
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
ye zaRurii nahiN haR shaKhs masiihaa hii ho
pyaaR ke zaKhm amaanat haiN dikhayaa na kaRo
'Waoo"
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
Wo jisey samajhtey the zindagi, meri dharrkanoN ka fareib tha
mujhey mukuraana sikha ke wo, meri rooh tak ko rula gaya
"Alif"
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
Abhi tau mil ke chaltay hain samundar ki musafat mein
Phir us ke baad dekhenge kinaara kaun karta hai ...
Next: "Ye"
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
ye aarzoo the faqat tere aarzoo keray
yay hosla he na tha aur justujo kerty
unhain dekha to ek chup se lag gae humko
to aise haal main bhala kia un say guftugo kerty
next ..ye..
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Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
Lovely sheir Arif :k:
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
Ya Rab wo samjhey heiN na samjheiN ge meri baat
dey aur dil unko jo na dey mujh ko zubaaN aur
"Rey"
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
Raat bhar pichli hi aahat kaan main aati rahi Jhank kar dekha gali main koi bhi aaya na thaalif 