aisa he tou hona hai

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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my first try

zindagi ki rahoon mein
dard ki panahoon mein
hum yeh sochtay hean aksar
q hean hum jhamailoon mein
q hean hum andheroon mein
roshni k matlashee
hum yeh sochtay nahi
dil ki tasalli ka
samaa’n hum ko karna hai
rastoon mein chaltay chaltay
gir k phir sambhalna hai
zindagi ki rahoon mein
ik subha tou aaey gee
dard ki panahoon par
noor ban k chaey gee
soch k dareechoon par
dastak day k jaey gee
phir baat samaj mein aaey gee
ke zindagee ki rahein ab
aisee bhi sehel nahi
poornoor subah k liyey
sabr hum ko karna hai
aur gehray in andheroon say
bach k phir nikalna hai
subha ki latafat mein
phir hum ko khoona hai
zindagi mein aik din
aisa he tou hona hai
aisa he tou hona hai!!
(BheegiYaad):chai:

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Re: aisa he tou hona hai

w0w.. this is something really nice if considered as first attempt.. beautiful..

we will wait for more :)

aap bhi chhupi rustam

Timepass
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Re: aisa he tou hona hai

thanx for the appreciation red
nothing like chuppi rustum bus ammad bata k nahi hotee :chai:

Pakistan vs Australia at Colombo, 19 March, 2011
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Re: aisa he tou hona hai

umm.. lagta hai chaye peekay hoti hai aamad :slight_smile:

* IF ABOVE PERSON SAY I LOVE U *
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:fatee:

:chai:

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mmmm… buss theek hay, koshish jaaree rakhiyaa aur aamad ka intezar kartay rahyaa, kabhee na kabhee tau koi kaam ki cheej amad main aa hee jaey gee na :cb:

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Re: aisa he tou hona hai

^ i shoult put a note 18+ allowed to comment :chai:
:cb:(in ur way)

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Re: aisa he tou hona hai

18+ bolay tau ‘‘only for adults’’? par aisa tau kuch nahi dikhaa iss poetry main :cb:

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:smack2:

kids like u didnt get the poetry na :stuck_out_tongue:
therefore

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Re: aisa he tou hona hai

andheroon mai isliye kay tum nay light jala kar nahi likhi hogi :p

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:naraz:

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dobara parh kar behoos hoing :faint:

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oh ho! nahi aisa tau nahi kahtay; itee mushkil se tau amud huee bachay ko; pakistan main jo bijlee ki load-sheding ho rahee na us k baaray main hay ye poetry-numa; abhee abhee tashreeh karwaee hay main ney.

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:@: 1 rs ki 4 fanta ki toffees aap ki huean

aaj rone ko dil kr rha hai ...... :crying:
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:dhimpak:

i succeeded in ma aim :sadiyah:

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wow hatam taaee ki qabar pe punch day maara tussee nay tu :cb:

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dobara uth kar bheegi ko =====> :femme:

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thanx for the kiss :@:

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fanta ki tofee :yummy:

:hmmm: kis say karwaye hai tashree :aq:

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lagta hai zoor ka nahi laga chanta :D

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