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oey hoey! shab-e-hijar se shab-e-butcher tu na banain paaleees;musoom numaani ko taazi b taazi shaery ki amud huee, mou sooyaa laal kar ditta tussee nay 
Re: aisa he tou hona hai
chunchoo aap ki toffees khatam ho gai hean 
tabhi entry maree hai takkay aur mil sakean 
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aik minut thairo g main zara helmut pahun loon, koi pata nahi sideeq - line man ka sun k mujhay koi jhaamper ya punch na par jaaey.
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wasay bheegi mai sahi kahti ho tum na SPECIAL kid ho 
bohat acchi poem hai .. keep it up 
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hmmmmmmmmmmm...
nice 1..
dhair sari shikastein dhair sari umeed..
yehi to sab hona hain.. yehi to life hain!
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thanx g:chai:
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buhat khoob bheegi
first attemp k lihaaz say buhat zabardast hai
keep it up
likhti raho
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Very Beeeautifull.. lagta nahin hai k pehli pehli aamad hai.. :k:
Thnx for sharing 
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very nice and touching mujhe nahi lagta kay koi pehli try mein inta acha shaayar /shayara ho sakti hain. Not unless us shakhs ne kaheen se nakal maari ho.
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^ thanx g watever u feel or think
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Nicely written:k:
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thanx SJ
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thanx SJ
hay Mention nt!!!
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ab tou kar diya na:chai:
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**wow bheegi…zabardast hei kuriye!:biggthumb
ab agar jhoole pe baithna hei toh Jhanjharewali ki shaan mei kuch likha padega 
.
waiting **
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soch lo bheegi nay aisee shan bana deni hai aap ki k khud hi jhula meray havalay kar k bhag jao gee
keep waiting 
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Classic for a first attempt. Keep it up! :)
Re: aisa he tou hona hai
Classic for a first attempt. Keep it up! :)
thanx