God Dammit what happened next 
Please tell me it was a dream 
Lajjo jiger:hehe:
i was thinking of posting here from the very moment this thread had just couple of replies, but for some reason I avoided & now by looking at the replies, let me add my precious two words that i was supposed to post before:D
LOL Lajawab
Lajawab....I can only say you are Lajawab! You made me read all of it and left me thinking....:(
Who knows these things may really have happened.
Someone losing their lives because they did things at the wrong time wrong location.
Lajawab you have very good writing skills. It's seems so real too.
Come up with one more story. :)
Lajawab Before you write a new story, please end this one where everyone lives happily ever after Wake the girl or the guy up from their dream or SOMETHING! 
Pleaseeeeeee 
OMG! thats hilarious!
(is there a sequel?)
Um how is this hilarious? The boy dies and the handicap girl never gets to see him.
^
it sounded like one of those modern day fables,
Lajo are you by anu chance interested in them? theres one about Little Red Riding Hood, in which Little Red takes a bazooka out of her picnic basket and shoots the wolf
Moral of the story: Little girls arent as stupid as they used to be
it reminded me of that movie maan or something
Thank you for the comments guys...Little Human, your praise is very humbly appreciated...Thank you...
As usual, I read the beginning and the end. Feel bad for the girl but she'll get over it :)
I think the bolly/lolly producers are going to be calling Lajjo :D
LOL... what an idiot to let go of his bike and zip up...
You know what would have been a wonderful ending (Cliff notes version)
The guy rides up on his bike, meets the crippled chica, says what he wants to say, gives an engagement ring..
he attaches her wheelchair to the side of his bike (I don't know what type of bikes are those... u know the one from Indiana Jones and the Last Crusade), anyway... and they ride off in the sunset...
that would have been a hott story...
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he attaches her wheelchair to the side of his bike (I don't know what type of bikes are those... u know the one from Indiana Jones and the Last Crusade), anyway... and they ride off in the sunset...
that would have been a hott story...
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lol omg that ^ is hilarious.
Lajawab--- we need another story.Something with a better ending perhaps.
I read the begining few days ago found very amusing, but cuz of time constraint was unable to read further.
Today read it completely and found it pretty good. :k:
Other thing I noticed, there is a contrast in reaction from two genders.
Girls did’t liked the ending, not cared much about other stuff. They seemed interested only in the ending.
Guys many did’t read whole story. those who did found it interesting. Other then the zipper part 
Moral: The girl was a badrooh who killed the guy
After reading this story, the drama serial aik muhabat soo afsanay clicked my mind...i remember thoese lovely love stories by Asfaq Ahmed with tragic endings..uff...How pathetic but creative at the same time...
wow ...
Kismat di gal way....
I am going to ask PTV producers to make a drama on this story ......not worth a better production ......intna sarri story parhi magar ending :o .....
but guest appearences were great :D
yaar plz try writing some positive story .....
Lajawab...
Very very well written....