beautiful :(
:D…Yaar, is story ko master director hi direct kar sakta hai…Aik apaahij larki ko kis tarha dikhao gay chalta phirta?
Yehi tau maza aur farq hai kitaabon main aur TV main…![]()
Toddytapper: Thank you very very much…
Cuteepie: Thank you…
Had to bring this back up :D
Good story but the end was sad lolz.
But i like ur stroy ;)
impressive:k:
btw Lajawab,i like posts…i like ur views n most of the time i find myself agreeing with u…
Nice story:)
Nilu, Punjabi Kuri and Adil: Thanks for the compliments Peeps...
PK, acha hua yeh sun kay, kay is shahar main aik aur bhi hai jo hamari baat sai raazi hai...:D Thanks...
ok the story was alrite make it more exciting!!!
Very well written :k:
Could someone be nice enough to tell me whats this story’s all about. Koi central idea, koi jist bata day Allah ka banda.
Lajo, would you do the honors…in that case, I 'd be happy to help you with an alternate ending for this story. :–D
Oh lord.... wat the heck.. endin is so sad... i wanna cry :(... err.. Thats why i only i like indian movie.. they atleast end with happiness... :(... Good Job writin it though...
I thought it’s real.
Very well written Lajawab. :k:
But… the end was not good ![]()
omg…u cant do this to us ![]()
*sighzz
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nice story wese
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its not true tho…haina? ![]()
Salma: I’ll keep that in mind next time, k? If there is a next time…![]()
Kino: Thank you…I am glad you like it…
Minu: Let’s see if I can sum it up…They meet on GS, decide to meet in person, the guy dies and the lady is a cripple…k?
Now, let’s hear your alternate ending…Better be good, lots of people waiting…![]()
DC: I know…It was meant to be…Life is like a box of chocolates and these two got the Marzipans…Thanks though…
zeen: Thanks…Glad you liked it…
Rani Pakistani: Unfortunately it’s true…It really happened…
Can you believe it?
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*Originally posted by Lajawab: *
Unfortunately it's true...It really happened...:( Can you believe it?
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Are you serious? I mean is it really a true story? Please say NO :(
its so not
dont lie now ![]()
if it wassss…how wud u know about it ![]()
sayyyyyyy its not true…say itttt ![]()
It is true. Lucky for me i have a T1 connection all the way up here too.
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Re: A Gupshup love story...
Lajawab -
NAi story kub market main aa rahi hay ?
Re: A Gupshup love story...
Lajjo...
Jeez, man, get off the computer. Go take a vacay in Chicago or NYC. Maybe you'll run into your raat ki rani over there in some desi masala shop.