zameen ke rishton se kat gaya yaaro

Make yourself a better person and know who you are before you try and know someone else and expect them to know you…

Azam_1 · May 22, 2002, 11:45pm

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One of ma fav. gahal Chohan jee … espesially these two shers .. aur Jagjit ki awaz main tou yea ghazal sama baandh deti he .. ne ways thanks sharing ..

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I am like an Open Book Except for the few pages of my past, My life is an empty book. It takes the shape of a mystery, To me it does at least. For I cannot tell what happens next, Too many cliffhangers and too much suspense. But its clues all lead eventually to the same place, Unfortunately it does not say where. It only says get the next book, For in this one you’ ve ran out of room.

NikamiJano · May 23, 2002, 1:13am

Amjad bahi yellow pages

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mazak k part one of ma fav

~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

NikamiJano · May 23, 2002, 1:15am

uffffff kia zarori tha k ap be hamari naqal kartey..wohi kahtey jo hu ne

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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

Gemini_the_Great · May 23, 2002, 1:19am

boht khoob :)

Azam_1 · May 23, 2002, 1:27am

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lo jee … bas ye hi sun na reh gaya tha .. janab agar mujhe larkiyon ki naqal karne ka shauq hota tou cindy crowford kia margai thi ??? jo main kisi nikami or nithali ki naqal utarta

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[This message has been edited by Azam#1 (edited May 22, 2002).]

NikamiJano · May 23, 2002, 1:30am

ufffffff totey totey …ab itni be nikami nahi jitna ap smajtey…itna tu kaam karti
soti jagti…khati peeti…

…cindy ki shay hai nikami k agay…

~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

Azam_1 · May 23, 2002, 1:37am

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eik tou apke totey totey bari jaldi hojate hain ..

wese meri tou samajh main aap aaj tak aai hi nahi .. saray whoi kaam karti hain .. jismain nikamiyat jhalakti he .. yaan phir kharcha

well cindy wali baat par main kuch nahi keh sakta cuz I am sure only abt one side .. cindy kam-az-kam dekhi bhali bachi tou he

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NikamiJano · May 23, 2002, 1:46am

oh really…

…fir tu Rub he tuhada muhafiz nikami kia bolay

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poohnchi huwie chez hain ap tu phir

~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

Azam_1 · May 23, 2002, 1:54am

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bohot bohot shukriya mohtarma.. duwain dene ka

aur wese bhi janab mera vote tou cidy ko hi jana tha .. mujhe kia pata ke app cindy ko kis shey se compare kar rahi hain .. age se agar “Abida Parveen” nikal aai tou main kidhar jaonga ???

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so to be at safe side .. cindy ko atlest dekha to he na

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Mirza_Ruswa · May 23, 2002, 6:08am

[quote]
Originally posted by Amjad Chohan:
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Milli hawaoon main urnay ki saza yaaro
Ke main zameen ke rishton se kat gaya yaaro

Wo bekhayal musawir main rassta yaaro
Kahan tha bus main mere us ko rokna yaaro

Mere kalam par zamane ki gard aessi thee
Ke apne bare main kuch bi na likh saka yaaro

Tamam sheher ki jis ki talash main gum tha
Main us ke ghar ka pata kiss se poochta yaaro
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[/quote]

Waah kiyaa ghazal post ki amjad bhaee waah
Aap jaisay aala zauq insaan se hum aisay hi kalam ki tawa'qo rakhtay hain.
Aakhri do sher to la jawaab hain.
Keep it up.

huwe mar k ham jo Ruswa
huwe kiyuN na gharq e darya

Amjad_Chohan · May 23, 2002, 9:20am

Shukreya CC, MAREEZ_E_ISHQ, m_isabah , Azam#1, NikamiJano, GTG, and Mirza Ruswa
thanks for pusandidgi

ye aap ham to bojh hai.n zamiin kaa
zamii.n kaa bojh uThaane vaale kyaa hue

Amjad_Chohan · May 23, 2002, 9:27am

Azam#1 and Nikami… y u ppl fighting…
aur Azam bahiiiii Cindy ko aap Nikami say compare mut kurooo Buri Baat

NikamiJano · May 23, 2002, 1:05pm

wohi tu Amjad bahi wesay ye bataey gha koi k ye cindy hai kon?

aur Azam sahib aik aur baat…ap ka priv dekh k lagta nahi hia k ap shaier ho aur shaeir log asi zuban be bol sakatey…i wish k me ap ko priv main he reply karti but i dono how to reply in priv…sorry…sab Amjad bahi ka qasoor hai bahi be bantey hain aur kuch sikhatey be nahi

..na ye aur na he CHando…aray koi tu sikha day priv main reply kesay

…Amjad bahi peace…ye dunia hia..okkkkk…hum har aik …ahhh

~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

Azam_1 · May 23, 2002, 2:22pm

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Chohan sahab ..mujh masooom main itni himat kahan ke kisi se fight kar sakoon ..

or rahi baat Cindy aur nikami ki tou main aap ki baat se mutafiq hoon … therse no comparission after all .. “kahaan cindy aur kahan nikami”

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Amjad_Chohan · May 23, 2002, 2:24pm

oohh ooh…
main tu sikhata aap seekhti hi nahi hain… aur khud ssochain uger aap yeh sub seekhna shuroon kur dain gi tu wo jo Sunday ka wait kurtay hain , Lasania khaany ko…un ka keya ho ga… wasay aap nay JAVA start ki… ya dill say kihaal nikaal deya acording to my suggestion ?

aur i m very concern with this kay wat sort of language is used by Mr. Azam in pvt…u know khuch cheesoon ki ijazut nahi di ja sukti kissi ko bhi… so Warning for Mr. Azam… be carful Mr… got it? otherwise u will be

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with ( sukhttt gusssay wala ICON )… mazak ki hud!

Azam_1 · May 23, 2002, 3:08pm

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Cindy Crawford is an international model and famous for her killing looks

ne ways …
first of all ..mohtarma izat muab nikami sahiba … aap ko kisne keh dia ke main Shair hoon ?? janab jo ulti seedhi shairi main karta hoon wo tou aaj kal ka har dosra insaan kar raha hota he .. so its cleared now, that me is not a shair at all … and free to use n e kind of language …

secondly .. the pm I sent you was an invitation for you to visit my new thread and give your comments .. I deliberately wrote it in that way, as I was under an impression that you got a very lively sense of humor .. and there only I went wrong ..

now I don’t completely remember wat I wrote … but let me try to recall my memory … hmm I think watever I wrote in that pm was similar to this..

"nikami ji aap kahan mar gai theen ??? janab eik nai nazm likhi he, guzarish he ke aaap isko apne nikame comments se nawaz dain … take care n keep smiling .. "

now nikami jee being a adha-pona shair I always invite ppl to visit ma poetry and give comments, so I can correct ma self in future .. so did I asked you .. now I wasn’t aware at all that ma pm will turn into a big fuss …