--Zakahm Seena Para...

Anonymous_aeee7bc69f288ffbdb12f0990df3ff92 · October 11, 2003, 7:59pm

A touchy sweet Ghazal by someone dunno…

Jo na hona tha wo mujhay khona parha
aaj khokar tujhay zinda rehna para
waqt say jo mila mujhay
wo zakham seena parha

door duniia say teray itna chali ayi hoon
aaj main jism nahi nahi aaj main parchai hoon
har jahaga bheer ka sailaab teray charoon taraf
main apnay aap main main simteei how tanhai hoon
jo bhi haasil howa …paakay khona para…
aaj khokar tyjhay zinda rehna para …

paas hay meray teray satah guzaaray lamhay
kuch adhooray rahay kuch pooray hogay sapnay
bohat sambhaal kay rakhti hoon innn ko seenay main
ubb kiss jahan main meray to hain yehi apnay
yaad karkay jinhain raat din rona parhaa
aaj khokar tujhay zindaa rehna parha…

tujhay hay qasam meray khaabon ko poora karna
rang jo teray chunya thay wohi unn main bharna
ubb inn kajon ki ho anjaan tujh pay chor dia
meray ummed ko tu na ummed matt karna
soona soona meray dil ka koona para
aaj khokar tujhay zinda rehna para…

Jo na hona tha wo mujhay khona parha
aaj khokar tujhay zinda rehna para
waqt say jo mila mujhay
wo zakham seena parha…

Rani_Pakistani · October 11, 2003, 8:01pm

awwww
bohat achi hai ata unkil
zabardast :k:
thanx for sharing na
par pata chalaayein likhi kisne hai

Anonymous_aeee7bc69f288ffbdb12f0990df3ff92 · October 11, 2003, 8:04pm

Ranni tx, but really don't know, the truth is don't want to mention the name :)

Rani_Pakistani · October 11, 2003, 8:40pm

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*Originally posted by ?: *
Ranni tx, but really don't know, the truth is don't want to mention the name :)
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hehehe....thot so :p

dewana_tera · October 11, 2003, 9:37pm

:k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · October 11, 2003, 9:38pm

bohut khoob ata bahii:k:
thanks for sharing:flower1:

nikii · October 11, 2003, 10:17pm

itni sad .. :(

Anonymous_aeee7bc69f288ffbdb12f0990df3ff92 · October 11, 2003, 10:21pm

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*Originally posted by nikii: *
itni sad .. :(
[/QUOTE]
haan shimz hay to sad hi na :(

Rani, Ghazal, DT :)

Koyal · October 12, 2003, 12:28am

wowwww nice one but sad and welcome in poetry section :)

cuteepie · October 12, 2003, 4:38am

:k:

AQ · October 12, 2003, 4:44am

I am sorry i did not like it :) dunno why :-).. it may be a beautiful poetry but I just could not seem to like it.. call me weird, tasteless but I can't convince my heart no more :-/

cecosuni · October 12, 2003, 5:17am

Jo na hona tha wo mujhay khona parha
aaj khokar tujhay zinda rehna para
waqt say jo mila mujhay
wo zakham seena parha...

i can't say any thaning and never be
but i can say only that nice one

Prince_Ali · October 12, 2003, 5:43am

:k:

Lamhay · October 12, 2003, 6:14am

bahut khoob ! gr8

system · October 12, 2003, 10:15am

Re: --Zakahm Seena Para…

:k::k:

Daagh · October 12, 2003, 10:16am

bahot badhiya hai Ata jee :)

Anonymous_aeee7bc69f288ffbdb12f0990df3ff92 · October 12, 2003, 6:10pm

ji haan sad to hay hi, waisay I like sad poetry as well
and thanks for welcoming , where is red carpet ?

Anonymous_aeee7bc69f288ffbdb12f0990df3ff92 · October 12, 2003, 6:11pm

you didn’t had to make a long stroy…just say ‘bohat khoob’ :k:

Anonymous_aeee7bc69f288ffbdb12f0990df3ff92 · October 12, 2003, 6:13pm

I would say your have a nice choice

** Cutepie** thanks for liking!
** prince
vivo
lamhay
Daagh
** thankoooo sab ka shukria for taking time

Koyal · October 12, 2003, 9:14pm

bata k ana tha na wesay hamarey pass red nahi white carpet hia red tu khatra ki nishani na..