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KÆhî ý@$®Úb Káhï kîBàÎå H@ï
waaah bohaat kHoobbbbb
Keya baat hai
wesse Haalaa se yaad aaiya emri cHoTi si (piyaali shee) Bhateeji ka naam bhi Haalaa hai
wohi Chaand ka Haalaa
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**Be-kHudi le gai kahaaN ham ko
Der se intazaar hai apnaa
Jis ko tum Aasmaan kehte ho
So DiloN kaa gHubaar hai apnaa
**
Chando
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g kia baat hia sher ka mood keon nahi…kahin koi Geedar tu tu tu
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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~
Originally posted by Tassneef:
yeh lijyie mukammal Nazm
****Jo dard sisakte huwe HarfoN meiN Dhallaa hai
Shaayad keh yeh AagHosh-e-Judaai meiN pallaa hai
gHam deke kise Fikr-e-Mareez-e-Shab-e-gHam hai
Yeh kon hai jo dard meiN Rass ghol rahaa haiYeh kis ne mere dard ko jeene ki Tallab di
dil kis ke lyie Umr-e-kHizar maaNg rahaa haiHar Roz haiN naye Fikr, har Shab haiN naye gHam
Yaa-Rabb yeh meraa dil hai keh Mehmaan-saraa haiHaiN kis ke badan Des meiN paband-e-Salaasil
Pardes meiN ik rooh Giraftaar-e-balaa haiKeya tumko kHabar hai Rah-e-Maulaa ke Aseero!
tum se mujhe ik Rishtaa-e-JaaN sab se siwaa haiAaa jaate ho karte ho Mulaaqaat Shab-o-Roz
Yeh Silsilaa-e- Rabt-e-Beham Subho Masaaa haiAye Tangi-e-ZindaaN ke sataaye huwe Mehmaan
Waa Chashm hai, Dil baaz, dar-e-Seenaa khula haiTumne meri Jalwat meiN naye Rang bhare haiN
Tumne meri tanhaaiyoN meiN saath diyaa haiTum chaandni RaatoN meiN mere Saath rahe ho
tum se hi meri Naqrai-Sub’hoN ki Ziyaa haiKis din mujhe tum yaad nahi aaye magar Aaaj
Keya Roz-e-Qayaamat hai! ik Hashar bapaa haiYaadoN ke Musaafir ho TammanaaoN ke Paikar
Bhar dete ho dil, phir bhi wohi aik kHalaa haiSeene se lagaa lene ki Hasrat nahiN miTti
pehloo meiN biThaane ki tarhap Had se siwaa haiYa Rab yeh Gadaa tere hi dar ka hai Sawaali
Jo daan milaa teri hi chokhaT se milaa haiGum-gashtaa Aseeraan-e-Rah-e-Maulaa ki kHaatir
Mudaat se Faqeer aik Duaa maaNg rahaa haiJis Rah meiN wo khoye gaye us Raah pe Gadaa aik
Kashkol liye chaltaa hai Lab pe yeh Sadaa haikHairaat kar ab inki Rihaai mere Aaaqaa!!!
Kashkol meiN bhar de jo mere Dil meiN bharaa haiMaiN tujh se na maangooN to na maangooNga kissi se
Main teraa hooN , tu meraa kHudaa meraa kHudaa hai****
Bohat he khobsurat gazal hai thanks…
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4 sharing
~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~
Originally posted by NikamiJano:
** Bohat he khobsurat gazal hai thanks…http://www3.pak.org/gupshup/smilies/smile.gif
4 sharing
**
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shukriaa Nikammi
**Be-kHudi le gai kahaaN ham ko
Der se intazaar hai apnaa
Jis ko tum Aasmaan kehte ho
So DiloN kaa gHubaar hai apnaa
**
Originally posted by Tassneef:
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shukriaa Nikammi
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shukria se kaam kia chalnay wala ap ki baqie ki gazalin kahan..
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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~
Originally posted by NikamiJano:
** shukria se kaam kia chalnay wala ap ki baqie ki gazalin kahan..http://www3.pak.org/gupshup/smilies/smile.gif
**
hehee yaar wo
maiN zara pareshaan tha aik dost ki kammi hai naa
wo nayaab hain na wo bechaari enter nahi ho paa rahi GS per unke nick ko patta nahi keya hogaiya hai to mujhe bohaat ajeeb sa mehsoos ho raha hoga keh wo bhi teen roz se koshish akr rahi hongi hamare saath shareek hone ki magar na aa paane ki wjaah se kitni bore ho rahi hongi?
unka Nick hi nahin mil rahaa Pak.org waalon ko wo jab bhi enter hone ki koshish karti hain to aa jaataa hai keh User not found
aaj mujhe unka email aaiya thaa to patta chala
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hehee wesse allah na akre aapke saath ho, magar yaqeen kijyie, aap, chohaan bhai, chand chehra kissi ke satah bhi hotaa to mujhe afsoss hotaa
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can you do something for her?
chalein amin koi ghazal aapko likh detaa hooN
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**Be-kHudi le gai kahaaN ham ko
Der se intazaar hai apnaa
Jis ko tum Aasmaan kehte ho
So DiloN kaa gHubaar hai apnaa
**
[This message has been edited by Tassneef (edited July 19, 2002).]
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Dolti Dag-magaati si naao
pi gai aa ke saare Saagar ko
kHushk perhoN meiN jaan parhne lagi
dekh kar roop ke samandar ko
Behar pyaase ki justajoo meiN hai
hai Sadaf ki talaash gauhar ko
Koi to neem-waa dareechoN se
dekhe us rat-jage ke manzar ko
Aik dewi hai muntazir ‘FaarigH’
Waa kiye paT sajaaye mandar ko
**
ab aapke Img aur Kalaam ka Muntazir
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**Be-kHudi le gai kahaaN ham ko
Der se intazaar hai apnaa
Jis ko tum Aasmaan kehte ho
So DiloN kaa gHubaar hai apnaa
**
[This message has been edited by Tassneef (edited July 18, 2002).]
Originally posted by Tassneef:
**ab aapke Img aur Kalaam ka Muntazir
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(nice img and shers)
tu ja raha tha loat k mahmaa'N ki tarha bikhRa huwa tha dil teRay samaaN ki tarhakesay khiinchaY ye teeR k ye hai tu maiN be hooN
paywast hai ragoo maiN raG-e-jaaN ki tarha
ik chaap se thei raat kahiN jaaN k aa’s paas
dil neem wa rahaa daR-e-imkaaN ki tarha
jesaY tumaam jism maiN miti se bhaaR gaye
dukh be-Amma tha gaard k toofaaN ki tarha
likh hum ne dya aur img ap ka lay lea theek…cuz hamin aisa img nahi karna ata..i mean java wala
~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~
Originally posted by NikamiJano:
tu ja raha tha loat k mahmaa'N ki tarha bikhRa huwa tha dil teRay samaaN ki tarha
**
(nice img and shers)kesay khiinchaY ye teeR k ye hai tu maiN be hooN
paywast hai ragoo maiN raG-e-jaaN ki tarhaik chaap se thei raat kahiN jaaN k aa’s paas
dil neem wa rahaa daR-e-imkaaN ki tarhajesaY tumaam jism maiN miti se bhaaR gaye
dukh be-Amma tha gaard k toofaaN ki tarhalikh hum ne dya aur img ap ka lay lea theek…cuz hamin aisa img nahi karna ata..i mean java wala
**
Koi baat nahiN
But aaapki Choicee bohaat hi acHi haai mashaallah
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** Unko Shikwaa hai keh Hijr meiN kiouN Tarhpaiyaa saari raat
Jinki kHaatir Raat luTaa di, Chain na paiyaa saari Raat
Un ke AndeshoN meiN dil ne kaisse kaisse ghabraa kar
seene ke Deewaar-o-dar se Sar Takraiyaaa saari Raat
kHoob sajji YaadoN ki Mehfil, MehmaanoN ne taape Haath
Ham ne apnaa Koilaa Koilaa, dil dehkaiyaa saari raat
Un se Shikwaa kaisaa jinki Yaad ne beTh ke Pehloo meiN
saari Raat AankhoN meiN kaaTi, dard BiTayaa saari raat
Un se Shikayaat kis mounh se ho jin ke hoN Ehsaan bohat
Jinki komal Yaad ne dukhtaa dil sehlaiyaa saari raat
Gard-alood tha patta patta, kalli kalli kajlaai hui
TooT ke YaadeiN barsiN, har booTaa nehlaiyaa saari Raat
Rotey rotey seene per sar rakh ker so gai unki Yaad
Kon Piyaa thaa? kon Premi? Bhaid na paiyaa saari Raat
Wo Yaad aaye jinke Aaansoo they gHam ki kHaamosh kathaa
Mere saamne beTh ke roye, dukh na bataiyaa saari Raat
Wo Yaad aayye jinke Aaansoo ponchne waala koi na thaa
soojhey Nain dikhaye apne aur rulaiyaa saari Raat
Bachey bhookey giriyaaN tarsaaN, deepak ki Lo larzaaN larzaaN
KuTiyaa meiN Iflaas ke Bhoot kaa nachaa Sayaa saari raat
AuroN ke dukh dard meiN tu kiouN Na-Haque Jaan gaNwaataa hai
Tujhko, keya koi, beshak tarhpey MaaN kaa Jaayaa saari Raat
Subh-e-Saadiq per SideeqoN ka Imaan nahiN Dolaa
Andhi Raat ke ghor andheroN ne behkaiyaa saari Raat
RaatoN ko kHudaa se pyaar ki Lo aur Sub’ho ButoN se Yaaraane
Nadaan GaNwaa beThey din ko jo Yaar Kamayaa saari Raat **
itni acHi Ghazal hai keh bass likhte likhte mukammal hi likh gaiyaa
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**Be-kHudi le gai kahaaN ham ko
Der se intazaar hai apnaa
Jis ko tum Aasmaan kehte ho
So DiloN kaa gHubaar hai apnaa
**
Originally posted by Tassneef:
**
Koi baat nahiN
But aaapki Choicee bohaat hi acHi haai mashaallahhttp://www3.pak.org/gupshup/smilies/smile.gif
** Unko Shikwaa hai keh Hijr meiN kiouN Tarhpaiyaa saari raat Jinki kHaatir Raat luTaa di, Chain na paiyaa saari RaatUn ke AndeshoN meiN dil ne kaisse kaisse ghabraa kar
seene ke Deewaar-o-dar se Sar Takraiyaaa saari RaatkHoob sajji YaadoN ki Mehfil, MehmaanoN ne taape Haath
Ham ne apnaa Koilaa Koilaa, dil dehkaiyaa saari raatUn se Shikwaa kaisaa jinki Yaad ne beTh ke Pehloo meiN
saari Raat AankhoN meiN kaaTi, dard BiTayaa saari raatUn se Shikayaat kis mounh se ho jin ke hoN Ehsaan bohat
Jinki komal Yaad ne dukhtaa dil sehlaiyaa saari raatGard-alood tha patta patta, kalli kalli kajlaai hui
TooT ke YaadeiN barsiN, har booTaa nehlaiyaa saari RaatRotey rotey seene per sar rakh ker so gai unki Yaad
Kon Piyaa thaa? kon Premi? Bhaid na paiyaa saari RaatWo Yaad aaye jinke Aaansoo they gHam ki kHaamosh kathaa
Mere saamne beTh ke roye, dukh na bataiyaa saari RaatWo Yaad aayye jinke Aaansoo ponchne waala koi na thaa
soojhey Nain dikhaye apne aur rulaiyaa saari RaatBachey bhookey giriyaaN tarsaaN, deepak ki Lo larzaaN larzaaN
KuTiyaa meiN Iflaas ke Bhoot kaa nachaa Sayaa saari raatAuroN ke dukh dard meiN tu kiouN Na-Haque Jaan gaNwaataa hai
Tujhko, keya koi, beshak tarhpey MaaN kaa Jaayaa saari RaatSubh-e-Saadiq per SideeqoN ka Imaan nahiN Dolaa
Andhi Raat ke ghor andheroN ne behkaiyaa saari RaatRaatoN ko kHudaa se pyaar ki Lo aur Sub’ho ButoN se Yaaraane
Nadaan GaNwaa beThey din ko jo Yaar Kamayaa saari Raat **itni acHi Ghazal hai keh bass likhte likhte mukammal hi likh gaiyaa
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thanks and bohat he achi likhi hai k ab is k leay itni tafseel wali kia gazal dhondhi jaiey…2 lufzooN main he
pichhalaa pahar thaa hijr ki shab kaa jaagtaa rab sotaa insaaN taaroN ki chaa'ooN meiN koi "Firaq" saa moti pirotaa thaaand thanks 4 liking ma gazal ..
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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~
Originally posted by NikamiJano:
pichhalaa pahar thaa hijr ki shab kaa jaagtaa rab sotaa insaaN taaroN ki chaa'ooN meiN koi "Firaq" saa moti pirotaa thaa
** thanks and bohat he achi likhi hai k ab is k leay itni tafseel wali kia gazal dhondhi jaiey…2 lufzooN main heand thanks 4 liking ma gazal ..
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**
Nice Sher (my favorite Poet faraaz)Thanx
Shukriaa Nikaammi Saahibaa
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** kon Rah-e-Firaaq se lauT ke phir naa aa sakaa
Kiss ke naqoosh reh gaye be-mahal parhey**
**Be-kHudi le gai kahaaN ham ko
Der se intazaar hai apnaa
Jis ko tum Aasmaan kehte ho
So DiloN kaa gHubaar hai apnaa
**
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Originally posted by Tassneef:
**
Originally posted by NikamiJano:
Nice Sher (my favorite Poet faraaz)Thanx
Shukriaa Nikaammi Saahibaahttp://www3.pak.org/gupshup/smilies/smile.gif
** kon Rah-e-Firaaq se lauT ke phir naa aa sakaa
Kiss ke naqoosh reh gaye be-mahal parhey****
~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~
Originally posted by NikamiJano:
** firaaq-e-diidaa huuN maiN vasl-e-yaar baaqi hai
KhizaaN rasiidaa chaman ki bahaaR baaqi hai**
yeh aapko Firaaq yaad agaiya ya aaagaiN ..KiouN
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**Meri ChaahteiN meri Qurbatei jisse yaad aain qadam qadam
to wo sab se chup ke Libaas-e-shab meiN lipaT ke aah-o-bukaa kare
Kabhi taiy kare younhi soch soch meiN wo Firaaq ke Faasle
Mere peecHey Aaa ke dabbay dabbey meri AaankheiN mooNd hansaa kare**
**Be-kHudi le gai kahaaN ham ko
Der se intazaar hai apnaa
Jis ko tum Aasmaan kehte ho
So DiloN kaa gHubaar hai apnaa
**
Originally posted by Tassneef:
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**Meri ChaahteiN meri Qurbatei jisse yaad aain qadam qadam
to wo sab se chup ke Libaas-e-shab meiN lipaT ke aah-o-bukaa kareKabhi taiy kare younhi soch soch meiN wo Firaaq ke Faasle
Mere peecHey Aaa ke dabbay dabbey meri AaankheiN mooNd hansaa kare****
a gaya nahi a gaayeen..
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firaaq-e-diidaa huuN maiN vasl-e-yaar baqi hai KhizaaN rasiidaa chaman kii bahaar baaqii hai~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~
Originally posted by NikamiJano:
** a gaya nahi a gaayeen..http://www3.pak.org/gupshup/smilies/wink.gif
firaaq-e-diidaa huuN maiN vasl-e-yaar baqi hai KhizaaN rasiidaa chaman kii bahaar baaqii hai**
yeh aik hi sher klo dobaaraa ..
lagta hai badaam mehnge ho gaye HaiN
Originally posted by Tassneef:
** yeh aik hi sher klo dobaaraa ..
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ye sara firaaq ne kaam kharab kia
~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~
Originally posted by NikamiJano:
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ye sara firaaq ne kaam kharab kia
**
To aap Firaaq ko bhgaaiN..wassal ko laaiN
maslaan aisse
**yeh na thi hamaari qismat ke wisaal-e-yaar hotaa
agar aur jeete rehte to yahi intezaar hotaa **
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Originally posted by Tassneef:
** To aap Firaaq ko bhgaaiN..wassal ko laaiN
maslaan aisse
yeh na thi hamaari qismat ke wisaal-e-yaar hotaa
agar aur jeete rehte to yahi intezaar hotaa **
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bikhaR gaya hooN teRa intzaaR kaaartey huweY
~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~
Originally posted by NikamiJano:
** teRay visaal k lamhaY shumaaR kaaartey huweY
bikhaR gaya hooN teRa intzaaR kaaartey huweY**
waaaaah waaaah bohaat kHOOOb maazaa agaaiyaa
waah
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Rahaa kHwaab mein unse Shab bhar Wassaal
mere bakHt jaage maiN soyaaa keyaa!!!