Ay khuda! ab to usko jhuumta badal kar de
yun wo barse ke mere pyaar ko jal thal kar de
mere mehbuub ke pairon ko jo chinta choomay
aese chintay ko chanakti huwee payal kar de
kaese mumkin hae ke mae hashr ke suraj se daruun
mujhpe saaya jo mere yaar ka aanchal karde
ae mere husn-o-khayal uss ko sajane ke liye
subah ko gaaza bana raat ko kajal kar de
aaj phir jheel kinare mujhe tarpata hae
kaash is chaand ko paani mei koi hall karde
Ay muqaddar! mujhe tardpayega aakhir kab tak
ya meri baat samajh ya mujhe pagal kar de
wo mujhe kar to raha hae nazar-andaz Qateel
is ko bhi waqt zamane se na ojhal kar de
Re: yun wo barse ke mere pyaar ko jal thal karde
awesome 
thanks for sharing 
muddii
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Re: yun wo barse ke mere pyaar ko jal thal karde
Ay khuda! ab to usko jhuumta badal kar de
yun wo barse ke mere pyaar ko jal thal kar de
mere mehbuub ke pairon ko jo chinta choomay
aese chintay ko chanakti huwee payal kar de
kaese mumkin hae ke mae hashr ke suraj se daruun
mujhpe saaya jo mere yaar ka aanchal karde
ae mere husn-o-khayal uss ko sajane ke liye
subah ko gaaza bana raat ko kajal kar de
aaj phir jheel kinare mujhe tarpata hae
kaash is chaand ko paani mei koi hall karde
Ay muqaddar! mujhe tardpayega aakhir kab tak
ya meri baat samajh ya mujhe pagal kar de
wo mujhe kar to raha hae nazar-andaz Qateel
is ko bhi waqt zamane se na ojhal kar de
Very nice choice:)
Re: yun wo barse ke mere pyaar ko jal thal karde
JJW Kia He Baat Hai Apki Choice Ki..
Re: yun wo barse ke mere pyaar ko jal thal karde
^^ I think it is ***husn-e-khayal.
Nice Poem though :k:
Re: yun wo barse ke mere pyaar ko jal thal karde
bohat khoooooooooooob jw wali superb sharing
seem
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Re: yun wo barse ke mere pyaar ko jal thal karde
excellent.......:)
seem
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Re: yun wo barse ke mere pyaar ko jal thal karde
mere mehbuub ke pairon ko jo chinta choomay
aese chintay ko chanakti huwee payal kar de
......Chinta ?????????????? whats that?