YuN dost saarey apney apney rastey badal gaey

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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YuN dost saarey apney apney rastey badal gaey
kuch peechey ruk gaey to kuch aagey nikal gaey

haalaat ki dhoop zaraa si deir ko teiz kya hui
jitney wafaa ke peikar they saarey pighal gaey

waadoN ke taarey raatoN sey baahar na jaa sakey
iraadoN ke din nikalney sey pehley hi dhal gaey

wafaaoN ke rang shabnam ke qatroN ney dho deeye
mohabbat ke phool jazboN ki ‘shiddat’ sey jal gaey

taanoN ke teer dunya ki kamaanoN pe jab charrhey
sabar ke daaman haathon sey yak’dam phical gaey

aaNkheiN khuleiN to khaaboN ko bura laga magar
kuch deir wo reh ke muztarib khud hi behal gaey

pehley pehal to ajeeb lagey badley huwey chehrey
phir yuN huwa ke waqt ke saath hum bhi sambhal gaey

By: Amal
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Amal,

again a great piece of work. pahla aur aakhiri sher to mujhe behad pasand aaya. aur ye sher bhii lajawaab hai

aaNkheiN khuleiN to khaaboN ko bura laga magar
kuch deir wo reh ke muztarib khud hi behal gaey

daad kubul karo..good work....

Pramod

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wah.. :flower1:

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haalaat ki dhoop zaraa si deir ko teiz kya hui
jitney wafaa ke peikar they saarey pighal gaey

wafaaoN ke rang shabnam ke qatroN ney dho deeye
mohabbat ke phool jazboN ki ‘shiddat’ sey jal gaey

aaNkheiN khuleiN to khaaboN ko bura laga magar
kuch deir wo reh ke muztarib khud hi behal gaey

pehley pehal to ajeeb lagey badley huwey chehrey
phir yuN huwa ke waqt ke saath hum bhi sambhal gaey**

Ghazal mein alfaaz ka intekhaab bahut hi umdaggi se kiya gaya hai…
Bahut khoob …:k:

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wah..

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BEAUTIFUL, :k::k:

Thanx 4 sharing.. :slight_smile:

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bohtt khoob amal. veryy touchy and sensible choice in words selection. keep it up.

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Hmmm totally dif from your pen but its Good:-)
Thanks for sharing

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Re: YuN dost saarey apney apney rastey badal gaey

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Amal: *

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YuN dost saarey apney apney rastey badal gaey
kuch peechey ruk gaey to kuch aagey nikal gaey

waadoN ke taarey raatoN sey baahar na jaa sakey
iraadoN ke din nikalney sey pehley hi dhal gaey

aaNkheiN khuleiN to khaaboN ko bura laga magar
kuch deir wo reh ke muztarib khud hi behal gaey

pehley pehal to ajeeb lagey badley huwey chehrey
phir yuN huwa ke waqt ke saath hum bhi sambhal gaey

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[/QUOTE]

Beautiful wesay tu sari gazal he achi hia but last 2 sher awsome thanks 4 posting ur new one..:)

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Re: YuN dost saarey apney apney rastey badal gaey

bohat khoob :k:

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boht hee khoob hei:)

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:hehe: is bar ghazal ke koe shamat neheen aee:hehe:
legtah hei gul tumko ghazal samgh a gei hei ya pher tumhare tabiyat kharab hei koe long commentry nehen ke :stuck_out_tongue:
soweyyy mazaq ker rehe :hehe:

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Pramod bhai mujhey bohat khushi hui ke ghazal aap ko pasand aai, Thanx.

Amarbail, poetry is all about playing with words. I am glad to note that you
liked my arrangment of words.

**XkanwalX, baziger, *** Vivacious *, jasmeen, chand_chehra and
Masoom Muskaan, is ghazal ko saraahaney ke leeye aap sab dostoN
ka be’had shukriya:flower1:

Paglee thanx for liking the ghazal, but its not a new one:)

Gul many thanx for your words, but I would certainly love to know
what’s “totally dif” about this ghazal.

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Not Good Guriya :~)

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[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Amal: *
**Gul* many thanx for your words, but I would certainly love to know
what's "totally dif" about this ghazal.
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:-O humaiN tou different lag rahii hay iss waastay kaha thaa ,
'totally dif style'
Aap nay likhi hay issliye aap behtar samajhtay hongay:~)

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:k: Keep it up

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:smash: :smash: purani thei tu hamari nazron se keon nahi guzri phir :teary2:

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Bohat He Khobsorat likha hai aap nay ...Aesay he likhtay rahiye humare liye ..Thanx :)

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nice :)

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Beautiful Amal jee and nice to see you back in full swing again....