YuN dost saarey apney apney rastey badal gaey

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by GuL-e-Tasbeeh: *

:-O humaiN tou different lag rahii hay iss waastay kaha thaa ,
'totally dif style'
Aap nay likhi hay issliye aap behtar samajhtay hongay:~)
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I would still like to repeat my question as to what's "totally dif" in this
ghazal. I hope you would oblige me this time:)

Dilsay thanx for liking the ghazal:). Also many thanx to
XChorniX, koiDost and Black Mamba:)

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Re: YuN dost saarey apney apney rastey badal gaey

Wonderful :k:

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gr8:k: and thanks for sharing:flower1:

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wah,
ehsaas ko alfaas me daalna koyi aap se seekhe.
I couldnt have said it better.

behad khoob Amal saahib. :flower1:

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Re: YuN dost saarey apney apney rastey badal gaey

sigh:teary3:

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superb :k:

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lajavab:k::k:

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Amal: *

I would still like to repeat my question as to what's "totally dif" in this
ghazal. I hope you would oblige me this time:)

[/QUOTE]

Oho kahaa tou hay i was talking about Ghazal style and nothing else naa :-)
kyaa aap ko nahiN lagtaa keh this one is different ?

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:k:

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Re: YuN dost saarey apney apney rastey badal gaey

Bohat KhooB
:k:
its always nice to read you

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Amal bahut zabardast hamesha ki tarhan ap ka kia kehna! gr8!!

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Re: YuN dost saarey apney apney rastey badal gaey

Amal, i was digging for good stuff in poetry forum. i saw this thread and thanks to you tht i am not looking for any stuff anymore may be for another few hrs…hehehe

khair i really liked the way you have expressed ur emotions and how u have given words to your thoughts. few years back faiz ahmed faiz ko bohat perrha yeh gazal perhhi tu aik poem yaad a gyee un ki. aik do ishar sunnaata hoon us kay.

Koi Aashiq kissi mehbooba sey…

**Gulshan-e-yaad **mein ger aaj ** dam-e-baad-e-saba **
phir sey chahey key **gul fishan **ho to ho janey do
**umer-rafta **key kissi taaq pey basra hova derd
phir sey chahey key **feroozan **ho tu ho janey do

essi terh ki aik taqrar end pey bhi hey.

aur gerdish-ayyaam ki gerd ko dhooney key lye
tum sey goya hoon dam-e-deed ju meri palkien
tu ju chahoo tu sunno ju na chahoo na sunno
aur ju herf kerien gureizaan mugh sey aankhien
tum ju chahoo tu kaho ju na chahoo na kahoo

anyways, i realy liked ur gazal. :k:

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Bohat Khoob Amal...
Thanks for sharing :)

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zabardust bahot khoobsorat :~)

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bohut khoob:k::k:
thanks amal bahii:)