yeh jo aarzuu-e-shikast hai kahiN qarz-e-jaan hi chukaa na de...

[chand_chehra]

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mera aks, aks bikhar gayaa, mujhe aaiine ki sazaa na de
maiN bujhaa chukaa hun nigaah-o-dil, mujhe raushni ki du’aa na de

yehi shart Tehri tiri agar, koi kaise qeemat adaa kare!
yeh jo aarzuu-e-shikast hai, kahiN qarz-e-jaaN hi chukaa na de

na khabar hi teri lage mujhe, na pata hi apna chale mujhe
yeh jo silsila hai talaash kaa, use roz-o-shab ki hawaa na de

yeh talaatum_aashnaa kashtiyaaN, yeh andheraa bai’Hr-e-vujood kaa
yahaan mauj Khud se hai be-Khabar, yeh jazeera koi basaa na de

na vo man rahaa, na vo tan rahaa, na vo mausamoN ka jatan rahaa
ram-e-aahuu sarf-e-Khotan rahaa, tu fareb koi nayaa na de

[Bhooli_Bisri]

lajvaaab kavish

[WiseGuy]

Re: yeh jo aarzuu-e-shikast hai kahiN qarz-e-jaan hi chukaa na de…

*Originally posted by chand_chehra: *

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mera aks, aks bikhar gayaa, mujhe aaiine ki sazaa na de
maiN bujhaa chukaa hun nigaah-o-dil, mujhe raushni ki du’aa na de

yehi shart Tehri tiri agar, koi kaise qeemat adaa kare!
yeh jo aarzuu-e-shikast hai, kahiN qarz-e-jaaN hi chukaa na de

na khabar hi teri lage mujhe, na pata hi apna chale mujhe
yeh jo silsila hai talaash kaa, use roz-o-shab ki hawaa na de

yeh talaatum_aashnaa kashtiyaaN, yeh andheraa bai’Hr-e-vujood kaa
yahaan mauj Khud se hai be-Khabar, yeh jazeera koi basaa na de

na vo man rahaa, na vo tan rahaa, na vo mausamoN ka jatan rahaa
ram-e-aahuu sarf-e-Khotan rahaa, tu fareb koi nayaa na de

*Bohat khoob Chandoo jee, :k:
Hamesha ki tarah lajawaaab,
Thanks for sharing

[_Nazish]

na vo man rahaa, na vo tan rahaa, na vo mausamoN ka jatan rahaa
ram-e-aahuu sarf-e-Khotan rahaa, tu fareb koi nayaa na de

aapki tara aapki ye khawahish bhee bohat khubsurat hai :k:

[Azad]

bohut khoob

[guybrush]

goodie :k:

[nikii]

bhut khoob chandoo :k:

[NikamiJano]

Re: yeh jo aarzuu-e-shikast hai kahiN qarz-e-jaan hi chukaa na de...

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by chand_chehra: *

mera aks, aks bikhar gayaa, mujhe aaiine ki sazaa na de
maiN bujhaa chukaa hun nigaah-o-dil, mujhe raushni ki du'aa na de

yehi shart Tehri tiri agar, koi kaise qeemat adaa kare!
yeh jo aarzuu-e-shikast hai, kahiN qarz-e-jaaN hi chukaa na de

na khabar hi teri lage mujhe, na pata hi apna chale mujhe
yeh jo silsila hai talaash kaa, use roz-o-shab ki hawaa na de

yeh talatum_aashnaa kashtiyaN ye andheraa bai'Hr-e-vujood ka
yahan mauj Khud se hai be-Khabar yeh jazeera koi basaa na de

na vo man raha na vo tan raha na vo mausamoN ka jatan rahaa
ram-e-aahuu sarf-e-Khotan raha tu fareb koi nayaa na de
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Beautiful chando g thanks 4 sharin

[Dragon_King]

nice :k:

[superglue]

Re: yeh jo aarzuu-e-shikast hai kahiN qarz-e-jaan hi chukaa na de…

*Originally posted by chand_chehra: *

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yehi shart Tehri tiri agar, koi kaise qeemat adaa kare!
yeh jo aarzuu-e-shikast hai, kahiN qarz-e-jaaN hi chukaa na de

berry nice

[Khanzada]

Re: yeh jo aarzuu-e-shikast hai kahiN qarz-e-jaan hi chukaa na de…

*Originally posted by chand_chehra: *

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yehi shart Thehri tiri agar, koi kaise qeemat adaa kare!
yeh jo aarzuu-e-shikast hai, kahiN qarz-e-jaaN hi chukaa na de

na vo man rahaa, na vo tan rahaa, na vo mausamoN ka jatan rahaa
ram-e-aahuu sarf-e-Khotan rahaa, tu fareb koi nayaa na de

Bauhat Khub! :k:

[Mirza_Ruswa]

Salaam Maah

kaisee hain aap?

Ghazal itni behtareen post ki hai k majbooran mujhay jawab post karna hi paRa.

Aap k intekhab ( of course i m talking about poetry) k hum hamesha se qayal thay ab woh yaqeen aur pukhta ho gaya.

issi zameen maiN ghaliban shakeel badyuuni marhoom ki baRi mashhoor ghazal hai uss ka maqta kuchh yuun hai:

Woh Uthay haiN lay k khumm o subbu Arey O Shakeel kahaN hai tuu
Tera jaam lenay ko bazm maiM koee aur haath baRhaa na day .

Saheb e ghazal yaani shayer saheb Mustahaq e midah thehray aur aap mustahaq e Shukriya. k aap k tawassut say inta umda kalam Parhnay ka moqa mila.

[Amal]

Re: yeh jo aarzuu-e-shikast hai kahiN qarz-e-jaan hi chukaa na de…

*Originally posted by chand_chehra: *

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yehi shart Tehri tiri agar, koi kaise qeemat adaa kare!
yeh jo aarzuu-e-shikast hai, kahiN qarz-e-jaaN hi chukaa na de

na khabar hi teri lage mujhe, na pata hi apna chale mujhe
yeh jo silsila hai talaash kaa, use roz-o-shab ki hawaa na de

yeh talaatum_aashnaa kashtiyaaN, yeh andheraa bai’Hr-e-vujood kaa
yahaan mauj Khud se hai be-Khabar, yeh jazeera koi basaa na de

CC bohat hi zabardast ghazal hey. Its simply amazing:k:…beautiful choice:)

[Paglee]

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Mirza Ruswa: *
Salaam Maah

kaisee hain aap?

Ghazal itni behtareen post ki hai k majbooran mujhay jawab post karna hi paRa.

Aap k intekhab ( of course i m talking about poetry) k hum hamesha se qayal thay ab woh yaqeen aur pukhta ho gaya.

issi zameen maiN ghaliban shakeel badyuuni marhoom ki baRi mashhoor ghazal hai uss ka maqta kuchh yuun hai:

Woh Uthay haiN lay k khumm o subbu Arey O Shakeel kahaN hai tuu
Tera jaam lenay ko bazm maiM koee aur haath baRhaa na day .

Saheb e ghazal yaani shayer saheb Mustahaq e midah thehray aur aap mustahaq e Shukriya. k aap k tawassut say inta umda kalam Parhnay ka moqa mila.
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salam Sham uncle kesay hain ap..aur kaha they ap itnay dino se any way welcome back......:)..aur sab theek hia na..:)

[Pramod]

yehi shart Tehri tiri agar, koi kaise qeemat adaa kare!
yeh jo aarzuu-e-shikast hai, kahiN qarz-e-jaaN hi chukaa na de

wah..beautiful.
thanks for sharing, chand ji..

[chand_chehra]

*Originally posted by ~Nazish~: *
na vo man rahaa, na vo tan rahaa, na vo mausamoN ka jatan rahaa
ram-e-aahuu sarf-e-Khotan rahaa, tu fareb koi nayaa na de

aapki tara aapki ye khawahish bhee bohat khubsurat hai :k:

thanks

[chand_chehra]

*Originally posted by Mirza Ruswa: *
Salaam Maah

**w salaam sham uncle **

kaisee hain aap?
** main bilkul theek .. apkasay hain **

Ghazal itni behtareen post ki hai k majbooran mujhay jawab post karna hi paRa.

Aap k intekhab ( of course i m talking about poetry) k hum hamesha se qayal thay ab woh yaqeen aur pukhta ho gaya.

thanks so much for repling

Woh Uthay haiN lay k khumm o subbu Arey O Shakeel kahaN hai tuu
Tera jaam lenay ko bazm maiM koee aur haath baRhaa na day .

Saheb e ghazal yaani shayer saheb Mustahaq e midah thehray aur aap mustahaq e Shukriya. k aap k tawassut say inta umda kalam Parhnay ka moqa mila.

thanks everyyyyyyy1

[WiseGuy]

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Mirza Ruswa: *
Salaam Maah

kaisee hain aap?

Ghazal itni behtareen post ki hai k majbooran mujhay jawab post karna hi paRa.

Aap k intekhab ( of course i m talking about poetry) k hum hamesha se qayal thay ab woh yaqeen aur pukhta ho gaya.

issi zameen maiN ghaliban shakeel badyuuni marhoom ki baRi mashhoor ghazal hai uss ka maqta kuchh yuun hai:

Woh Uthay haiN lay k khumm o subbu Arey O Shakeel kahaN hai tuu
Tera jaam lenay ko bazm maiM koee aur haath baRhaa na day .

Saheb e ghazal yaani shayer saheb Mustahaq e midah thehray aur aap mustahaq e Shukriya. k aap k tawassut say inta umda kalam Parhnay ka moqa mila.
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Salaam Shaam Sahab,
Aaaj kafi arsay kay baad aapko dekha bohat acha laga,
Ummed qavi hai keh aap ke deedar hota rahay ga aur hum aap ki achi achi baaton say mustafeed hotay rahain gay. Aameeen
Was'Salaam

[Dilsay]

Very nice.....

[superglue]

*Originally posted by Mirza Ruswa: *
Salaam Maah

kaisee hain aap?

Ghazal itni behtareen post ki hai k majbooran mujhay jawab post karna hi paRa.

Aap k intekhab ( of course i m talking about poetry) k hum hamesha se qayal thay ab woh yaqeen aur pukhta ho gaya.

issi zameen maiN ghaliban shakeel badyuuni marhoom ki baRi mashhoor ghazal hai uss ka maqta kuchh yuun hai:

Woh Uthay haiN lay k khumm o subbu Arey O Shakeel kahaN hai tuu
Tera jaam lenay ko bazm maiM koee aur haath baRhaa na day .

Saheb e ghazal yaani shayer saheb Mustahaq e midah thehray aur aap mustahaq e Shukriya. k aap k tawassut say inta umda kalam Parhnay ka moqa mila.

Amma mian sham o sehar
kaysay hain baray miaan ?
kam dhanda kaysa chal raha hai ?
aur aunty jaan kay jutay main kuch narmi aiye ya vohi pehlay jaysi sakhti aur karaghtagi pai jati hai…